Interesting... I would not say it was a great piece of music nor would I say it was bad.. You tried and nobody is ever too perfect in composing a song. It was good for an original piece. :)
a good friend is an honest friend. im really sorry but that was extremly horroble! i started to play way better things even on my second week of piano lessons. sorry again.....
this is really good but maybe consider adding some words or something- also you should know that the first chord is played in what ive done by linkin park but I dont really think it matters because its common
good...but one thing, and this is just advice im definately not saying your song is bad cuz it definately isnt, but it seems a little choppy, because it changes majors and minors a lot. but you have a good style of music! nice job!!
THAT WAS GREAT me and my friend made up a sng together ...well part of a song but then we stopped idk why i still kinda remember it though like i was left hand she was right we also made a song go to my channel and look for it
good job on making up your own song but you should try to keep the rythym unless its supposed to sound faster then slower because when you transition your fingers to the different positions it gets slower then faster
Can you check out my piano song I made up. my first video on my channel. I would love to have some comments on it so I could do better on my next one. So please check it out.
hey good job :] coincidentally, i actually was bored today sitting at my piano & i tried coming up with a melody myself too lol. it's fun to experiment, isnt it?
i could imagine a couple of double-bass' in the last wee bit. i liked it but was a little bit 'here n there' wasnt really a consistant tune. keep playing n posting
sounds like a good introduction to something, but I think it needs more development... sounds like it is leading into low, dark chords that pulsate with some kind of... well, a melody of some type (almost heavy metalish as odd as that might seem to someone who didn't live through that era of music!).
jeeeez thats great!!!!
XxTheRobloxLadyxX 2 months ago
Woooww I Love It( :
FlawlessBxtch14 3 months ago
Interesting... I would not say it was a great piece of music nor would I say it was bad.. You tried and nobody is ever too perfect in composing a song. It was good for an original piece. :)
HAha413XX 4 months ago
Impressive!
Check out the song I just uploaded
klrpiano 5 months ago
its ok
unclefester110 7 months ago
its just another virsion of your other song but shorter and has less fingering it makes it sound more unike
marilysabe 7 months ago
OFFF KEEY!! BAD!
mramruoa 9 months ago
a good friend is an honest friend. im really sorry but that was extremly horroble! i started to play way better things even on my second week of piano lessons. sorry again.....
ccen1 1 year ago
What keys are u using i have music class tomorrow i want to play that piece
MrsLOVECullen 1 year ago
ameture .... and .... repetetive... and the timing is off.. get a better rythm and add quiete spots ... it was alright i could help you alot
niggateen 1 year ago
@niggateen
this video is 2.5 years old..
monster98012 1 year ago
The song was good, but a little repetitive.
97harpy 1 year ago
creeepy!.....i like it!...makes me hypnotized...put this song on like a puzzle game on the internet or sumthin
coldblud101 1 year ago
Its alright kinda freaky emo :I but good job :D
VDAYZ1226 1 year ago
sorry but its way to consistent
Evanvids321 1 year ago
I liked it. Had this evil or supernatural feel to it.
CainTheMain 1 year ago
omg can i please put this piano part in a new hardstyle song imma make?
-dj digital abuse-
Jinchi68 1 year ago
whatever
monster98012 1 year ago
this is really good but maybe consider adding some words or something- also you should know that the first chord is played in what ive done by linkin park but I dont really think it matters because its common
hypermusic720 2 years ago
i have the same piano as you .. lol
pianogirl80 2 years ago
@pianogirl80 lol me too xD
Mario59001 1 year ago
the beginning is part of one of linkin parks song
guitarslasher9241 2 years ago
@guitarslasher9241
its not what ive done, i can play that
monster98012 2 years ago
its got part of the intro
guitarslasher9241 2 years ago
@guitarslasher9241 no way.
