Your cinematography overall is quite good, and you had good sound recording. I have a couple of suggestions for the future. Try to keep a consistent tone in your film: at times it seemed to be taking itself seriously and other times flippantly. Either of those tones could have worked, but both together made the film confusing. A second suggestion, control the pace. The film felt long, and could have been edited to 10 minutes and not lost anything. Good luck in the future.
Your cinematography overall is quite good, and you had good sound recording. I have a couple of suggestions for the future. Try to keep a consistent tone in your film: at times it seemed to be taking itself seriously and other times flippantly. Either of those tones could have worked, but both together made the film confusing. A second suggestion, control the pace. The film felt long, and could have been edited to 10 minutes and not lost anything. Good luck in the future.
320Pictures 10 months ago
Love! Your first production, and you rocked it. You don't realize how proud I am still!
BabsChappy 10 months ago