not bad, if you put a beat under it it will be amazing
8Venom8 1 year ago
mashallah
pinkrose101s 2 years ago
good poem but he dint have to say it that fast it wouldve sounded better if he said it slower
Jazaak Allahu Khair akhi
SonOfHassan 2 years ago
I liked it. Masallah. The rhyming is on point. Just slow down a little. I loved your accent.
KiaTheRisingStar 2 years ago
Mashallah bro, nice work man.
OnTheStraightPath 2 years ago 2
nice
nazmul786 3 years ago 2
not bad, if you put a beat under it it will be amazing
8Venom8 1 year ago
mashallah
pinkrose101s 2 years ago
good poem but he dint have to say it that fast it wouldve sounded better if he said it slower
pinkrose101s 2 years ago
Jazaak Allahu Khair akhi
SonOfHassan 2 years ago
I liked it. Masallah. The rhyming is on point. Just slow down a little. I loved your accent.
KiaTheRisingStar 2 years ago
Mashallah bro, nice work man.
OnTheStraightPath 2 years ago 2
nice
nazmul786 3 years ago 2