mechaniel0 1 year ago
no i think my songs are better
drum9528 2 years ago
Just repeating keys..then you pressed a key near the end. good. but nothing special
TheVirtualconsole 2 years ago
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TheVirtualconsole 2 years ago
i thnk it was pretty good... its just try to ad some chords and tensions in there... liek mabye a 9th...11thh b13th
pwhzach17 2 years ago
this is amazing dude im no where is good as you but you should check my song if you want
kingspida18 2 years ago
the start sound s like a real song
TheAceOfSpades147 2 years ago
no offense, but it is not that good... it is just my opinion! But is not the kind of music I make up on the piano.
msrandom146 2 years ago
well i mean i made one like this.. the beginning is the same but then it changes
ilani1000 2 years ago
omg i made the same song
ilani1000 2 years ago
Holy shit me too, nah. You shouldn't try to upset people ;/
Koutakente 2 years ago
good...but one thing, and this is just advice im definately not saying your song is bad cuz it definately isnt, but it seems a little choppy, because it changes majors and minors a lot. but you have a good style of music! nice job!!
xfigurexsk8rx4evax 2 years ago
I have idea! How about July Ballad!
SparklieGirl12 2 years ago
nice job. i can't believe you made that up!!!!!!
Caboose1341 2 years ago
this sounds kewl
94Hollister 2 years ago
this should be in a zelda game
blue2kid3 2 years ago
pretty good dude pretty good
ThaliaLuvsFunnyStuff 2 years ago
hey guys u know i didnt buy my keyboard someone left it right outside my door
its just a 49 key piano but everything works its great
DasherDylan123 2 years ago
Niice short but nice so how many have you made?
Darkilluionoyster 2 years ago
ive made 20 of my own songs, but only posted 2 videos on youtube
monster98012 2 years ago
hey bro cool song its diffrent than what i play.....look at ma vid...let me know what you think
jdogjdub1 2 years ago
very nice video
algebraguy11 2 years ago
nice^^
jantsje123 2 years ago
THAT WAS GREAT me and my friend made up a sng together ...well part of a song but then we stopped idk why i still kinda remember it though like i was left hand she was right we also made a song go to my channel and look for it
cookielov21 2 years ago
isnt one of those rythms from the linkin park song....
TwilightSagaOME 2 years ago
kinda of but not really. i do use G and D and E flat in the song
monster98012 2 years ago
eh kinda good
DuraSam 2 years ago
u sure know how 2 make a great song!!
Ladiesman122333 2 years ago
good job on making up your own song but you should try to keep the rythym unless its supposed to sound faster then slower because when you transition your fingers to the different positions it gets slower then faster
callerredblack 2 years ago
Verry good can u guys please listen to my made up song and other vidoes?
ElliottHerrington 2 years ago
Can you check out my piano song I made up. my first video on my channel. I would love to have some comments on it so I could do better on my next one. So please check it out.
How2Piano 2 years ago
i have the same keybord as yuu
moonlight1507 2 years ago
That was good. But you guys should see ElliottHerringtons vids he's only 11 and he's amazing.
Hearingtones 2 years ago
amazing
ssjboy55 2 years ago
doesn't flow very well. just made up a whole bunch of "cool" sounding things and put them together. no range of emotion.
SeanSarutobi 2 years ago
you make up your own songs....
so talented
teamedwardandjacobx4 2 years ago
AMAZING HOW DID YA DO DAT!
mcfly4everrocks1012 2 years ago
i press the keys and sound comes out!
monster98012 2 years ago
Lol. ur good. Hey. CHeck out my song. its not as good as urs.
dguevara0130 2 years ago
lol
iluvecheesecake 2 years ago
you made up this song?!?!?! LOVE IT!!!
migordismibabies 2 years ago
Wish I could play like that ...
blueleopardmedia 3 years ago
you are so good at the piano
SuperBonkers3 3 years ago
that was amazing
your really good
Blueyedemin 3 years ago
ur really good!!
