Awesome song James.. A good melody and easy listening.. Thanks for asking me to listen... Look forward to hearing more of your songs.. Keep writing and singing
nice song...and good voice! no doubt, you will become a singer, and i hope that you make it big! however, please (if you can) avoid making such a weird acting (at the beginning). some people might NOT see the whole video because of it. It's a good thing that i am a little patient that i decided to watch a little more....
your beat has to match the tone your siging the drums are a little off when you first go into the chourus........try a faster drum beat an your tone might be a bit better lower experiment and have fun with it don't be ordinary and i hate being a simon but this song seems a little too corny but that just might be me too. In music you have to willing and unafriad to go outside your comfort zone. also you repeat i need to know too much lessen that up and you should be fine GOOD LUCK! ^_^
yeah like what i expecting when somebody invites me to view there video w0w wonderful i love it bro. ahm can you email me a link that i can down load a sound editor that can make diffrent sounds thanks bro and i love your song
ooo...i really like it...everything about it is great..i love the music n great on the guitar...ur voice is amazing..my kind of music..i wish u the best n keep it up...make more of these lovely songs if u can
ok honestly i thought it was a joke at first. and im no critic but good voice and nice guitar playing as you sing i thought it was good. good, great, whatever. you get what i mean
Good song, a little more varied sequence in between is needed, but otherwise a good start. Perhaps try to control your vibrato a bit more, because although it is a nice touch to singing its not always necessary.
Thanks for not spamming and sending an honest message.
like what they have sed.. thanks a lot for sending me a message.. i kinda love your songs and i like the way you introduce yourself to me.. i'll gonna help you out spreading your videos.. thank you again.. i do really enjoy your video :]] keep rocking on!
I love how you are promoting yourself honestly. By doing so you create a loyal fan base that will help to promote you. The song was very skilled and I especially liked your vocals. If I had to criticize it i would say the zoom on the video is choppy but that can be expensive to improve{helpful criticism :-) . Good luck with your contest.
Hi BlackIroni. First... Thanks for commenting! You kind of struck a nerve on the studio quality thing. I work out of a room in my house and I wouldn't, by any means, call it a studio. It's right under my son's room and he gets mad at me sometimes when he's trying to sleep.
Umm sounds good tho, because it didn't looked like very ghetto recording but on other hand like studio recording you rent 1000$ for a day lol but anyhow, very good results for such limited resources. I think you are exploiting youtube the right way it should be done, by promoting yourself in honest way and all doing it all by yourself, it creates a bond with the people discovering you and you seem to care for people's comment, which is what most new artist out there forgets to do ....
Hey, man, really good! You have a really good voice. If you would, check out my stuff, too. It's great to be able to listen to other musicians' songs online.
your voice reminds me of a friend but you guys don't sing the same style of music... i sent you a link to his music page coz i know you'll be curious to hear him. nice song btw! :)
The intro was soooo funny! The song itself is simply amazing, add that to your voice it's just...beyond words! Seriously, whoever won't take you on as a recording artist needs to have their ears checked!
Ha-ha, I can't stay away when I see you've uploaded a new song! It's addictive! But seriously, you're amazing! So thank you! *My favorite is still "Living Easy The Hard Way", it's an amazing song!...of course all of your songs are...lol*
Well, it's just such a down-to-Earth, real, relatable (not sure if that's spelled right...) song. It's...I don't know how to explain it really. Every time I listen to it, it just makes me see things differently. Not sure why. I guess you're just amazing enough to write such an amazing song. ;) Make a video asking ppl what their favs are if you really want to know. ppl could post vid responces or comments.
Great song, featuring it in about 4 hours. Thanks again for the opening for my next PFL video. I'll be sending you the other MP3 that'll play after yours soon.
Thanks again Ed. I really appreciate you coming by to comment. That's my backyard you see there. I guess I should cut the grass. I entered this song in a local radio contest. I lose all objectivity, so I have no idea how good it is. Talk to you again soon.
i like the video concept as well,and the song
jonglenn100 2 years ago
ha..been there
jonglenn100 2 years ago
keep it up...
addyMcfuck 2 years ago
NICE SONG!
BryFerAl 2 years ago
Great song!
glk4324 2 years ago
hhaha great...
