Obsessed // One-Shot

[lovedrunkx33]

amazing, i really loved that it was so descriptive, and there were no pictures, i loved that :)

[OptimisticLivvy9o]

rofl -- I always picture Nelena. Nelena rocksss

[nicakajonas]

Nelena....xD I dunno it could be anyone, i just picked my favorite. and the guy...Taylor Lautner?The girl with Taylor L. could be Taylor Swfit?

[bunnyboo1423]

Immediatly pictured Niley! :) GREAT ONE-SHOT! ;D

[edwardcullenluver4ev]

Miley! Lol. I don't know. Her face popped into my head.

Really random. Her having one of the worst days of her life.

:) Niley??? [:

[disneychannelrules12]

omg this was AMAZING!!!!!

[x3SmilinHearts]

if you dont mind sending me a message id love to talk to you about this. just something personal. =) thanks!!

~caitlin~

[cheerpunk1400]

i pictured nelenaa too!

[Theresaaugen]

aw, That's very, very, very good. :)

[heresbri0bannana4evr]

I love this!!! I hope you make it into some series!! Well, if you have the time, but besides that, that was some good writing! :D

♥briana

[lyricitis17]

OOO i like this!!!!!

[nickjerryjonassx]

i realllly pictures demi, like the whole time. the attitude is her, i love iit(:

[VFKHolly]

i pictured nelena

WRITE MORE!

[becksy77]

Oh my goodness it's soo good!!!! Niley for sure!!!!!!

[x3SmilinHearts]

i really like it. insanely. its really interesting. and that would make a PERFECT preface for a book. =) but you should change the names if its gonna be a real book. or like let the girl NOT be famous or something. =)

[MileyMercy]

omggg! i really hope you can & will continue this!!!! i hope it's Mileyyy!

[PuertoRicanBratz]

it was awesomee!

im thinking its:

nick+selena

nick+miley

nick+demi

[aubrei401127]

i pictured it as a niley idk y but i loved it and i loved how there were no pics just words

[megansworld98]

omg its so good please make it into a series and i think its either niley or nelena

[x3xiiloveiitx3x]

I'm so speechless..

[brokendreams156]

awwe please tunr it into a series

[dilshodaus]

OMG its sooo awesome. It should be Nelena. PLZ write more

[orlyxitsnelena]

I pictured Nelena :oo

[CandKrocknroll]

ohmigawshh that was soo good! xD

<3 it!

[nickjaybaby]

this would be an amazing story for Nelena Writers

if you choose to make it Nelena (: just a thought<3

[stashhjonas]

OMFG, JUDY! It sounds SOOO good!

I'm so excited for itt ;]

[x3TaylorxSwiftx3]

i hope its selenaa . (:

but, even if its miley..its really cutee. :D

& the writingg is what counts(; < 3

[SelenaGorgeousGomez1]

Make it a series and make it Nelena!

It just seems like it would be a Nelena story!

And make the fiance that cheated Taylor Lautner!

That'd be sooooo cute!!!

:)

[jemixxloverxx]

i luved this!good thing i was looking up random things and came across this

:D

im so turning this into a book

if u give me permission :D

[xolilcoolxo]

hope it's miley =]

please turn it into a series

[XLiveLoveLaX]

please turn it into a series!!

[ashadaily1996]

i hope the character iz Miley cuz i hate Nelena's.

[britter1331]

I HOPE ITS NELENA :D and btw malachibabe45 there is a thing called extensions :D NELNEA :D

[SelenaSnuggle35]

I really really hope its Selena

<<3 Nelena!!!

[xoxoflipflop12]

oh please turn it into a series? :D

[malachibabe45]

I think it might've been Miley yet Selena..Im not sure but I hope it was Niley Im "obsessed" with them ;)...Besides Selena cut her hair and it said her hair cascaded DOWN her back..So it must've been Miley(hopfully)

[mileycyrusrules5988]

please finish it i love it

[SelGomezlover]

make it a series!! haha i made the main girl Selena and the ex-fiance Taylor. :D haha i love selena!

[catfall]

I love it!

omg omg omg

so detail and addicting

please turn it into a series :)

make it nileyy <3

[Catsrockm]

this looks good u should continue it pleases!

[mickey141480]

it amazing do another i think the charctor is selena gomez or demi either one

[jbfan4everX1000]

oooooooo this is good you should make it a series

[babybethdd14]

oh my gosh this was amazing

it would be awsomee if you like made it into like a series or a couple other parts to it because it really amazing :)

ilovedit:)

[XxPittPenguins94xX]

i love this! haha

you are an amazing writer!

[oOojustaDream]

wow. it's amazing.

haha i thought throughout the story that the guy's gonna be joe, it sounded like him:)

[iluvcowss]

i llove your writing<3

[SimpleSexStories]

Oh please turn it into a series? :D

[Magnificent408]

Pllease, and I mean please make at least just couple of parts of this. The plot is Amazing. And your writting is TERRIFIC.

It sounds like a great story. So, if you have time for it you should definatlly make a couple parts to it. =]

[nounoupotter]

that was amazing :) You should continue this story :)

[elsie411]

it was such an incredibley amazing Writing and ur such an incredible writer! Your one of my top faveorites and u never let me down! Im glad to know that i can count on you for a Amazing series! ;) thanks for your unquie yet so true series!

[xsunglossed]

that was amazing [:

[xTheFame]

more!

[peaceexbitch]

oh wow!

that was AMAZING!

you are such an incredible writer!(:

[NazForReal]

Wow.

This was...

Wow.

There aren't words to express how amazing your writing is.

It leaves me speechless.