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  • Ride up on sat dope shit :)

  • Gangster

  • girl thats a poem

  • Your pretty and look like my tech teacher don't  worry she 23

  • This pisses me off a freestyle is a rap with no lyrics you just think of it

  • Banana ohh shit girl you spit game good

  • Dat wuz a"freestyle rap"?

  • Its not freestyle if you wrote it down >.>

  • lounge.moviecodec com/music/freestyle-rap-15410/ She Stole It From Someone Else AHA Check It Third one down dumb bitch put a . in the i cldnt

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  • adorable smile at the end; not sure that the premise of the piece was of any particular value, however.

  • Very good and with a sweet smile

  • not a hater though...jus tough

  • u explainin too much...shit aint cooll.... kinda lame...

  • That's what's up!

  • Kinda okay

  • You took most of that rap from a freestyle rap, you actually plagiarized, #fuckedup

  • Hahaha she so cute lol

  • for a white hick town girl, not bad. but you shouldnt hate on people like me girl, i aint done nothin to you ;)

  • Cute

  • look at his other videos too

  • if you wanna listen to a white boy rap go to Block Swag Click "Yes I'm On"

  • it's not a freestly rap if you have lyrics writen...

  • Wtf is she saying I don't understand lol n I ain't a mother fucker idiot

  • thats real even through she just playing she got potential

  • Hah gotta love white gurls rap..

  • Oh no!? Aides infested babies?

  • Ok

    I dont care wat u other cats say

    This girl right here raps hard

  • dnt rap dnt sing dnt ever open your mouth again u little white bitch. white ppl ftw though but not when they do shit like this.

  • if its written its not a freestyle white girl lOl.. leave it to eminem girl hahaha!!!!

  • Love it u go girl

  • Tht Was Dope For A Whitee Girl <33 .

  • I started out like that don't hate time and practice all it takes.

  • check out.... maddi3pping for some swag freestyles. and give feed back

  • from sweet heart to killah! made my day anyway.listen too nuff sed on my page maaan!

  • Dope as the fuck, surpassed what I expected. The rhyme was forced on occasion, but the message made the impact. That shit was mad hot.

  • That was good girl

  • To be honest, much, MUCH better than all the horrible white females.

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  • You need a beat. Haha. Less words, or wording things differently would sound better. Try a beat though. And feel it when you write. Nice try : )

  • waaaay better than all the other white girls who try to rap on the internet..i aint gonna dis cuz i dont see the harm in doin shit like that for fun lol an is it jus me or does anyone else ever notice that ppl always say white ppl r actin black but wen black ppl act white its ok..jus sayin

  • You're cute but you need work. I'm not upset with you though. I've heard much worse.

  • No u talentless dumb b...h , you put your self to shame like all the other white girls who act black.

  • ur talent fucking sucks

  • Dammmm she pretty gud! Mad props

  • Not to bad if ya hadd some dam hooks white girl so get to it take that rap and fuckin put 2 hooks and then ya got a rap all you got is a pad a paper, and a little ink pen writin....... lol

  • rap battle? rap batle? haha but seriously rap battle

  • I AM HOLDING ON TO YOU.

  • hey people check out the video and sub get at my email or comment on my video if you want a sub channel : XxHeadshotPreacherxX

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  • lil wayne just got murdered

  • you didn't make that up you got that off a freestyle website like to keep at the top this is not real

  • -_- im not gonna say anything lol

  • wack..

  • That shits poetry not rap

  • Good

  • Cute..but naw..that was corny..lol

  • bitch you got some lyrics from 8 mile movie your dumb ass fucckk you got no rythms make them upp your selff little white bitch

  • Very corny lol. You're adorable though.

  • That was sick girl and can I barrow that for my next track ?lol

  • lol that was cool I expected alot worse :)

  • Lol....

  • For real, you got it down. Now all you need is to learn some rhythm and youll be smokin the fools.