SimFan185 2 years ago
reminds me of john denver's leaving on a jet plane in the beginning part
ThatFoolishBoy 2 years ago
good song!
hlclove 2 years ago
Good Job!
StevePiffer 2 years ago
hah.
koriepfrank 2 years ago
This acting thing in the beginning, when you become famous, are you going to star in comedy movies?
cuteguyfromcanada 2 years ago
You are great
furbsmom 2 years ago
Awesome song James.. A good melody and easy listening.. Thanks for asking me to listen... Look forward to hearing more of your songs.. Keep writing and singing
christinalord 2 years ago
Very much enjoyed this, thank you for inviteing me to listen. }:^)
LazarusL1 2 years ago
sweet
newbievamp2005 2 years ago
I really like this :] Espically the beginning.
iLikeEddie 2 years ago
christopher cross!!! :)))
abileche 2 years ago
nice!
LiaTyson 2 years ago
very beautiful its a great song i love it :D
Joanavoice 2 years ago
really good
asdfghjkloy 2 years ago
Nice :'D
AlicexOfxWonderland 2 years ago
thank u for ur message, keep me updated of ur new songs
youness3012 2 years ago
Thanks for your beauty song it remind me
in somehow John Denver songs, nice job
antartic60 2 years ago
great song james, it made me cry cuz i live the same drama and u do it right
hold on man ;)
youness3012 2 years ago
You could do some more with professional backgroud acc. but great job!
Knightdragon13 2 years ago
enjoyed it ,best of luckl.
lovatt51 2 years ago
I like it, really good.
princetongirl22 2 years ago
Thanks for the email and the "heads up" on your video....,Great song....Fantastic voice....keep up the good work....
pamc704 2 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
Good stuff, man ;)
USAPatriot1 2 years ago
nice song...and good voice! no doubt, you will become a singer, and i hope that you make it big! however, please (if you can) avoid making such a weird acting (at the beginning). some people might NOT see the whole video because of it. It's a good thing that i am a little patient that i decided to watch a little more....
ed71070 2 years ago
Awesome!
SpiralSerenade92 2 years ago
Good work mate.Very nice.
xDREMARKx from AUSTRALIA
xDREMARKx 2 years ago
your beat has to match the tone your siging the drums are a little off when you first go into the chourus........try a faster drum beat an your tone might be a bit better lower experiment and have fun with it don't be ordinary and i hate being a simon but this song seems a little too corny but that just might be me too. In music you have to willing and unafriad to go outside your comfort zone. also you repeat i need to know too much lessen that up and you should be fine GOOD LUCK! ^_^
Aniuewolf 2 years ago
Thanks I for sending me the video very sweet!
Mollie M
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9koih 2 years ago
great it keep it up!!!!
negs19 2 years ago
That was great! Really pleasing voice, love it.
greenforkhandle 2 years ago
really really good song!
themusicalgeek22 2 years ago
i really liked it!!!
madonna3737 2 years ago
5*****
grica201 2 years ago
Well done. You are an excellent singer/songwriter.
jairosoft 2 years ago
Beautiful, in dem Sinne schönen Gruß aus Germany :-).........
datima123 2 years ago
Beautiful man, Really beautiful.
windytrail 2 years ago
Ur a little wierd at the start xD but ur music is good. Cheers m8:)
Sindis1994 2 years ago
Warm...cute...romantic...educational.....I like it :)
sunhiusee121192 2 years ago
yeah like what i expecting when somebody invites me to view there video w0w wonderful i love it bro. ahm can you email me a link that i can down load a sound editor that can make diffrent sounds thanks bro and i love your song
tasgeary 2 years ago
its not even funny. like i know your trying to be funny but.. ... ... your not!
love the song though(:
DjKForJonasBrothers 2 years ago
Thanks!! I'm just lucky.
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
that is a beautiful song. 5 stars all the way! i am so subscribing. how were you able to have your vocals reach to that kind of range?
riterlovestory347 2 years ago
You're kool, you should be on Seseme street.
Very good. I especially like tha harmonies.
One question though, when you put a capo on the first fret then do tha fingering for the G chord, does that still make it a G chord???
GaryLawrence0 2 years ago
Thanks! No. Every fret raises the sound by a semi-tone.
