That was absolutely amazing and brought a tear to my eyes. Your use of physics and biology as analogies for love was profound. God spoke literally spoke through you. Namaste
To be better than a drink; now THAT's high praise. To be relieved of the bondage of alcoholism and addiction, THAT's a moment of grace which, if you are locked in its grasp, I wish you.
That was absolutely amazing and brought a tear to my eyes. Your use of physics and biology as analogies for love was profound. God spoke literally spoke through you. Namaste
duafe1975 1 year ago
This is so good I feel like I don't have to drink any more today.
wildwakachica 2 years ago
To be better than a drink; now THAT's high praise. To be relieved of the bondage of alcoholism and addiction, THAT's a moment of grace which, if you are locked in its grasp, I wish you.
VPYNCHON 2 years ago
Thank you. You art and soul has helped life...and has come from the source of love....like the promise of spring. Thank you.
P.S. "one day at a time."
wildwakachica 2 years ago
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wildwakachica 2 years ago
distressingly good. beautiful harmony of scientific imagery and emotions.
theevmeister 2 years ago
thanks; happy you enjoyed it!
VPYNCHON 2 years ago
Woo feelin a little hot in here haha. Don't curve so fast my sweet, I feel a mid air collision could be comin on here lol.
TheOriain99 2 years ago
nice poem...I like it alot
Jared3223 3 years ago
holy shit. that was great. i fall for your last line.
zig023 3 years ago 3
glad you like it!
VPYNCHON 3 years ago
wow!
:@
danicacancan 3 years ago
Absolutely captivating.
Thanks for posting.
maurieer 3 years ago
This re-states my sentiments very nicely. Thank you. One love.
themanyone 4 years ago
Excellent, you have taken two of my greatest passions and portrayed them with utter beauty. I thank you.
Poetswar 4 years ago 2
Execlent, you have taken two of my greatest passions and potraied them with utter beauty. I thank you.
Poetswar 4 years ago
Thank you for this very curvy gift to all of us.
Your words reach beyond poetry and your poetry breaks free of modern romance to ultimately meet LOVE everywhere and in everyone.
(Your poem could/should be a great song. When that happens, I'd curve to make the music video.)Fred
Evenmen 4 years ago
thanks; you can see it at ninetymeetingsinninetydays dot com slash Pynchon_Poetry
VPYNCHON 4 years ago
I love this poem deeply, very meaningful and profound at the same time, i would love to see how you've written it out.
tommilou 4 years ago