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  • I like the plot. It reminds me of the type of character I like to write about. I like the living on the edge kind of character.

  • Nice man. Dialogue looked a bit static though, editing could make it look more flowing, but nice film work man, keep pushing.

  • shout out to the Valley Africans...818 stand up!!!!

  • Some pretty awesome cinematography in here. The sound editing really holds this back as a whole though. But overall it was fun to watch.

  • I thought this movie had ramsey noah and van vicker. man!!! now this sucks. my two favs are not even in it. man

  • In due time. Be sure to check out the trailer from the one-hour series finale.

  • I already checked the trailer, and it's something to be expectant of. Keep on doing what you are doing bro, and you'll see where it takes you.

  • if i may ask, why do you name the series the Nigerian? just curious, no disrespect

  • That's the title character. The story is about a Nigerian hatchet man working in the US. Thanks for watching.

  • oh ic, but when is the finale coming on tho'

  • Summer 2009.

  • @awhyk maybe because his nigerian

  • Great work Rich: All shot in LA? You planning to roll it out on TV, or Internet only? Music rock: Like 'Smell This!'

  • That song fits the ending like a glove. In answer to your question, we are a direct-to-Internet production company. That way we control everything. Thanks for watching.

  • I'd like to see more too Rich......:-) Julie

  • Hi Julie -- Thanks for the comment. More, more, more on the way. I'm ending the series with a "one hour" finale. We start shooting on Saturday, May 2 for a summer premiere. Thanks for watching and check back. -- Rich.

  • I think you started off really well some good shots, would have been nice to see more of the story tho i do think it was a little short. Simple is often good but you also need to be able to connect with the characters and i dont think we were given long enough to do that. You had some really nice shots though and if you added a bit more to it it could be a great story as well. Kat x

  • Thanks for the feedback. Very much appreciated. Please check back for the one hour series finale which digs deeper into the characters. These short clips are just bits and pieces created to promote the series finale. Thanks for watching!

  • Mbariket is Nigerian. Gamba is Ghanain. Thanks for the comment.

  • this is quality.

    btw, r u nigerian mr mbariket/gamba?

  • I loved the beginning but there are some things I think you should work on. Most shots were shaky when they didn't need to be and the editing wasn't clean enough. I thought the sot ideas were great but they need to be longer and cleaner cut. Also I thought the dialogue wasn't believable enough. It needs to sound more realistic. All in all, it was good but it wasn't best it could have been.

  • Thanks for the comment. Much appreciated. We'll definitely work on improving the editing and dialogue in upcoming episodes. Stay tuned.

  • better DP to compose shots that work in sequence and a better editor for shot lengths, cutting points, and transitions... also, a boom mic... the words on the screen aren't cutting it.... like the idea, the acting is good (props director) and so far, the production quality isn't bad at all... the camera work, editing, and sound take me out of the movie at least five times though... keep cleaning it up and good luck!

  • Little shaken at moments and way to many cut shots you need to abolish some more charter dept maybe less first person views and more 3rd person view in a different angle those are great angles if you are a photographer but what works in photo rarely helps in movies unless its showing scenery well better then what i can do keep up the good work

  • Intriguing. Nice work Rich.

  • Thank you.

  • Great trailer! It's a great idea for a movie.

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