  • It was ok but if u wanna keep the rhythm rather than tryin 2 rhyme

  • ha funny I searched white girls rapping cause I'm a whitegirl who raps and this was the first I saw, keep doin it you can only get better. ima have to start posting videos.. fuck the haters!

  • U go girl ! I love tht shit! Keep doing more !!!!

  • i thought it was a free style? it was coo though,u should look up Lil bouncer n let me know wat u think!

  • that was better than I expected it would be

  • damn good lyrics girl !!! u got talent if u want part in a new album coming out in september called the brotherhood let me know

  • U did good haha

  • Damnnn!!! Not Gonna Front But You Got It

  • I looooooooved it!

  • like (:

  • Gurly this wasnt bad but u cant sound like a poem

    ( rap!!!!!!!!!!!!)

  • ayee ok str8 up..at 1st i was like this shyt finna be lame af..but that shyt was raw

  • VERY CUTE!

    

  • Kill yourself

  • needs rhythm rather than being said like a poem, but not bad

  • this is tight I'm black and I Got Turned on by this

  • Got tht jason and freddie shit from boosie...... Nice tho were u from wat ya name lol ima facebook you

  • Hahaha damn gd sht

  • A for effort!! if you like white girls rapping check out my remixes...

  • She was good u never see a lot of white girls rapping

  • Nice rap!!!!! (:

  • readings not freestyle dumb ass white bitch!

    go suck yo daddy dick

  • @FRISKYNOOBQUICKSCOPE You're so mean. She was actually really good. Yeah, okay it's not a freestyle, but it was still a rap &&; it was a goooodd rap. Why comment if you're gonna be ruudde?

  • umm yeah u need shwagg ... i rap you need ALOT of work!

  • love it

  • thats was good get a beat and u can make it

  • A freestyle Rap with notices....

  • Wow very good:)

  • Yea I think ur so dam sexy that was live

  • I like it not a freestyle but your cute so whatever! ;)

  • itz cool but itz not a freestyle dats da only problem

  • gay

    

  • @nene13124 girls cant be gay srry

  • its not freestyle if u write dumby

  • I have nothing sarcastic or mean to say; but as others have so adequately put, IT'S NOT A FREESTYLE IF YOU WROTE IT DOWN (Keep it real pimpin)...Call it for what it is, some lyrics you wrote down and recorded; and everybody hating or saying otherwise, KILL YOURSELF & GET YOUR MIND RIGHT!!! (Not necessarily in that order of course)

  • its ok but you need to put more energy in ya voice

  • this small town white girl has got the proper flow,, put some meaning into your voice and we,ve got ourselves a show, im a city born native i just thought i should let you guys know, justin bieber started off youtube and hes a fucking homo lmfao

  • This is okay, but you gotta do it ON THE SPOT, if u could do that that fast, a little louder and in a rap battle, I would pay to watch that

  • and you are wrong @dankskrilla the meaning of freestyle has change over time. freestyle is not what you write down any more it's whatever comes to the top of your head. freestyle rapping is not that hard that most people think. if you can dance you are a natural freestyle. you just go with the rhythm. for example like a annoying song you hate it so you try to make fun of it to get some laughter for you can like it. it's a mazing you can now through out some rymes. your freestyling.

  • mzkitty60 you should feel stupied because remember she does not sit there whiting lyrics all day. so she whote be famous any time soon and that's more like poerty than rhythm and poetryn. like most people that try to rap. they do it with a beat.

  • youll stop hatin youll leave rasict comments thats why when she become famous from all of youlll hatin youll going to feel stupied

  • lol u got rhyme but ya need ta flow wit dat shit 

  • get some or think of better lyrics ok you fucking suck nice lyrics i can rap better than you

  • its not freestyle if u write it I'm not vein mean jus technical

  • @dankskrilla let me be technical with you, a freestyle is something you write down that is free of style ...wen u dnt write it down it is called out of the dome, over time dumb people i guess tried to change the meaning of "free style" learn some hip hop before you try to get technical

  • aha.. clean.. i likey

  • that was cool

    

  • Youu Goodd

  • not bad

  • Why everybody tryna freestyle??

