I think this one really works because there's the continuity of the pace from the beginning through to the fight scene, yet it still gears up a notch - which I think it really needs. I think you've got the beginning spot on and of course, I love the end.
I don't really have any further suggestions but I think this was really good =] by far my favourite of your attempts.
@JazielValentine Thank you! I finally feel a bit satisfied with this one. Something I didn't quite feel with the others. Still not fully satisfied though, but satisfied enough to end it with this one. :p
Righto, watched both 3 and 4 now.
I think this one really works because there's the continuity of the pace from the beginning through to the fight scene, yet it still gears up a notch - which I think it really needs. I think you've got the beginning spot on and of course, I love the end.
I don't really have any further suggestions but I think this was really good =] by far my favourite of your attempts.
JazielValentine 1 year ago
@JazielValentine Thank you! I finally feel a bit satisfied with this one. Something I didn't quite feel with the others. Still not fully satisfied though, but satisfied enough to end it with this one. :p
finalfantasyhero 1 year ago
The best out of the 4
shiningalchemist91 1 year ago
Okay so I really like when you added in the tremble sound effect thinger when the little goblin type creatures appear.
I'm not sure about the transfer between for the battle scene.
I'm iffy about the tremble effect still playing after the battle scene and the words come up.
But overall I like it
Kumotta9 1 year ago