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  • like it sounds good

  • Your about to see a beast be released, like nothing you've ever seen much worse than anything that could have ever been, but i won't die im like an evergreen, i act like ive never been, through shit in my life, this shits been filled with nothing but strife, im sick of living a normal life i just wanna die twice eventually end up with something nice, instead of running with fate sitting here wondering, in a debate with myself, if i should end this or do i just need help? within myself, i live.

  • beutifuuuuul

    

  • check my beats while smoking weed!

  • Jammin tha track/diggin the beat/ Breathe it N/Exhale like green grass beneath bare feet/No time 2 pause gotta get it in/I want to win/the key to success is in the pen/Tryin 2 touch on all the bases/its hard to beat the dealer when hes holding seven aces/Why do people always come at me wrong/Try to be strong, the best i can do is play along/ pretend its not getting under my skin/The 1 thing i got in this life is a desire to win. Not giving up, not giving N. hit me up and ill tell u again

  • Love that sample!

    Freebeats @ my channel. I upload one new every week. You can use it in any way you see fit. Thanks for checking out! :)

  • HEA MIS RESPETOS A ESTA BELLA BASE SALUDOS DESDE MEXICO!!!

  • In no mood for some fake MC shit, cant handle the way I spit cuz it's like a trip, tryin to get my own life to fit, immortal like a vamp whent and bit what I spit/ so now just sit, hear the clock on the wall tick, alone again, I know im sick/ In this house so cold, look so old, but I'll never fold/ Nigga play the same shit every day, but im not out of the game in any way/ So nigga drop to your knees and pray that you never see the day this nigga sees fame/

  • My mind drifted, while my soul eclipted, while i listened to this beat, brings back, all those memories of when i was in the scene, lost in a part of my dream.! i was told there was no way back, so as a part of me, i was lost out of my mind, just trying to succeed, and come back as the person, i was really supose to be, i look to my life now!, and give give myself a greef. of not being in that sutuation people use to fucking be, im out of my dream!, i continue to relief!, of all the pain they...

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  • he is this beat for sale?

  • good beat!!!

    

  • fckn dope man i like the beat can i use it n give u props n credit its a real life rap no gangster shyt str8 trill stuff

  • thx for this instrumental

  • de poca la pista chila ise una rola con tu pista si la qieres escuchar abre el canal tdf

  • Sometimes I just don't know why I'm here or what am I for

    I wish some can help me maybe open my destiny door

    I been hurt so many time mostly by my dad

    He is no one now to me all he did was make my life sad

    He cheated on my mom and left us by our selfs

    I remember my mom was our everything even our Santa and elfs

    I love my mom with all my heart

    She is someone I trust and we will never be apart

    Mom I'm sorry for everything I done

    I know I done bad stuff but I don't know why is it because I'm

  • @Torresjo9 sorry mom i like that

  • buena base,de las mejores!!!!

  • Ako neko zna srpski evo vers

    Gledam kisnje dane sad sam vise nema starih dana znam

    Ali ipak ima jedno to je bolna rana iz srca starih dana

    i svega sto smo radili, po klupama varili po rupama se ganjali,

    gledali u nebo puno sjaja kad nas radi marijana

    ali toga vise nema znam da tesko je ali kasno je

    pola ortaka zakljucani u mraku jebeni drotovi odradili im sljaku

    i sada nestao je 052 ali ostaje u nasim srcima

    ovo je za ortake sto su pali msm moju ekipu bivsu

  • Amazingg *__________________________*

  • Hip hop never left\She just was fed up\ Of being tide down 2 Ninjas who don't give a fuck\About the essence of Her\ & the way she touch us\ can't get enough of\ Wu bring Da Rakus\ R.I.P- O.D.B B.I.G the L in TLC Big BUN P.A.C Big L & Pimp C\ can't for get about Jam Master J & Stack B\ never met\ but hip hop is continuously expanding my family tree this is more than a fantasy it's my destiny\ If you can't support her then May She Rest In Peace!

