too simple of a script, the match cut wasn't very smooth, if anything put a longer dissolve, but it wasn't even lined up very well. and put some music when its chasing, audio is more than half of what makes a good film, it adds to the suspense. just a few things i notcied. good luck in the future.
Be quiet, please. If you don't like a video, you don't need to hi caps lock and type expletives. And don't judge a video based on its production value. What didn't u like about the actual video (story, dialogue, etc.)?
Oh, btw, check out Homeless: a Tale of Love. We appreciate any support we can get.
Incredibly striking. I didn't see that coming at all! My only suggestion would be to work on the audio, and I know that's been said, and I know that's definitely one of the most difficult elements in 24 hours. But, other than that, absolutely stunning.
Check out our submission "Every Night - Apple Insomnia Film Festival 2007" and tell us what you think.
three...Second, Your sound is terrible, I had to turn it down on bus and turn it up outside..Third, where's your lighting??? Lastly, your ending, ok so maybe he didn't rape her, but then you guys decide to throw in a creepy smirk at the end....Guys wheres the direction in that??? I don't think you should win, but a solid top 25 finish is in order....
im well aware of all the issues in the video.. after the bus scene was shot, my friend blair who was recording sound got hit by a car who ran a stoplight. hes fine, but we had to go to the hospital, the minidisc recorder we had for audio was broken, so we had huge sound issues later when we finally got a chance to shoot the other outdoors scene. between that and the whole 24 hour thing, im happy with how it turned out. thanks for your comments though.
I'm gunna b honest, I liked it but, there were a couple of things you could have fixed. First off it was too long, this story could have been told in one - two minutes not
I thought it was a great thriller...but I think they said something in the Terms and Conditions about it needing to be anti-violent...I hope that doesn't deter the judges. Good luck, you guys. You got 5 stars from me.
thanks. yeah, the rules were that we had 24 hours to write/shoot/edit this video using elements of 'dream sequence', 'dutch angle', and 'match cut'. the video is basically a true story about a girl who caught my eye on a bus and how we met.
Every single time I watch this, I can't help but laugh. Brilliant!
Alersonn 3 years ago 2
too simple of a script, the match cut wasn't very smooth, if anything put a longer dissolve, but it wasn't even lined up very well. and put some music when its chasing, audio is more than half of what makes a good film, it adds to the suspense. just a few things i notcied. good luck in the future.
supafly189 4 years ago
That girl is hot.
Alersonn 4 years ago 2
Be quiet, please. If you don't like a video, you don't need to hi caps lock and type expletives. And don't judge a video based on its production value. What didn't u like about the actual video (story, dialogue, etc.)?
Oh, btw, check out Homeless: a Tale of Love. We appreciate any support we can get.
confusedpork 4 years ago
Nice video. Everyone should come view my team's. Even though we didn't win anything, we'd enjoy the support.
DarthBotto 4 years ago
Nice! Check out "Mr. Radio Tuner" if you get a chance.
CrazyGorillaFace 4 years ago
well made, pretty creepy lol...thanks for the comment on the facebook group..i appreciate it and good luck!
mz1091206 4 years ago
Only complaint would be the audio, but other than that nice. Check out our submission: Life's a Cinema, for a good laugh.
midnightdelight1 4 years ago
great camera shots! I kinda like that there's no music...it adds to his pure (yet disturbing) concentration on the girl. check out "performance".
tjcrelly 4 years ago
Crap...our video wont play in the Apple Gallery. Is anyone else having this problem?
Filman777 4 years ago
That was pretty awesome. I like the sepia-ish quality to the footage. Was that coloured in post or set in camera?
And like everyone else, I'd like to promote my entry too =D. Check out "Nesting Season". Good luck to you in the polls!
HahnWG 4 years ago
I think the guy should stay on the bus. The video is well done.
chapmando2007 4 years ago
CHeck out Sleepwalking for a good one.
golfboyjds111 4 years ago
Wow! That was scary. But very well made and everything.
Check out ours; "Salted Lettuce" and please vote on the Apple website...whatever that is. :)
amanda644 4 years ago 2
Nice job. Check out our entry, Addicted.
BrillianceDeclared 4 years ago
Incredibly striking. I didn't see that coming at all! My only suggestion would be to work on the audio, and I know that's been said, and I know that's definitely one of the most difficult elements in 24 hours. But, other than that, absolutely stunning.
Check out our submission "Every Night - Apple Insomnia Film Festival 2007" and tell us what you think.
SeanBagleyFilm 4 years ago
nice use of the dream sequence there - didn't even see it coming. Check out our submission CHECKMATE.
atgroundZero 4 years ago
Great! Hey, take a look at our entry: To Paint A Brighter Future
Filman777 4 years ago
LOL, I loved the ending!
Geek3d 4 years ago
That ending was soo creepy. Haha.
sweetangel1927 4 years ago
interesting actors
-hobopus
berutkowski 4 years ago
From 00:54 you should have just made it a softcore. Wasted 2:01 of my life.