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
nice..cool..
xyd597 2 years ago
Sterling! Great voice, excellent lyrics.
balijam 2 years ago
ooo...i really like it...everything about it is great..i love the music n great on the guitar...ur voice is amazing..my kind of music..i wish u the best n keep it up...make more of these lovely songs if u can
bbypwincess90 2 years ago
uv got talent .altho this is not really my kind of musik i likd it
keep it up
ayomitodo 2 years ago
ok honestly i thought it was a joke at first. and im no critic but good voice and nice guitar playing as you sing i thought it was good. good, great, whatever. you get what i mean
GoCubsGo343 2 years ago
Excelent!
sgprailfan 2 years ago
nice good job...
theANT47 2 years ago
that was amazing. great voice. keep it up
KawaiiFallenStar 2 years ago
SOOO NICE ! GOOD LUCK ;)
roro311 2 years ago
thumbs up! Really good, so keep up with the good work! :D
TrustSasu 2 years ago
Good song, a little more varied sequence in between is needed, but otherwise a good start. Perhaps try to control your vibrato a bit more, because although it is a nice touch to singing its not always necessary.
Thanks for not spamming and sending an honest message.
elementstylecom 2 years ago
thanks 4 the message...the beginning before the song was funny...and the song was really good...you got talent...i wish you luck
goku4596111 2 years ago
like what they have sed.. thanks a lot for sending me a message.. i kinda love your songs and i like the way you introduce yourself to me.. i'll gonna help you out spreading your videos.. thank you again.. i do really enjoy your video :]] keep rocking on!
ne17bie 2 years ago
Thanks. I really appreciate you checking my vids out.
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
aww niice! :)
mzjennyy 2 years ago
JEEZ! Awesome! Amazing voice!
Cybrggame 2 years ago
I love how you are promoting yourself honestly. By doing so you create a loyal fan base that will help to promote you. The song was very skilled and I especially liked your vocals. If I had to criticize it i would say the zoom on the video is choppy but that can be expensive to improve{helpful criticism :-) . Good luck with your contest.
thoth342 2 years ago
Thanks for the comment! The zoom is done through the software I was using. They are actually still shots.
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
soundss veryy pretty
beautiful1592 2 years ago
First good idea to reach people (whole personal mail :P) and good job, I'm somehow a bit skeptical because sounds like studio quality but good job!
BlackIroni 2 years ago
Hi BlackIroni. First... Thanks for commenting! You kind of struck a nerve on the studio quality thing. I work out of a room in my house and I wouldn't, by any means, call it a studio. It's right under my son's room and he gets mad at me sometimes when he's trying to sleep.
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
Umm sounds good tho, because it didn't looked like very ghetto recording but on other hand like studio recording you rent 1000$ for a day lol but anyhow, very good results for such limited resources. I think you are exploiting youtube the right way it should be done, by promoting yourself in honest way and all doing it all by yourself, it creates a bond with the people discovering you and you seem to care for people's comment, which is what most new artist out there forgets to do ....
BlackIroni 2 years ago
Thanks again. I entered this song into a contest and I hope the song can stand on it's own against other stuff recorded professionally.
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
nice work man. When i first saw this i was like, "ok just another one of those wanna bes" but you suprized me.
Great melody and great lyrics, not to mention a great voice
good job
robertcurrie1 2 years ago
AWESOME DUDE U GOT TALENT!!!!
BubbleGumLover2345 2 years ago
really appreciate that you are putting the word out there about yourself. sounds awesome! hope you keep it up.
WinkWink18 2 years ago
AWESOME thx
babyruth15 2 years ago
great job dude. thanks for sendingme the video = ) i subbed
M11ty2 2 years ago
Hey whats up? Top notch guitar player, and a great song.
moderntee 2 years ago
Thank you very much!
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
fuck me i was ceptical
but wow!
you were right i think your awesome man!
your uitar playing is top notch and you have a very powerfull voice
KEEP MAKING MUSIC!
peace out from your new fan
GLENN12344444 2 years ago
That's awesome!!
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
Hey, man, really good! You have a really good voice. If you would, check out my stuff, too. It's great to be able to listen to other musicians' songs online.
jeremyjamesdewitt 2 years ago
wow! awesome song!! great job XD love the lyrics by the way :) the tunes rox too
MyToySoldierMyPixie 2 years ago
Wow! Thanks!