  • I wrote this rap awhile back, lots of love and respect, my heart goes out to the best in the west, the feats in the east, were all artist trying to eat, im hungry for the money, my surreal subjects in my sentances appear funny, to those with no flows, no clue what to do with a mic, i freestyle and write, i make others look good with me, i bought my first journal for a dollar fifty.

  • Kool Savas!

  • I feel free left in the shadow that covers me/ Lies drive me insane and lost out of my brain/ Please show me/ I can't fucking see/ Who should I try to be/ My dad left me/ My mom not around she moved/ I was alone once I got out of high school/ My brother kicked me out where the dignity/ I just hope God's there and what he see's in me/ Cause if not I'm on a destructive road/ And I don't care what it holds/ I rather fight then die/ But if it come to that/ You wont see one tear fall from my eye/
  • MAXIMUS MAXIMUS MAXIMUS :D

  • see all i wanna be is free, but latly niggas steddy wanna fuck with me, but i give none sit back and burn a purple tree, indeed im just a young kid rased on his own,never new of a place called home, thats why i takes the blunt smoke straight to the dome, plus i got that crome, just incase, a shifty nigga whats to get decrased, like cassidy betta battle me face to face, but you should know that you will be erased and this is just a taste (BOUNC3)

  • waht's music original ?

  • can i have the beat for non profit use mah dude

  • I LOVEEE THIS ! I was just wondering if I'm allowed to use this for a track I'm doing ?

  • lourd

    

  • 2 New Instrumental Beats on my youtubechannel...

    check this if you got a minute!

    Thx

  • Yoo i wish i could rap wtf

  • WOW

  • u no ill love u till the motha fucken end dont need no friends fuck my foes wit u ima win no matta what unfolds bacs to the wind so take my hand as we coast threw this life togetha feelen rite togetha weather or weather not the weather brings nights or better sun light for eva i could neva part from my heart take my life if eva ya leave me skys turn dark but the light is betta my heart will fight foreva jus ta keep us together neva to part our lifes end together together we part

  • our life time together for eva our hearts unite together so neva worrie if we part well b alright together from the end reunite start to begin build anotha life

  • just great

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  • dude this is one of the best beats i ever heard gladiator is one of my favorite movies and im an amateur rapper myself so its like a perfect beat to me i love the way you set everything up on this man excellent job

  • Que excelente beat lo puedo usar para una cancion?(Excelent beat I can use it for a song?)

  • seeing the worlds views for wat its worth, is it a curse put me in a hearse, let me take on the world alone, before im gone, let my name be known, before my kids all grown, expressing myself relating to this tone, sippin patron, reminiscing 'bout how lifes passed along, life isnt served on a silver platter, live life with no regret, bring me the disaster, i kno i've got the power to let this all loose, this musics jux giving me juice, bullet proof,

  • fucking great beat man high five !

  • je i modh lale

  • Mass lacerations severed off the nations mind over matter with heavy precipitations, seducing them to shattered dreams with hallucinations, were trying to be patient, but were on the precipice of self destruction, swallowed by a dream to extract some information that creates sense to none existing, only exodus for the faithful and suffering I’m leaving behind nothing, but I’m going in even if I malfunction, to the end, I see the door open.. open

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  • the original song is from last samurai

  • @DasBlitzKrieg1337 lol are you fucking retarded

  • there is a time to walk, there is a time to run, lets fight these thoughts lets fight these fears its time to go, give me your tears, let go of your cares, its time to fight, we'll get'em down here,.....down here were they forced use to go, this is our home, they cant kill us here, they forced us this trash, now this trash will be their graves, cause when we rise up they will fall, our time has come, let us claim our redemption. How was my first rap? not much rhyming but...idk i need feedback

