Re: Let's Write a Sawng (Step 8. Development)

[skarefamena]

Every song is improved by synthesizer.

[vb7000]

Deadly! Reminds me of Video Killed the Radio Star.

[Weezerpwns]

wow, this is awesome

[zakolita]

It sounds like a Weezer/Fountains of Wayne lovechild. Super catchy, feelgood stuff!

[whatsherface612]

awesome!

[jackietwilight]

Is there a vocoder (sp?) effect on your vox? This is wizard, man.

[whatever9698]

Thanks! No vocoder, just some chorus (mainly to mask my crappy voice...)

[1flashyman]

Despite not loving this song overall, this version sounds very natural, almost as if you dug up a song that already existed. It also has a bit of that "UH!" to it, very fast with a good "moving" sound to it. Could use a little polish or be a little more dynamic.

[songsforsongs]

*<8-)

[forge6644]

at the end of the synth into, try having it jump up an octave after the long note.

I like it!

[googoogagmouth]

this is smoking hott!

probably the best anyone's done at this point. how can you even come up with something like that? it's so catchy! you should work a little on the dynamics of the song, but the synth line you incorporated is awesome and the quality of the track is great. I hope it ends up sounding like this. super kudos.

[whatever9698]

Thanks guys!

[Stimmespieler]

OH MAN I am freaking out. Genius! The vocal line sounds great, and I LOVE!!!!!! The synth line. I hope everyone else feels the same. Rock on. =w=

[jaynehat]

coolness, that synth part is killer. nice job and nice voice. do you have a band or something i can check out?

[whatever9698]

Thanks! Still working on some songs with my band, I'll let you know when they're finished.

[madcow312]

definetly has a strong 80s feel

[madpie109]

I like how when he says "turnin' up the radio" it sounds almost like "dirty up the radio." Which is a better lyric.

[laffypaulie]

This is such a nice development of what ACS5 had done. It has a nice flow. It has the Pop element that he was looking for and you seem to have beefed up the Tempo. Nice Work. I also like some of the other entries. Everyones are so different!

[lisam805]

WOW. You did a brilliant job of giving the song an 80's flavor. Love it.

[Homolka215]

this sounds like a fountains of wayne song. good though

[athenspie]

good harmonies. i like the ending on this one, with the overlapping vocals.