AshtinAllie 3 years ago
very good
fbksdbfkfd 3 years ago
cool
kiarraweb 3 years ago
hey good job :] coincidentally, i actually was bored today sitting at my piano & i tried coming up with a melody myself too lol. it's fun to experiment, isnt it?
nonay10 3 years ago
my brother made a song to it sound sort of lik urs but not eggzactly
pinkjonaslvr 3 years ago
my sister is good at piano her name is holly stell search her on youtube tons of videos of her
noahetnies 3 years ago
good song
m76matthew2 3 years ago
how long have u played the piano
blackmarshalarts 3 years ago
since last may
monster98012 3 years ago
i would never be able to do that >_>
chris789789789789789 3 years ago
that was pretty good! it seems familiar to me but it was good!
candm2597 3 years ago
it was still pretty cool and scary so 4/5
boooz3 3 years ago
mehhhhhhhhhh gdgdeflatdgd that was from linkin park..... I could make one of these in 5 seconds
boooz3 3 years ago
i mixed a c with it to make it sound better
monster98012 3 years ago
sick nice man, your so good!
algebraguy11 3 years ago
sick nice man, your so good!
algebraguy11 3 years ago
boring and poor playing try not to repeat so much
1o2o3e 3 years ago
They're all really cool. :)
ThatGirlLibbs92 3 years ago
hey that was pretty good
kidsnteenshelp 3 years ago
sick nice awesome!
trevman97 3 years ago
:) coool.
petrie11329 3 years ago
awesome
PenguinLandRulz 3 years ago
that was awsome
hawkiscrazy9 3 years ago
cool
sanchezarvin13 3 years ago
Hey this is some kind of spooky film-music idea! If you were friends with Spielberg you'd be a millionaire by now!
FeBlandMusic 3 years ago
wow thanks, i can play this song even better now!
monster98012 3 years ago
i could imagine a couple of double-bass' in the last wee bit. i liked it but was a little bit 'here n there' wasnt really a consistant tune. keep playing n posting
kyleM5055 3 years ago
you rock
dabiribd 3 years ago
OMG OOOOOO!!!!!!!!
crazyhotbitch4042 3 years ago
wow cool song m8
millyindisney 3 years ago
sweet 5/5 for sure!!!!
jigsawisagod 3 years ago
rly good job!
P.S. u spelled untitled wrong in ur info column :D
sWeEtLiLHipPieChiC 3 years ago
i like it i play piano
SPG12345689 3 years ago
Wow! That's really cool. Your so talented.
ThatGirlLibbs92 3 years ago
are you sure that you made that song up because i think i've heard that song before , but awsome job.
Annab12338 3 years ago
yes im sure
monster98012 3 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
hey check out my song I made
ZjaySD 3 years ago
to short and didn't sound very good except for the first part
ZjaySD 3 years ago
sweet!
legotoon9299 3 years ago
Dude!!! Nice...5 stars...I like how you had certain parts sincipaided(sp?)
flatfrog03 3 years ago
thanks
monster98012 3 years ago
your very talented!
keyboardpianoguy 3 years ago
great! 5/5
pianoguy1000 3 years ago
very nice
ssjboy55 3 years ago
dude good job im trying to learn how to play mary had a little lamb on keyboard good!!!
100words4an00b 3 years ago
Have you Seen Ronald Jenkees...?? You are very very good. Glad I got this.
OneProduktionFilm 3 years ago
dude thats sounds like a good song u should write an album
DDRuniversaldancers 3 years ago
good job!
CraziestStuffEver 3 years ago
your skilled at playing the piano
chuckletube1 3 years ago
cool
dragonforce486 3 years ago
awesome man
SmoshArmy 3 years ago
that is cool great job
skaterman1244 3 years ago
lily a hoe bag
BigFish0806 3 years ago
hiyuvuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
BigFish0806 3 years ago
bit standard but ok..
Frenchbabex 3 years ago
thats pretty amazing!!!
x2hourslatex 3 years ago
Nice mabey cring soul for a title
2wxyz42production 3 years ago
good job
iCuzns 3 years ago
it was kind of like a OH NO! music... but I admit, it was pretty good!
animemangamaker 3 years ago
Great job
dabiribd 3 years ago
i liked its pretty cool,
GREAT Job!
jchina3 3 years ago
awsome
macayla17 3 years ago
that was really good
x2hourslatex 3 years ago
awesome your very talented
thesubscribingretard 3 years ago
your good
tannerjustin 3 years ago
u shud call it the disapointed sheep
RandyMarshIsAwesome 3 years ago
i love the the intro! amazing!