  • hello can i take the beat for a song that i am writing? answer please

  • im feeling verbal life is a circle

    dont do nothing wrong someone might hurt you

    unwind to this tune see me smoking on purple

    as i get a little herbal... medication

    tryna elivate the nation/ medaterainian asian

    lebanese sensation invasion why you hateing someone you can relate with

    put it on a station i dont need to rate this

    you all seem to believe money is the dream

    but it aint funy havent you seen what crak can do to a theen

    she used to be a queen i cant believe greed got us kilin humanbeings

  • @twilightteevee

    we dont have to beef

    this math i read means we own more then have the half streets

    so fuk government suppliments a couple of my hustlers doubling we aint struggleing its sad to say drug smuggleing got us all bubbleing

    i got a covenant to make sure we all rise nobody stopin it

    NWO profiting on all your gossiping,

    reading magazines like you were breathing oxygen,

    infecting every young solomon stuck in this pyramid monument,

    young yushua muhammed jesus they got you up,

  • Things i say aren't anything abstract but let me give you some straight facts of how my life aint right and despite it all i keep my chin up sometimes i don't even know is this my true path or am i just a psychopath that likes to rap to songs that make me feel all wrong but let me define myself in a better altitude the things i do require a macho dude like me and i blow treesdaily but did hip-hop make me or is this just all fakeg known asthe intellectual at a spellingB makinUrJawDroptoYourknees.

  • There is nothing to do when facing the likes of me/ You freeze like you in ice but shackles chain you down to you knees/ niggas will never rise above me/ The birds,,,the clouds even the stars above/ have respect for my level, niggas show me love/ never hate, envy leads to misery/ and that leads to defeat because trying be,/ something that your not often takes you to a place where your not supposed to be/
  • i flow like a spirit coming up from a body.i do not understand why these niggas wanna try me. but i fight back, till im in chair like ali.niggas better reconize. spray them like some pesticide. leave them petrified. never lie. always ride. take a piece of my pie?

    im serving out wings if you really want to die. not talking red bull. rather live life then be another dead fool. youd think im so cool, till i turn into a ghoul.trying to use me like tool. family over everything thats my only rule.

  • ich bin ich.!!!!!musica ce ma reprezinta ,BETON

  • rain turns to steam/ floor turns to lava/ i stay frozen under the solar/ soul turns imortal/ pain pumps through my vain/ nuthin changes/ my life stays the same/ everyone plays the game/ breakin the chains/ i master the board/ the master with the sword/ i pray to my lord/ take my enemies like a special delivery/ no penalty/ i am lost and they call me the boss/ cleverly/ clear through the fog/ i hear the demons call/ i empty my clip/ smoke clears but none of them fall/ back against the wall

  • im dealin wit a spiritual war angels and demons/ couldnt begin 2 explain half of da things i ben seein/ suicides, homicides, killin off human beings/ modern day warfare plz tel me dat im dreamin/ guns popped by conned cops niggaz robbin pawn shops/kids ownin 9 glocks teens snortin white rocks/ wen will it all stop/ maybe if we're all shot/ genocide spreadin like some small pox/ lookin to sky plz lord hear my cry/ forgive us 4 our sins when we tend not 2 comply/ liquid in my eyes i plead 4 my lyf

  • WAIT A SECOND DAMN/AN ANGEL givin a SECOND CHANCE/no LOOKIN BACK no SECOND GLANCE/how many hours can u have FAITH i BET MORE den SECONDS CAN/1st 2 da CLOCK b4 da SECOND HAND/reaches DA SECOND MAN/notice christopher columbus's DISCOVERY from the SECOND LAND/im all dats LEFT so its only RIGHT 2 ACCEPT DIS PLAN/got permission after i WAITED IN DA HALL/aint da worst or da best but i am the GREATEST OF DEM ALL/even the GREATEST SHALL FALL/wen its my time 2 leave dey'l kno wat the GREATEST WAS CALLED

  • @3733vil man i felt that verse foreal..tight work bro imma upload mine

  • yoo peeps me n my gyal wrote 2 this song check it out all comments welcome gotta take the ruff wiv the smooth lol if u type in = SMIDON LIFE OF A SOLDIER it will appear peace !!!

