this is inmensley better than your last, and the guitar player seems to have learned how to play. In my opinion the songs tempo is a bit to fast for your performance, slow it down a bit and you'll be a ok!!
So I just listened to both take 1&2 of your cover and I thought they were both great but this one has a much better sounding guitar. Somewhat mellower and sorta scooped out sounding, I like it. But anyway, great job.
I love this song. you both did a great job on it. i want to sing along whenever i hear it! i want it on my iPod - not the secondhand serenade one but your cover.
The last few videos are a good deal better than the earlier ones. If you want constructive criticism...
For the guitarist, you're unsteady. There are many moments when you rush then go off rhythm.
For the singer, you miss certain intervals and sing flat. When the notes are close together, you generally hit it. When either the intervals are large or the notes are fast, you're usually flat.
your pretty good....but id say try not to be so nasal with your sound....it makes it sound whiny and such....not that im better or worse but thats what i think....or you should try country
You sound quite nasal several times, but you were both very good :)
F0reverThe5ickestK1d 9 months ago
I love this 2nd attempt a lot better :) didnt like the first version, but sooo much better this time :) well done :)
djjaws7 9 months ago
LOVE YOUR VOICE and your super gorgeous =) Check out my vids =)
coltonswaikoski 1 year ago
Iv seen both videos. Good job ! Much better strumming on this video the other it was really...Noobish .... But good shit mate!
chill3r3k 1 year ago
this is inmensley better than your last, and the guitar player seems to have learned how to play. In my opinion the songs tempo is a bit to fast for your performance, slow it down a bit and you'll be a ok!!
pinopinopal 1 year ago
Schöne Grüße aus Deutschland, richtig geil (: Weiter so :P
Candyman1990 1 year ago
girl playing the guitar is awesome
rawrrslol 1 year ago
I love this! :) I'd love to listen to this on my iPod, great job!
Akeefer08 1 year ago
@Akeefer08 would you like a copy of the mp3 as well??
Charridom 1 year ago
@Charridom i would =)
Kadaj557 1 year ago
she isnt a very stong singer but the guitar person is good
MDyete 2 years ago 3
nice smile...
try to play MOMENT OF TRUTH by fm static...an incredible song.... and look my version of moment of truth on my personal accoun.....
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valerio9100 2 years ago
yall did great on this song
sweetdirt125 2 years ago
i love that song, and nice guitar playing. i wish i was that good.
ucansuckmylollypop 2 years ago
the girl at the guitar is like.... really good at guitar... she's like smooth in playing it.
zairaluver 2 years ago
can you tell me the strumming pattern for the chorus..i really want to learn this as my first song in the guitar
StackShack 2 years ago
So I just listened to both take 1&2 of your cover and I thought they were both great but this one has a much better sounding guitar. Somewhat mellower and sorta scooped out sounding, I like it. But anyway, great job.
1BurtonBoy1 2 years ago
I love this song. you both did a great job on it. i want to sing along whenever i hear it! i want it on my iPod - not the secondhand serenade one but your cover.
meeeluv93 2 years ago
i could send you an mp3 if u want
Charridom 2 years ago
ohmygosh!
id love that :)
meeeluv93 2 years ago
can you message me your email address?
Charridom 2 years ago
can you tell me the chords ?
i wanna play this for this one girl i like :)
eatmycakes6 2 years ago
Am F C G for each verse
F G << for the "so, hold your breath"
C Am F G << Chorus
Am F C G << bridge
... sometimes bar chords, sometimes regular
Charridom 2 years ago
I'm a fan!
nice voice and respect for the guitarplayer!
keep going!
moonlight154 2 years ago
Really good Really Hott
Vannaaaaaaa 2 years ago
Much better then the first take (:
Julztheory 2 years ago
The last few videos are a good deal better than the earlier ones. If you want constructive criticism...
For the guitarist, you're unsteady. There are many moments when you rush then go off rhythm.
For the singer, you miss certain intervals and sing flat. When the notes are close together, you generally hit it. When either the intervals are large or the notes are fast, you're usually flat.
tsolo2003 2 years ago
i wanna marry the blonde:]
kevdog1337 2 years ago
I Really like your voice :)
bridmike 2 years ago
Much better then the 1st take... keep it up girls. :o)
finsat 2 years ago
Good job!!
Nice pair......=)
Francesco0685 2 years ago
amazing job !
(:
jessicamarie1996 2 years ago
awesome. keep it up. thanks for the vid.
uraniumw 2 years ago
Wow that was great!!! your awsome. I have no critisism, cuz that was cool. But . . I want you to do more. :D :D :D :D
SmileyPeaceKeeper 2 years ago
wow that was still really good (:
ShortyTee22 2 years ago
Your first one was better ... :) Guitar is better in the first one too. (Least the beat is a little nicer. You do have more chords in this one.)
GodGiftedMusician 2 years ago
is that an ibanez artwood u're using? nice. haha.
aallagain 2 years ago
u've improved and learnt the words lol, good job! yal good!
8osman8 2 years ago
thanks!!!
Charridom 2 years ago
your pretty good....but id say try not to be so nasal with your sound....it makes it sound whiny and such....not that im better or worse but thats what i think....or you should try country
AmbiixROX 2 years ago
You've improved so much from your last video!!
Keep it up
CuriousSmiles 2 years ago
good job yall. i like it
silentusassassin 2 years ago
guitarist is cute :)
singer is a little pitchy
but nice job to both
BTF6969 2 years ago
wow that was amazinggg. ur also very beautiful :] mad props to both of you
griefer1 2 years ago
nicee.
also, the singer's cute.
McKyCon 2 years ago
AMazing!
ijhel94 2 years ago
just kidding lol sorry but ya'll r really good this should be the actual song ;)
workshopsforaliens 2 years ago
bestt onee you'v sanngg(:
kacekace223 2 years ago
Awesome Job. :]
ScandalScenePictures 2 years ago
much better i do say, than the first that i just watched
Irockyousuck4ever 2 years ago 2
Now if the singer was someone not as pretty this song would be rated 3 or 4 stars.
dcoolf100x 2 years ago
i like it :)
mlr2107 2 years ago
fabulous job , just like before , beautiful !!!
kaczerm 2 years ago
so amazing!!! u guys need to keep this up!!! i love it!!!! plus this song is my fav!!!!
alyssawiles55 2 years ago
your awesome and cute :3
keep singing / other person playing guitar.
I wish i could have a girl who sings :( i can play and sing a little but duets are awesome :>
take care!
ClosedSlot 2 years ago
beautiful =]
Glacious 2 years ago
very cool! You both compliment each other very well
Guitar player did a great job and the singer's voice is becoming much more controlled and stronger than since I first started watching your videos.
Well done
tronious 2 years ago
thanks so much for all your comments!
your advice always helps.. :D
Charridom 2 years ago
I agree your voice sounds really good in this one.
dr1980 2 years ago
u are the best
josephc1477 2 years ago
They are both Great!! :)
BUNDERSON18 2 years ago
Amazing :)
LuvsCookie 2 years ago