Amateur Manga: "Elite Sight"

[SHUSHIKID]

HITMAN REBORN -_- GASP

[LOLGIRLZ123451]

19 is an adult not boy good job

[JShamw0w]

@LOLGIRLZ123451 Lmao big deal. He's a male right?

[lilrey1014]

Hey cool comic when u finish it can u put it on YouTube

[acex320]

WHOA you sound kind of like ash ketchum HA HA HA!!!!

[JShamw0w]

@xLuciferProductionsx I know I realize that the beginning diary entries were quite cheesy or tacky. I have become a much better writer since then. Thank you for your critisism.

[xLuciferProductionsx]

Hey bro. I really like your idea, but I must critique your writing style. It seems you're trying to hard to get your point across. Make your chracter seem more relaxed. Not 'I'm a teenager and we like violence'. Keep working on it though.

[NSZ951LIZS]

whitch pencil do yu use? please answer quik!!!!

thanks

[JShamw0w]

@NSZ951LIZS Actually this is a pen. I believe I made it with one of those Pilot g pens that you can find anywhere

[lostsouloffps]

dude that's epic! i would actually spend money to buy that! it looks awesome and inspiring! now im making my own comics

BTW i thumbs upped and i may subscribe if you make more :)

[Kimiko11111]

Good comic, good story. How do you draw in the tiny panels like that? I'm so bad at that Dx

Also, I love Mark Crilley with a burning passion.

:D

[xXnikmanXx]

woow

[experthot2]

Very bad... 

[sianthaibright]

nice comic you should check out mine too. I hoped you continued the story lol. I think you should make his dairy seem I don't know less, 'I like guns I don't know why' I'm not trying to be rude I have no intention of being rude but, his dairy entry seems kind of strange in a way. Anyway, subbed I hope you don't take this comment the wrong idea. Nice concept though.

[JShamw0w]

@sianthaibright I agree with what your saying but I stopped making this and drawing period. A long time ago because It got boring. But I draw still only when people ask me to make something for them

[Sharkhearts101]

good jobXD

[thebigjpd]

i like your style of drawing and storyline. YOU ROCK =)

[velstor]

are you implying jfk was corrupt?

[JShamw0w]

@velstor When Did I mention JFK? I might have but sorry this video is old so I don't really remember it. But I definately do not think that. Jfk was an awesome prez

[xxxmachinegun]

dude tell me when ur done with it.ill pay 4 it.=-p

[liapryce]

nice! like the backgrounds and the gun on the front page a lot

the ppl r good 2 xD

[Mangaboy1016]

now i wanna make a vid of my manga. nice job dude long live manga

[MrSketchtastic]

not bad bro

[Indiemannews]

Dude!! Your 12!? Your good. I like you, your imaginitive, artistic, and bold. I'm kepping my eye on the anime market for a new book: elite sight

[justwatchin655]

awesome! unique drawing style... something fresh to look at. I started drawing a manga a few days ago... its more complicated than i thought XD

[HizuPlague]

I don't like the shapes of the body or the faces. But your inking is really good.

[JShamw0w]

Lol It actually isn't inking. Its just doodles.I never pencil or anything just improvise. I wanted to focus on more of the story. In my school people like to read fun stories as long as the drawings are half decent.

[HakuroTheKaiDog]

Thats awesome its nice to see people express themselves by making mangas doodles and etc. nice job 5 stars :)

[secondworldFB]

awesome i draw manga too

[masterbatman818]

cool jefery ill call u when i see u this is shaid bmb honeybuttercup lolz ley me get ur aim.

[JShamw0w]

Lol xD nnnn----SHHAAAAAAAIIIID!

[cinnamon586]

i really like this so far, hopefully you'll be able to post more up every once and a while :)

[JShamw0w]

Cool thanks. I actually have gotten far with this but I need a memory card in order to scan the pics to read.

[cinnamon586]

cool...awesome! hopefully you'll get a card!!!

[JShamw0w]

My name isn't John Pefferd By the way.

Its Jeffrey Almonte thats why it says "Story Created By Jeffrey Almonte"

[ventusbakuganuser]

i like you book so far ^.^ please do more

[PaperGTutorials]

your good a drawing