  • @smidonrhe1 ha ha yoo peeps that is funny

  • yoo lemme get this beat :)

  • ALL THAT I KNOW ALL THAT I KNOW ALL THAT I KNOW ...when u grew up with nothing but pain..what do people expect when you dont bout happyness all you know is sarrow WISHING U DONT SEE 2MARROW FIND HAPPYNESS IN THE BOTTLE JUMP IN THE WHIP HIT FULL THROTTLES WHAT DO U WANT ROM ME I JUST DONT WANT 2 SEE 2MARROW

  • You killed my brother, He bled, and he died, I watched as my motha held his hand and cried, Hopin god would take my life instead, He was 10, and he's already dead, Blood all over, painted the cement red, No money, we're all barely fed, Just makes things harder, to the very end, Ain't got to pretend, This is real, This ain't my debt, I didn't make the deal, So what do you want We fight to survive Everyday is a challenge to stay alive How can you expect me to hold my head high, When I got no pride
  • CHECK OUT MY REMIX OF 'NOW WE ARE FREE"

  • Like al pachino who do I trust now, turning eyes all around me, looking for just one face in the crowd. It's all a camoflagued mystical mystery, telling tales in the box seats, watching cheerleaders look past me. But I'm not afraid to admit it, I'm as cool as a fire place splashed half galloon of anti freeze. So what, break it up, tell me a lie and I'll tell you two times how little a fuck I give.

  • hahahahahaha

  • i downloaded this sample but never used it,...good shit

  • as i just sit and stare i wanted you to be there the first time i saw you i knew you where the one from the start and now im left witha broken heart cause you left and you took my last beath then i seen you on tv like masterchef and now your gone im left with one tear and everyday i drink another can of beer because you still the one i hold dere !!!!

  • die melodie erinnert an den anfang von "Tribut" von Savas. Aber is ganz hübsch. Weitermachen!

  • i kick back while im slurpin on crushed grapes devine wine, wit good tree smoke blown up in halo signs remenis on dem brothas who jeans faded on the thigh from them stayin hard on the grind cause they kickin it wit the cusin of sleep i gently as the nigga in the casket wat u want on your tombstone he said no beef if the other fam would have took heed then i would have sighed in relief it was allot of cryin and gnashing of the teeth thats just how the race ends when u runnin the streets
  • Dope beat man ..for real i make beats too, very touching, got me and my boy spitten the illest shit, and as we both know......That the goal

  • they want me tied up in chains a slave with one purpose only deliver pain it's insane, later they say you are the only one to blame is this the price for fame? to make people love you theese days everything is black and white soon it turns red N people screamin FIGHT they throw me into the colusioum nobody screamin free'em they just came to see'em kill eachother with fear N terror ya'll never felt the horror forced to colour, against you'r will forcin our hand to kill
  • @TulleLulleTHFan Nicely said man.

  • Yo! listen hes am tha rap games gladiator,who pierces rappers straighter than a laser,who kills to tha maximum you can call em maximus,none can face em you such a huge Minus,bringing rhymes tightly and classy,you can can neva stand em, flowing on tha Mic with bars of west, and none can protest..killing rappers from south to east and north to west,

  • you knew you're a gladiator deep in your heart, you had to fight, you had to kill right from the start, You know the arena life is not like you thought, These lions and soldiers are not all that you fought, You are a slave and wished to be saved. All you gotta do is fight. Through the hot sunny days to the darkest of nights. It don't matter who you are or where you came. You are a human all the same, You are now free, Why can't you see, that you were meant to be a gladiator.

    First rap I wrote

  • Let em know, You a soldier, Aint going down, Head lifted high, Before and amongst many will die, But you try, Always to survive, Life consists of constant fights, Which makes us gladiators over time an not over night, We just gotta ease our pain, Never forget forget where your from, Or what you did, Be strong and never maim, Look how far you come, Keep the imagination of a kid, Constantly Positive, Never worry, Life is no hurry, Keep moving as you do, Cause in that mirror the gladiator is you...

  • @haxy1111 Damn,yall got some good,touching poetry rhymes. Great job all of you!

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  • THIS YA BOII PO DOLLAZS FRM LONG ISLAND THIS OKAY HIT ME ON FACEBOOK RAHMEE WASHINGTON I WANT THIS RAP SHIT SO LETS TALK

  • Wow....... I'm loss at words on this. Its like it can have a sad effect 2 it or an uplifting effect to it. Damn. -_ - Great work.