  • shes old school and doesnt need swagg!!

    

  • damm babygurl, eh yo im from cali and i represent the 805, proud to say i put these lames to shame. now that flow u just spit was bad ass home gurl. wenever u hit southern cali let me know so we came show the fakes how its done!

  • This isnt rap its poetry.

  • make it stop!!!

    

  • Dope

  • american girls rapping is so hot

  • that was the shit homie you need to make it a day to day thing

  • Dumb girl ; You got that off a freestyle rap website. haha idiot. jocking people lyrics.

  • FEATURING KID ROCK PLEASE !!!

  • thats sick as hell!! haha.. im jackin yo lyrics!

  • watch yo mouth lol jp

  • yaa you can rhyme just put it on top of a beat!!

  • sounds more like poetry

  • Please put next time a beat

  • next rap AGAINST A BLACK GUY

  • @TheDaylon21 fool

  • great.. u need to put some more attitude into it tho.. lol u look too innocent

  • Baby Girl You Snaped !

  • this is actually good all it needs a flow over a beat

  • Lol's that's a rhyme rap is always to a beat and doesn't have to rhyme...

  • 0 swagg points earned from this video

  • SICK PUNCHLINES

  • I love this. This is awesome.And having fun is always a great thing. Love the video. :) pretty smile at the end too. hehe

  • rhymes but no flow

  • for all of the people out there that think that thats not a good rap...its GREAT its like so hard to do even sumthin close to tht. So i would just shut up abt it

  • u callin me black i teach u straight how to act

  • u need swagg and u need to take notes cuz u cant rap

  • Dr. Seuss rhymes...

  • Is that Justin Bieber poster behind you?

  • that was nice, i have to give it to her thumbs up ^^

  • no bad flow needs a bit o work tho

  • I love it. Who says white girls can't rap? All it is is a flow and a beat. Simple words we pronunciate and speak. I love that you're real; not trying to be some white girl gangster.

  • omg that was like the best rap i ever heard

  • smalltown white girl obviously wants some bbc

  • A fail for so many reasons.;

  • put a beat to it, and then it'd be amazing, but is goood!

  • I was feelin that. Liked how you kept it real. Just cause you not from the streets dont mean you ain't got somethin to say. Just keep speak'n bout what you know. I got ya back.

  • don't listen to them pricks

    you have talent and good lyrics, try a beat next time :)

  • I like it

  • just no

  • CUTE :)

  • More!!! Gimme more bubblegum lyrics!!! Mmmm one syllable!!! Yes!!!

  • Wonders if she's single with a few minority babies in 2011 to drain the system some more.

  • heyy not too bad haha, its cool that ya did this outta boredome lol

  • i wrote rap lyrics!! :O

  • Thiz a joke, right?

  • I signed in just to say this is really bad. no flow no go!!!

  • she got this off a website, iv been there before

  • f$@k it...not to bad and shes freskin adorable

  • check out "jahbal long dong freestyle" if you want to see an actual freestyle. It's a lot different.

  • OH MY GOD. YOUR SO CUTE!

  • free style means no pen and pad....... sorry hunny next time....

  • thats good luv . ad give u a freestyle contest see if u can rap better then me :D

  • If she were in a rap battle with a beat she would lose cause i doubt she can flow with the beat because of her words and timing.

  • Dope for someone who hasn't done it much. Respect from a performing MC. Peace.

  • Damn, that was sick

    In a positive way, that is

  • Maybe if u had some swag u could atleast be entertaining..next dont generalize black ppl in hip hop..just caz u watch ur basic cable in ur small hick town and see fake liars in the music industry on tv doesnt mean thats how the genre is..also not a freestyle lol..u dont even know hip hop..freestyles are spontanious not plotted..get better or quit!!

  • @Kn0wlegd3isK3y Lol. Calm down faggot.