Very nice. I'd have to agree with VisualBrownies about the constructive criticism, but, like him, I very much appreciated the filming, editing, and directing. Very well done, there. Keep up the good work.
i liked the directing, shooting, and editing, but as far as writing and acting was concerned I wasn't a very big fan. The fact that the phone would have needed a chord in order to work was very distracting to me, and the whole plot of the story was that some guy waited for a phone call from a girl he met, and a friend of his told him she wouldn't call. It looked really nice, and it flowed nicely, but the plot was uninteresting and some of the acting was a little bit off.
I appreciate the comment and constructive criticism. I agree the plot could have used some work, although it's tough to develop much in five minutes time. The idea was that regardless of the fact the phone didn't have a cord- it didn't need one. The phone had a sort of direct connection to love, like a "love line" that only Kass could channel. In a world of tiny cell phones, this guy was relying on an old phone to connect him.
The phone doesn't need a chord. Awesome idea. The power of love is strong enough. The whistling reminds me of that Corona commercial though:)
kayakker98 3 years ago
good stuff man!
HisNameWasRobin 3 years ago
met a phone! lol way to go bro! Ha
Raven72563 3 years ago
Very nice. I'd have to agree with VisualBrownies about the constructive criticism, but, like him, I very much appreciated the filming, editing, and directing. Very well done, there. Keep up the good work.
prosoccerprodigy18 3 years ago
i liked the directing, shooting, and editing, but as far as writing and acting was concerned I wasn't a very big fan. The fact that the phone would have needed a chord in order to work was very distracting to me, and the whole plot of the story was that some guy waited for a phone call from a girl he met, and a friend of his told him she wouldn't call. It looked really nice, and it flowed nicely, but the plot was uninteresting and some of the acting was a little bit off.
VisualBrownies 3 years ago
I appreciate the comment and constructive criticism. I agree the plot could have used some work, although it's tough to develop much in five minutes time. The idea was that regardless of the fact the phone didn't have a cord- it didn't need one. The phone had a sort of direct connection to love, like a "love line" that only Kass could channel. In a world of tiny cell phones, this guy was relying on an old phone to connect him.
trknowles 3 years ago
well, your idea is great, but after watching the film i didnt catch it. i only caught it after reading your comment :)
ruscho 3 years ago
i agree with ruscho, it makes a lot more sense now that you've explained it.
VisualBrownies 3 years ago
wow. that was great--- it made me feel hopeful and happy. Thanks a bunch!
northave64 3 years ago 2
really nice, tyler. brought a smile to my face after a really bad day. hope it did well in the contest.
ghoshwhowalks 3 years ago
haha nice walking montage and color correction at the end there.
if you like cinematography and color correction, check out my entry "On The Bench" in HD
watch?v=biQSpcRbNeU
pfranks44 3 years ago 2
good shit... I dig da color coordination...
DavonieSanchez 3 years ago 3
awesome job!!! best one i've seen so far! keep up the good work and good luck
crazycowmoo82 3 years ago 2
you're a star! great job!
zoemaycoleman 3 years ago 2
Oh...we like it! Nice idea! Well done Tyler, and good luck in the contest! Musics and L.A. are greats! Bye!
kevinspag 3 years ago 2
good shit
tilldeath420 3 years ago
left us smiling.
MEGANSIER 3 years ago 3
gotta feel good after viewing this holiday love story.
ellynrleicht 3 years ago 3