It was great, I really liked how you didn't use much of the kissing/sex scenes..you used the simple scenes to show that behind all the lust and want they did love each other. With the lying in the street and all that. <33 it was great, very simple and easy but strait to the point.
It was great, I really liked how you didn't use much of the kissing/sex scenes..you used the simple scenes to show that behind all the lust and want they did love each other. With the lying in the street and all that. <33 it was great, very simple and easy but strait to the point.
b345 4 years ago
if you havent seen the notebook then you probably wouldnt know what was going on
MarcusFenixtheMan 4 years ago
You did a great job, although if the kiss in the rain would have been longer, then it would have been perfect!
Good job!
Abril507 5 years ago