  • good job men

  • I need you to email this 2 me....Ill record something to it as an experiment...see if you like it...cool beanz!...LOL!

  • yo wassup I just heard yr beat its awsome can i use it for a rap ?

  • my spirt is lifted, the mood shifted, is my mind on track on time, its just the rhythm of the rhyme, i feel like i just seen my life, for what its worth, on this earth, i love it to the very most, and to those close, i hold them tighter, hand me the lighter, hit this shit with me, vibe and love your life, we can all shine, relating to the music , see we all use it, expressing our thoughts, wether it be on a fuckin video, or just alone in our home, speaking to none, im staring at the sun, im done

  • @TheDrRy Dats Lyrical son... ppl dnt like deep lyrics nowadays but keep on wit it... Fuck'em!

  • @TheDrRy Nice lyrics!

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  • @TheDrRy LIFE.

  • The drums are not hitting like they should. They need to be turned up, other than that, hte beat is tight.

  • Thanks! I love the original Glad soundtrack, and this was just like icing on the cake.

  • I'm sittin here writing shit down oops did i say that, i meant typing this down it's coming from the heart ,off of the head no thinkin using paper and pen call me weezy cause i'm coughin like old men not because the syrup, weed, or pills that fill my head that there will be the cause of my death no war or battles with the dudes that come next not enough time to show what's on my chest call me superman without the S i go at it like a crack addict with a bad habit this music i just gotta have it
  • @ rapax22070: This beat is exactly what I was looking for. Thnx, a mil, for making it. It is quite redundant, but still very good! I'd love if u could make this beat again, keep it mostly the same, yet one might want to mix the redundancy a little (i.g. use a different instrument sound for one of redundant beats, or arrange the redundant beat little bit in another way). Still love this beat though. Again, thnx a mil.

  • WOOOooooooT !

    WoAH you are like a modern mozart.

    send me your beat please, wanna just use it for personal rap.

    thanks

  • check it, i recorded song on this beat....real deep shit

    Its called "Struggle", check my videos

  • @cbronx15 Bro come on... i think you just ruined a beautiful beat. Dont take your anger out on this, this is not shit. Or up your game one of the two..... at least dont swear... Thats just wrong. IF I AM WRONG... I AM SORRY.

  • @BadassDeeess HEY LET HIM KNOW WHEN ITS TIME TO GO, TO BE FUCKIN MAN TO DIE AS HE STANDS, I CAN REALLY GIVE A DAM, WHAT THE FUCK U WANT FROM ME, OH U JUST WANT ANOTHER PUPPET I CAN SEE, STRINGS TIED TO ARMS AND FEET,AND BE ABLE TO CONTROL ME WHEN U FUCKING PLEASE,U STUPID PLEASE I DO DISS SHIT WIT EASE,JUST BREATH LIKE THE BREEZE,IM READY FOR MY CLOSE UP PLEASE,YES NEW HOTTEST ARTIST BROAD CASTING MY SELF,ON YOU TUBE,I THINK MO LIKE A POET, READ CAN U TELL OH U ALREADY KNOW IT,ITS A WRAPP OVER!

  • @MrOpportunityknockin

    whack as shit dude

  • @MrOpportunityknockin lame as hell

  • no way ....

    so good beat man ...

  • mixtapes alben auftritte features videos sie zollen ihm tribut !! ;)

    sehr nice der beat aber klingt doch sehr nach tribut von savas

  • @MadMic1987 Kapiert ihr es nicht? Das ist nicht nachgemacht... eher umgekehrt, dass sich die Personen(Savas z.B) die Songteile nehmen und ändern.. Immer diese "Ohh, dass ist aber von...()"

  • @TheFyrion was hast du denn für analkrämpfe? kannst du mir mal sagen wo dein scheiß problem liegt das du mich so blöd anmachen musst? pass mal auf wie du mit mir redest freundchen. das die melodie von gladiator gesampled ist weiß ich selbst da brauch ich nicht noch son möchtegern klugscheißer wie dich. ausserdem lern erstmal die beitrage richtig zu lesen bevor du große sprüche reißt.