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
wow at first I was like whatttt? haha this was amazing, good job :D
littlemexicankid 2 years ago
Thanks so much!
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
corny
Macmii 2 years ago
That's me.
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
2:10 he has head fones in
andysgirl96 2 years ago
I have head phones in for the whole thing.
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
hey good video..how did u find me xD i was like ?whos this?..good vid :)
jamuu1 2 years ago
A tribute to your dog. I felt the same way about my cat. It's sad to lose a friend.
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
heyy good job, but how did you find me?
6morbid6child6 2 years ago
Not bad dude, but how did you find me?
TrainerNate1995 2 years ago
Thanks!. I saw one the old tv promos you have on your site.
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
This is your best one yet Jim you finally did one better then crush lol
RFrench687 2 years ago
Thanks Roy!
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
Thanks Oswlek. I played with a number of backing combinations, but in the end just went with what you hear.
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
Nice. I really like the backing vocals under the refrain.
Oswlek 2 years ago
You said you sounded like Rascal Flatts...you sound NOTHING like Rascal Flatts. No subscription from me.
TheirLaytinKatein 2 years ago
I like that you've started using the lower half of your vocal range, it does wonders for this song. Props, you get better with each post!
slurswhentalking 2 years ago
Thanks Man! I learn something every time.
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
nice song dude nice song to relax to with hte girlfriend
daerrol 2 years ago
Thx Man. Come back again.
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
AWESOME, did you really make this for a contest? you are really good, excellent job. 5/5 stares.
Eriksgirl66 2 years ago
Yes. I entered the contest on Friday. It's a local radio station Moose FM 105.5 in Huntsville Ontario. Thanks for commenting!!
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
Great singing. Pretty cool outfit.
SelimStedo 2 years ago
your voice reminds me of a friend but you guys don't sing the same style of music... i sent you a link to his music page coz i know you'll be curious to hear him. nice song btw! :)
taizyc 2 years ago
Thanks. I'll take a look.
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
The intro was soooo funny! The song itself is simply amazing, add that to your voice it's just...beyond words! Seriously, whoever won't take you on as a recording artist needs to have their ears checked!
ILuvRobPattinson 2 years ago
Wow! Thanks for commenting again... and again... and again. You are one of my favorites!
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
Ha-ha, I can't stay away when I see you've uploaded a new song! It's addictive! But seriously, you're amazing! So thank you! *My favorite is still "Living Easy The Hard Way", it's an amazing song!...of course all of your songs are...lol*
ILuvRobPattinson 2 years ago
Lol! I would never have guessed that was your favorite. I would really like to hear from others what their favorites are.
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
Well, it's just such a down-to-Earth, real, relatable (not sure if that's spelled right...) song. It's...I don't know how to explain it really. Every time I listen to it, it just makes me see things differently. Not sure why. I guess you're just amazing enough to write such an amazing song. ;) Make a video asking ppl what their favs are if you really want to know. ppl could post vid responces or comments.
ILuvRobPattinson 2 years ago
That's a great idea!
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
ha-ha I know. I'm just awesome that way. Jk, jk. :)
ILuvRobPattinson 2 years ago
You and me both. Lol!
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
More so you than me, but yeah okay!! ha-ha. :)
ILuvRobPattinson 2 years ago
sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!!! this song is really great!!
jan3019 2 years ago
Thanks Jan. I wrote 3 songs in the last week and this is the one I thought was the best. I appreciate you coming by.
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
Great song, featuring it in about 4 hours. Thanks again for the opening for my next PFL video. I'll be sending you the other MP3 that'll play after yours soon.
Spintown7 2 years ago
Thanks ST. Glad to do it. I buddy Frank deserves the credit for the lead vocal and the piano playing on your PFL video opening. He is fantastic!!
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
Thanks again Ed. I really appreciate you coming by to comment. That's my backyard you see there. I guess I should cut the grass. I entered this song in a local radio contest. I lose all objectivity, so I have no idea how good it is. Talk to you again soon.
JeimusuJones 2 years ago
Another great original song, Jim! I really enjoyed the background in this one too....and of course, the the lucky-duck voice.....
rd2ed 2 years ago