I love "Fences," but this reminds me off "Don't be a menace to South Central while drinking your juice in the hood," the son is older than the father! nice receding hair line, next time get a young actor for the part of Cory. Also he is supposed to be an athlete.
The guy in the white shirt is swaying back and forth WAYYYYYYY too much. He needs to work on delivering his lines without so much head movement as well
Pretty good, just work on maintaining the audience attention when your building your scene. Also needs additional makeup to just age the character physically. Other than that the acting was pretty good.
Really wasnt a bad job, the prior comments are funny though, i take it this is like your first or se ond job, if i am right then you will get better.
If this is your 20th job then maybe school can help you out, again not a bad job...
teereed31 3 months ago
Cool. If you know the play, they followed it well. I'm teaching this in high school so I'm looking for all different interpretations.
Best to you both!
Myke
mykeblaise 10 months ago
I love "Fences," but this reminds me off "Don't be a menace to South Central while drinking your juice in the hood," the son is older than the father! nice receding hair line, next time get a young actor for the part of Cory. Also he is supposed to be an athlete.
tonyradview79 1 year ago
The guy in the white shirt is swaying back and forth WAYYYYYYY too much. He needs to work on delivering his lines without so much head movement as well
rjgoody 2 years ago
what the hell is wrong with these morons
kurt9876543210 2 years ago
wow, inspiring
kurt9876543210 2 years ago
Great job! This was great to watch.
abfabjurisprudence 2 years ago
Pretty good, just work on maintaining the audience attention when your building your scene. Also needs additional makeup to just age the character physically. Other than that the acting was pretty good.
chermation 2 years ago