  • man i really enjoy this beat GJ ! :)

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    the start of some lyric i wrote sound really nice on this track ;

    -im sorry but i fell forgot, im undergrund again just writhin alot, about hwo i fell about all this shit i fell, just listen up another hit, word up year

    its not like it use to, growing up, wile we fuck up, trynna follow up, its hard kock, just rollin it up, betters days has to come, chillin along

  • CHECK OUT MY BEATS!!!!!!

    ::SCAM::

  • man, everyone shit sounds sad....

  • as i fall to this cold winter and wither away, the only sad suggestions i'm left wit to say, is what is my purpose, n why is it worth it, that i'm still existin'. i still keep makin prayers, and wonderin if ur listinen. nomore nonsense about positivity, becuz these negative thoughts will always be stuck wit me.

  • its like the BEAT speaks for itself.... Beast

  • makes me wanna rap on some eminem flavor. i like this.

  • a way to the deaths bed is a crying way of life, no trees jus tthe night a star filled sky and tear dropped rained down from the sky above, who left jesus hung from the bottom bunk with nothing but grub,

    a kids dying dream no love life, no loved team, another soldier lost in a game, till the mind speaks and the heart listens, a new future

  • a way to the deaths bed is a crying way of life, no trees jus tthe night a star filled sky and tear dropped rained down from the sky above, who left jesus hung from the bottom bunk with nothing but grub,

    a kids dying dream no love life, no loved team, another soldier lost in a game, till the mind speaks and the heart listens, a new future

  • a way to the deaths bed is a crying way of life, no trees jus tthe night a star filled sky and tear dropped rained down from the sky above, who left jesus hung from the bottom bunk with nothing but grub,

    a kids dying dream no love life, no loved team, another soldier lost in a game, till the mind speaks and the heart listens, a new future

  • 2 the grass, to the flash and a bang hangin out of the backpack,

    a rage and spraycan, two toe tags, no love just a drag race from herer to the backyard, picked up the peices, and left the world one love to see it,

    angry shorelines, a wave crash and th ocean pruifies the soul, a word of love left in a dying time to free the streets from diseases,

    o well the wishes come true and the world believes in you,

  • sound like kool savas - Tribut

  • Bro... I have to say, This beat is hearty man keep it up aye.

    I love this one. It hits the spot

  • Floating on river to infinity with the purity of virginity so when i die i can meet the trinity who are great but with divinity always happy and pure of heart they will always be the end and the start, We are born human - We depart away we keep intouch everytime we pray He tells us not to go astray or we will start to decay , so we must be wise and obey God gave us weed so we can roll a jay and put all bad feelings aside and let our minds glide I Hope You Are Blessed. Laugh.
  • Whats good not here to diss u all But i will say tht i really miss u girl thru it all Everyday just doesnt feel the same anymore The rain from above is startin to pore I miss ur beauty i miss ur galore Im so sorry down to my core My love was mad straight hardcore Now these dudes id tryin to get with ya Name numba even a picta i sit on the sidelines and watch Sippin on tht rare scotch Hopein tht it will help my pain My heart will not be left broken in vain
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  • I think if you had a spot for a hook, plus if you changed the plucking sound for brass, it might make it sound better.

  • i love this , where can i download it??????

  • [continuation] real talk so guess Ill talk it since i aint rappin for fame, fuck, fans, or profit Ill sit out while yall get played like game controllaz The world seems different through the eyes of the soulless See-through-illusion While youre trapped in your mind Searchin for a happiness That youll never find The difference between happiness And sufferings time Cuz to ur deathbed You wont take a dime
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  • it's impossible to rap on this, the intro never ends...

  • @silvermcd113 It's funny knowing, in-this-life the odds when-the industry u love is corrupted and fraud and people turn their backs to the evils we facin when even the music biz-is bein run by masons but its a GAME so we PLAY dumb ...and never question shit, until that fuckin day comes that-its-too-late learn the world is two-faced, New World Order Guess well all have a new fate til-then ill make due, blunts ill blaze two can't be stressin, everyday is a blessin...
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  • buh was up homie let me c wat u got n c was up wit u

  • I'm down to battle....I knwo this is a slow beat cuz I've heard it before but I didn't write any of the verses down there to the beat...the computer here at work does not have speakers so I am just writing the rhymes..read them without the beat...it's word play.

    throw me a verse n I'll respond

  • jajaja na homie it 4 who eva just bored so das wat up u decide if it 4 u

  • @eselonely27

    I see

    I don't decide if it's for me or not...just didn't know if that was part of the rhyme

  • was dat for me?

