I like yours a lot. Very creative and a great reference. It is almost like we see his lover in the chair even when she is not there. All I would change is the length. It seems you already knew that though. Good luck to you as well. Cheers.
Thank you for the compliments! I always imagined it as a 1:00 when I storyboarded it. I would have loved to cut a :30 also. I think it would have looked very different. The story might have played out in a completely different way. I probably would have never shown the city or his reaction to it. Thanks again!
First Black Frieghter one I've seen. Really cool. I could see making both a 30 sec and 60 sec version- just get the feeling they might have actually done that. Good luck!
The idea is a homage to the Black Freighter graphic novel inside the Watchmen story. The filmmaker would like to thank DrivenPro for all his hardwork on editing and sound design. Thanks also to Wes, the Mikes', Abi and Jordan. Enjoy!
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MANGSCHEUONiCS 3 years ago
Very original approach. Loved the element of surprise with the city. Nice Black Freighter touch! Good luck!
KatyHux 3 years ago
I like yours a lot. Very creative and a great reference. It is almost like we see his lover in the chair even when she is not there. All I would change is the length. It seems you already knew that though. Good luck to you as well. Cheers.
Saiyd07 3 years ago
Thank you for the compliments! I always imagined it as a 1:00 when I storyboarded it. I would have loved to cut a :30 also. I think it would have looked very different. The story might have played out in a completely different way. I probably would have never shown the city or his reaction to it. Thanks again!
jcarrier1 3 years ago
you should have indeed made it a :30. i almost fell asleep watching this one. nice effort though.
james84u 3 years ago
nice reference to the book dude. good luck
CrackhouseFilms 3 years ago
First Black Frieghter one I've seen. Really cool. I could see making both a 30 sec and 60 sec version- just get the feeling they might have actually done that. Good luck!
Cinemagic74 3 years ago
Thank you! We really wanted to cut a :30 also, but we ran out of time. Editing right up until the last day for submission.
jcarrier1 3 years ago
Excellent. Enjoyed the story.
Playnicesue 3 years ago
The idea is a homage to the Black Freighter graphic novel inside the Watchmen story. The filmmaker would like to thank DrivenPro for all his hardwork on editing and sound design. Thanks also to Wes, the Mikes', Abi and Jordan. Enjoy!
jcarrier1 3 years ago
Great video! The chair sniffer is soooo creepy yet strangely erotic. Good job everyone.
DrivenPro1 3 years ago
Nice work. I like the 'Black Freighter' angle. Very original!
tikiedit 3 years ago