HurriCaneKaTrina2011 3 years ago
Good Job
DavidOates15 3 years ago
awesome vid
thevideochannel27 3 years ago
man you play sooo good
JoeJonasLuver756 3 years ago
thats like a hawloween type of song
glorea11 3 years ago
ok its good
dasan009 3 years ago
sooooo sickkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
momo2492 3 years ago
he's so cool
manila5511 3 years ago
i like it
BigFish0806 3 years ago
wow you are good
creep105 3 years ago
i love this becuse he made it
manila5511 3 years ago
great job
dabiribd 3 years ago
thats sick what are you going to call it you should call it peter in the dark:]
momo2492 3 years ago
thats a funny name
monster98012 3 years ago
wow hes good i wish i was that good at the piano i can only play the guitar and the violin
lexichick247 3 years ago
thats pretty tight, i made up a song for my band and the piano part kinda sounds like that
good job
cauley595 3 years ago
thats really good. im always just sittin at the piano makin up stuff but it never sounds that good :( lol
AbercrombieGirly4evr 3 years ago 2
Amazing! Piano is too cool, I mean keyboard. You should call it Walking into Darkness, I love the name that person said.
RMPerformances 3 years ago
nice song. u should name it. like "Walking into the Darkness" or something like that. lol. (<:
unotwotrace 3 years ago
It's a keyboard
RandyMarshIsAwesome 3 years ago
oh wonderful!
xD
TheReaIJosh 3 years ago
wow that's so great. i wish i could do that
5/5
pianoguy1000 3 years ago
kewl
scarlet0192 3 years ago
sweet
simburg13 3 years ago
love the song sounds like a scary movie song!
lifeisgood56 3 years ago
wow that's cool
Youcme1 3 years ago
luv the song dude!!! it reminds me of those old scary movies! and i really love those movies!
samegiterdun 3 years ago
SICK MAN
GreenAndBlueTatoo 3 years ago
im jealous!like seriously
the begining reminds me of what i've done by linkin park
anywho
im so subscrinbing
terriersrule1234 3 years ago
sounds like a good introduction to something, but I think it needs more development... sounds like it is leading into low, dark chords that pulsate with some kind of... well, a melody of some type (almost heavy metalish as odd as that might seem to someone who didn't live through that era of music!).
Good start, though.
122172639 3 years ago
Yo thats Good
Figyz 3 years ago
Whoa nice At this rate oyur better than me on my vid. Lol seem like Final fantasy Boss battle theme.
hunterrisk3 3 years ago
Whoa!! You're really good!!!
Leeanneyfanny 3 years ago
its a keyboard 4 cryin out loud
prettyawsum7 3 years ago
i think it was very cool 5*****
XxPuraVidaxX 3 years ago
hey 5 starz
ceeweezey 3 years ago
hey friend awesome song i'm glad I subbed you!
ceeweezey 3 years ago
i love it! it sort of paints a mental image.
singerisme 3 years ago
that is reallly good keep it up
1HyperStudios1 3 years ago
Astounding. A piano god, that's what you are.
Flaminglog 3 years ago
wow nice hand job buddy ;)
sjtwba101 3 years ago 2
thats comedy gold is what that is
prettyawsum7 3 years ago
thank u man....thank u
sjtwba101 3 years ago
wow your good at that! 5/5 for you!!!
DjEternalMusic 3 years ago
your really good :)
5/5
jooseboxxx 3 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
you are amazingly talented!
sub 4 sub any1?
FLiXiRProDuCtIONS 3 years ago
Nice!
brandokelly 3 years ago
wow great job
JeepersItsDisney 3 years ago
sounds like the exorcist song
Nightelfyo 3 years ago
it was okay 4/5 i just didnt like how you kept getting higher then higher and the prt in th middle made no sense. BUT 4/5!!!
myUSAxxxforever 3 years ago
really nice subed 5/5
feline98 3 years ago
GREAT!
Mikeyrenk 3 years ago
gr8 job my friend!!
GHOST Seekers
fiwaszewski 3 years ago