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  • I only just now discovered and read yiur story and I am already DYING waiting for the next part! dont let your extrordinary talent go to waste! Pretty please with a cherry on top, post :)

  • What's wrong with you?!? Are you trying to kill me?!? POST!!

  • post soon need to know what happened

  • Omg omg omg

    i need to know wat happens post soon

  • AHHHH!!!!! Yu haven't posted in a while... PLEASE POST ASAP!!!!!

  • Gasppp,, i've been so busy and i havent had time to catch up on the most amazing stories everrrr! from Sarahhh((x

    OMG! he lefttttt,

    nooo Nicholassssss, come backkkk!

    i need youuuu! (x

  • Please post more.  He cant leave her there he has to save her!!

  • it bugs me how everyone is mad at nick. if you just met someone would you be willing to risk your life for them? you can't blame him for being scared.

  • nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo­oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo­oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo­oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo­oooooooooooooooo wtf is wrong with him?

  • Ahhhhhhhh!!

    ur making me slap nick!! (slaps nick)

    U ASSHOLE!!NOOOO

    (KICKS NICK)SAVE..SAVE..HER!!NOW

  • SAVE HER STUPID omg this story is awesome plz keep up the good work

  • OMG this was so AWESOME

    post more.....soon lol

  • GO SAVE HER U RETARD!!!omg nxt 1 plezeeeeeee

  • wat!!!! he cant just leave he better kill that bastard!!!!

    and save her!!!!! he needs to turn his cute curlyheaded self around and save his dream girl and dont let him die he is way 2 good 4 that!!;]]]]

  • omfj he left?!!!! wha!!!!!!!! he better turn his little hinny right back around and shoot that ass of a father right between the eye and go say jenny!!!!! post more really soon please!!!!!

  • OH MY GOSH FIALLY YOU POSTED IVE BEEN WIATING A WHOLE MONTH GOING CRAZY!!!! OHHand i woke up at two thismorning cuz i had the best dream ever about nick!!! i wrote it down!!!! it was awsome i couldnt go back to sleep!!!!

  • nooo bad nick go back and safe her!

    pretty please?

    lol nice story!

  • what? he just left. that's crazy. your story is so amazing! completely unpredictable. i can't wait to see what happens to jenny and nick.

  • Come on Nick! Be a man and save her!! lol.

  • WHAT!? AHHH! DAMN IT!!

    =/

    GO BACK AND SAVE HER ASSHOLE!!

    Then again I can see where he's coming from, he barely knows her, she's just another abused girl, and he has actual family to lose. So I mean...

    BUT STILL!

    =D

  • haha save her asshole lolz!!

    SARAH DONT LET NICHOLAS DIE!!

    HES TO HAWT FOR THAT :D

    also to young but no1 cares bout age lolz

  • Nick

    no

    nicholas

    no just like

    no

    !!!!!

    post more i am dyingggggggggggg

  • (Mad)WHAT!?HE LEFT HER WTH!!! HE SHOULD GO BACK AND SAVE HER!?!?!?

    (Innocent)Great story BTW

    P.S I had to do the mad and innocent things:D

  • OMJAJ!He just LEFT HER?!?!?!He needs to go back and SAVE HER,before her dad frickin' kills her!

  • WHAT??! he left her?!?

  • WHY WOULD HE LEAVE HER???

    *smacks virtual Nick*

    GO BACK!!!

  • OMG he's leaving her?! WTH?!

  • omg!

  • post moree pleaseee =]

  • oh no he have to go back and save her

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