Oh reading over my comments I realized perhaps to make your lyrics more relateable, perhaps you could try generalizing more of the specific and personal details. So Janah wouldnt be Janah to your audience unless they chose it to be, that way the audience could chose to put their own loved ones in that slot while listening. You know what I mean? Sorry my spelling sucks lol.
I rated you 5 stars because I think with a little work you could really attract a fair amount of fans, You have a nice voice and disposition, your guitar really compliments your style. I wouldnt bother to write all this out unless I figured you were worth some of my time. Hope my advice helps a little and doesnt insult or hinder you. Not trying to ruffle feathers, just offering honest advice/opinions.
Also, the lyrics are a bit weak, its as though they are unrefined and because of that it almost sounds too personal, like you are singing to yourself or to someone else but not to an audiance. I dont know if that makes much sense.. Its a little hard to relate to though because of that. Kinda feels like Im observing you thniking outloud about personal stuff.. Maybe theres a way to refine your lyrics so the content is conveyed in a more audience inclusive and open manner
Ok Im no musician, but I am an enormous music ethusiast. I think your sound is good, but the sound quality is hurtin in your videos. Im not sure how you can make it better, i thnik the guitar is a bit too loud and your voice is a bit too soft.. So maybe you can fiddle with the volumes or something.
Great song, I love listening to it!
sabreeno6 1 year ago
great song! Love listening to it!
sabreeno6 1 year ago
i love the tempo to this one.
it gets me into a happy thinking moood.
:)
jonathanruiz209 4 years ago
Todd!...you're wearing my shirt! LOL Nice song!
tps607 4 years ago
lol
bwananunchaku 4 years ago
I really like it...
What original thing can I say!
It touches me. :)
christinanoordberger 4 years ago
Thanks... ;)
bwananunchaku 4 years ago
beautiful song, u have a lovely voice xx please keep posting xx
pinkkt25 4 years ago
Oh reading over my comments I realized perhaps to make your lyrics more relateable, perhaps you could try generalizing more of the specific and personal details. So Janah wouldnt be Janah to your audience unless they chose it to be, that way the audience could chose to put their own loved ones in that slot while listening. You know what I mean? Sorry my spelling sucks lol.
fizzygoat 4 years ago
enthusiast* lol
fizzygoat 4 years ago
I rated you 5 stars because I think with a little work you could really attract a fair amount of fans, You have a nice voice and disposition, your guitar really compliments your style. I wouldnt bother to write all this out unless I figured you were worth some of my time. Hope my advice helps a little and doesnt insult or hinder you. Not trying to ruffle feathers, just offering honest advice/opinions.
fizzygoat 4 years ago
Also, the lyrics are a bit weak, its as though they are unrefined and because of that it almost sounds too personal, like you are singing to yourself or to someone else but not to an audiance. I dont know if that makes much sense.. Its a little hard to relate to though because of that. Kinda feels like Im observing you thniking outloud about personal stuff.. Maybe theres a way to refine your lyrics so the content is conveyed in a more audience inclusive and open manner
fizzygoat 4 years ago
Ok Im no musician, but I am an enormous music ethusiast. I think your sound is good, but the sound quality is hurtin in your videos. Im not sure how you can make it better, i thnik the guitar is a bit too loud and your voice is a bit too soft.. So maybe you can fiddle with the volumes or something.
fizzygoat 4 years ago
You'll see the words to this song in the description above by clicking on the blue "more" link.
bwananunchaku 4 years ago