  • jajajaja ok lil mo 4 u den

    stepin from the bottom of the shadows

    let me introduce u to the game,

    i c u just got a lil swiff of ma shyt na u on it like cocaine,

    give me yo best shot n ill make u anderstand,

    wen da dust is settled ama b da only wun to stand,

  • im bored fuck it!!

    born just another scrub cumin from the slupms,

    kept ma head up even through the worst of bumps yeah..

    all ma niggas in da pen feel ma pain,

    wen i let ma pain out with this pen.

    all u niggas claim to b the realest all yall claim 2 the best,

    dis word hit u like a slug of a 9milie hit yo fucking chest,

    cant b immitated cant be comprehended lord help this lil niggas b4 i tear it up n end it

    lol just a lil sumthin

  • Ya'll cant fuckin rap like me

    ill be the one to take king beat

    this aint even the song ill sing

    it'll be the tone everytime yo phone ring

    see i can even listen to this and produce somethin else

    you should prolly get better take it on yourself

    im just a simple man that wants no help

    i dont give it either see a puppy fucking yelp and i just fucking laugh and i smelt the air it was full of blood but that dont mean shit i kicked that dog in the mud

  • this cat wants to join the rap scene

    but he can't rap for shit so instead he'll sing

    he asked his dad to get him some bling

    so he's all geared up like FUBU

    now he wants to write raps on youtube

    he kicks dogs out into the mud?

    this kid gets stepped on like he's a rug

    haha

  • Fubu? what you a poor nigga i aint gonna get beat by some wigga gun at your head finger at the trigger you think you big well im bigger step back you cant handle my rap matter fact you couldn't even hold my jockstrap and that dog line was just a trap hoping someone would try to start crap so here we go this my spot come at me like a big shot i just pulled the lever jackpot now im richer then you and to try to clown me made you a fool now im gonna stop before it get cruel
  • lol this fatass be wearing a jock and he carries a ring on his crack hoping to wrap it around a cock gun at my head n his fingger on the trigger but he forgot to release the lock, go figure this kid is fake you find his pic to define mistake find his body rottening in the lake I'm using basic lyrics to battle a simple chump I call him froggy n then he jumps I call him scooby n he fetchd the bone he couldn't beat me if he was my clone I'll use his belly as a steppin stone
  • I'll put some pressure under my shoe

    he's gon be farting out of the blue

    beans and nachos are comin out

    I think he also released some tacos

    ass burning from form all the chillie

    he aint' a wigga, this kid's hill billie

    he's twenty eight n still acting silly

    you can keep dreamin but you won't beat me

  • this kids the antigonist and im the pro

    saying i can't beat him if i was his clone

    dreamin about beatin you, you dont even know they all hear me your the echo bitch

    i read your shit and didn't even twitch

    you couldn't beat me if you was popeye with spinach trying to battle me was your first mistake

    ya that was my body layin in the lake

    but i was fakin im still awake

    im gonna slither around you just like a snake

    ready to step into that action

    you cant even rap your a hack man

  • this man thinks he's good at rappin

    the only noise that you hear

    is him rootin for himself wit his asscheeks clappin

    how can you rhyme 'bithc' combined wit 'spinach'?

    guess that's what happens when you're a retard

    he rhymes Toyota then needs a recall

    A light punchline will make his knees fall

  • his name is a code written qwerty

    and then the number of days

    since he passed puberty

    you an old mothafucka/ so do the math

    365 days per year now how old is that?

    his profile says that he's twenty eight

    that's just the wrinkles found in his face

    I'm telling you dog,

    you're wrong if you thought that you had a chance

    these people ain't reading your shit, they don't even glance

  • here's a line that a friend used in a verse, I'm orginal though so I dont' pretend to be hard and steal it...I just laughed when I read it

    "a guy that uses 'crap' in his rap

    must know a lot"

    lmao

  • venom sinks into ur flesh..yes...i poisioned my sword..these voices in my head are so fucking horrid..but still i continue..undefeated..im the meanest..to walk earth..eyes red at birth..filled with rage..next target...Engage!.. slice..hit the upper part of his chest ...3 inches above ..his platemail vest..Thumbs down..sword in his throat now he chokes to death.