Applequest 4 years ago
creep. the editing started to look shitty after 2:00. should have left a nice final image.
SCHIZOPHRENlC 4 years ago
WTF its the 19th and voting has started whats the fing deal
skierdude 4 years ago
Eerie. But dugg, for some reason. Haha, best of luck to you, and please have a look at my team's entry.
mosjeffrinitely 4 years ago
Ha ha, not bad. Good luck.
maxmiggo 4 years ago
good job. good luck guys.
check out the submission "hobopus" which has some cool effects.
LateThebes 4 years ago
Check out our entry "Next Tuesday"
nneeoonnee 4 years ago
nice use of the dream sequence there - didn't even see it coming. Check out our submission CHECKMATE.
atgroundZero 4 years ago
wow new rule, people who critize quality of 24 hour videos get kicked in the balls...
stemcellfilms 4 years ago
three...Second, Your sound is terrible, I had to turn it down on bus and turn it up outside..Third, where's your lighting??? Lastly, your ending, ok so maybe he didn't rape her, but then you guys decide to throw in a creepy smirk at the end....Guys wheres the direction in that??? I don't think you should win, but a solid top 25 finish is in order....
ChrisRyan156 4 years ago
im well aware of all the issues in the video.. after the bus scene was shot, my friend blair who was recording sound got hit by a car who ran a stoplight. hes fine, but we had to go to the hospital, the minidisc recorder we had for audio was broken, so we had huge sound issues later when we finally got a chance to shoot the other outdoors scene. between that and the whole 24 hour thing, im happy with how it turned out. thanks for your comments though.
ryanlaing 4 years ago
I'm gunna b honest, I liked it but, there were a couple of things you could have fixed. First off it was too long, this story could have been told in one - two minutes not
ChrisRyan156 4 years ago
it scared me
sarahbb23 4 years ago
i'm not sure what it means....but i liked it.
i like the tail affect when there in the woods.
good job! ^^
Bloodangel128 4 years ago
STEVE JOBS IS SECRETLY SATAN loloollolololol!!!!!111!!!
bobstein33p 4 years ago
wow, very interesting topic,great production value. Rape isn't cool though...
TheGDawg 4 years ago
"Quality looks good...looks like HD. Story was kinda cliche.... Try to be a littile more oringinal next year."
Did you watch the whole thing?...
Other than the lighting issue in the woods, I was thoroughly impressed.
quite thoroughly.
CodyJakubowski 4 years ago
Nice...
Check out our Insomnia vid. Check our channel.
The vid is called "Throwing It All Away"
BandZProductions 4 years ago
Quality looks good...looks like HD. Story was kinda cliche.... Try to be a littile more oringinal next year.
DBAKER 4 years ago
good job guys! yeah top 25 material for sure.
peep our vid!
danehurt 4 years ago
wow, that's creepy. Really nice camera angles and cuts. Really got the creepy theme across.
schirmer42 4 years ago
that is really disturbing. wow. lighting was poor.
evilfeeshy 4 years ago
Good filming
ferrariModenas 4 years ago
I thought it was a great thriller...but I think they said something in the Terms and Conditions about it needing to be anti-violent...I hope that doesn't deter the judges. Good luck, you guys. You got 5 stars from me.
mindreise 4 years ago
Kind of a dark theme for my taste. Well shot though, good exposure and color. Check out Like a Glove if you are looking to laugh.
killmoves 4 years ago
I cant stop watching it. whats wrong with me? I like it.....so much.....
kenter2000 4 years ago
wow, a really great job. i could watch it over and over.
kenter2000 4 years ago 2
Creep central, I liked the twist though. Good luck to you!!
P.S. check out our submission "Nature is Your Boss"
Mikesafilmer 4 years ago
Well done. Very intense, especially the smile at the end...
jones99 4 years ago
did you fantasize about raping her in your true story? sounds like you have a good foundation for your relationship.
claytonbrooksprine 4 years ago 2
did you rape this girl in your true story? hmmm.... wierd.
eh11canadian 4 years ago 3
sweet stuff i like the whole idea, kinda creeps you out. , look up "hurry & wait" for our submission.
justano0b 4 years ago
Great job. The end really did it for me.
Kenburn7 4 years ago
Nice.
gronkmeister 4 years ago 2
very well done, could you explain more about the idea or theme behind the film?
1bheckman 4 years ago 3
thanks. yeah, the rules were that we had 24 hours to write/shoot/edit this video using elements of 'dream sequence', 'dutch angle', and 'match cut'. the video is basically a true story about a girl who caught my eye on a bus and how we met.
ryanlaing 4 years ago
i was actually on a team for the festival, but you seriously just followed her? that's awesome.
1bheckman 4 years ago 2
Great Job, I hope you guys win! This is the best one I've seen yet. Very well made!
gurgledurr 4 years ago 2