Volume gets a little low in a number of places. I understand this is to create effect and allow you to punctuate some jokes with enhanced volume but watch it doesn't get so soft it puts folks to sleep.
Re-use joke near the end is good although the thoroughness of the 'fake phone' call is a tad excessive. Maybe cut that down and spend more time on the conclusion which almost seems tacked on. Perhaps instead of saying 'imagine in such and such years' you could take us there like your phone call.
Volume gets a little low in a number of places. I understand this is to create effect and allow you to punctuate some jokes with enhanced volume but watch it doesn't get so soft it puts folks to sleep.
Re-use joke near the end is good although the thoroughness of the 'fake phone' call is a tad excessive. Maybe cut that down and spend more time on the conclusion which almost seems tacked on. Perhaps instead of saying 'imagine in such and such years' you could take us there like your phone call.
0athbreaker 2 years ago
Pretty funny! But I know an 8th grader who would own this contest.
blackandpink38 3 years ago
Wow this man should learn how to speak more effectively. Atrociously bad.
LaLakrs 4 years ago
Awesome Dude! Very Funny!
thrakar1122 4 years ago