  • so what i am a gladiator,

    my mind's so sick i'm an alligator,

    my veins run deep,

    theres no way i see defeat,

    the pain from my childhood is the only thing that haunts me,

    the shame that i feel will one day corrupt me,

    untill then i must live life to the fullest,

    i fight my way up like the pridest and true-est,

    is their no way for a soldier,

    to lift all this weight off his shoulders.

  • i write the illest shit feel this kid bite wat i spit cuz u cant do this shit illiterate jus alil bit read the lines give up forfeit they need the rhymes ppl im illegal without the desert eagle but i still pack lethal in the tinted vehicle drive bys your moms cry she asks y did my son die guns blasted in his eye for wat reason,his treason lyin rabbit its killin season decievin ppl makin em believin white shit in da nose is pain relivin thn sit n say yous the best give it a rest
  • @John11229 tht was decent, fit the beat, unlike the rest of thies kids tryna drop bars

  • scheisse ich hab mir diesen beat seit gestern 30 mal reingezogen und er ist einfach der hammer vielen dank für reinstellen

  • It is good but I think it needs a drop in beat in it so it is not a repeating beat. But in far all it is good.

  • great ..just great man

  • im so fed up with my people in these streetz, no its not just for you but it does applies for me man this pussy is so crucial it would knock you off your feet, have a nigga straight woundering how the fuck am i go eat,now you gotta get your heat when you shouldve been hustling but we to blind to see all the money in front of us maybe itz all the green or the bytch datz under u no matter wat you say home boy were fucking up!...........................­..........crooked!!

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  • nice beat !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!!

  • my life is so poor i am living on floor hoping i can walk out that door once more i want to be whole slipping between the crack of the floor where is my life going to go i dont know anymore where is my soul where is my heart where is the car where is the gold it was taken a year ago by some one that was supose to make me whole u broke our vows and made me cold now laying beat & broken in the depth of my soul my hearts right here that will forever make me as bold as i ever was
  • yeah, yeah, you know who it is right here. right when i get out the club i get so sidetracked. going for whatever booty god throws in my way. go back to my crib hit the bitch and the patrone. get laid back let her do that work. smack her around a bit. then tell the bitch to go home. am i proud of it? do i regret what i do everyday? yes and no my homies cuz if you live life to the fullest it works wonders, and no cuz i live my life alone and sad being the pot head i am, trust is an issue andi cry

  • damn i put the shit in backwards

  • looking at the my jewels like she dreamed of these rings, sunshades on like she blinded by bling, up here preaching bout her career, saying she loves to sing

    she sings up in the mic, she gives me what i like, she said i am her type, tall dark but life's bright, well isnt she right, she looks so ripe she saying if you stuck around she would have went dike, yike!

    she fines and she mine, shes a true rida'

    she knows who is the go getta

    and she know i got her

  • Yes, here i am, the delaware devil

    i make you bury ya self, and hand you your shovel

    you way below see level, about a hundred leagues, trying to swim up but your tangled in seaweed, see me, im with your bitch, chillin on the beach, underneath a canopy smokin on some good weed. see she dreams of these days,

  • Damn, I luv this!!

    I want it, 5/5 T-T

  • Dear Load I speak to you. Cause the last 10 years I have failed myself. Took this long to figure out myself. I have learned such very valueble leasons. Faught with my hands that are weapons. I hit the ground and I got up. I hit the ground again and got back up. The fight is in me to keep pushing. On my knee's begging you please. This path has to be the one. No more fucking off, pushing it off. The time is now don't I want to stand tall and proud.
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  • Very Nice