I was never taught that the comma + a conjunctive adverb = not strong enough to join two clauses. I would have thought that a comma, semi colon, or period would have been correct to use.
This is perfectly acceptable English but I really don't like this sentence. To me, the semicolon, the conjunction, and the comma all demand a pause in reading; all three appearing in rapid succession feels like a speed hump in the middle of the sentence.
I would use a full stop in place of the semicolon. This should be two sentences, not one. Alternately, I would use the conjunction without the extra punctuation, as I did in the first sentence of this post. Just my two cents.
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Catmilf 1 month ago
I was never taught that the comma + a conjunctive adverb = not strong enough to join two clauses. I would have thought that a comma, semi colon, or period would have been correct to use.
1monkeyat1typewriter 4 months ago in playlist Trimester 1
too hard to understand this
18queen4ever 11 months ago
This is perfectly acceptable English but I really don't like this sentence. To me, the semicolon, the conjunction, and the comma all demand a pause in reading; all three appearing in rapid succession feels like a speed hump in the middle of the sentence.
I would use a full stop in place of the semicolon. This should be two sentences, not one. Alternately, I would use the conjunction without the extra punctuation, as I did in the first sentence of this post. Just my two cents.
Argent108 1 year ago
omg i hate the words being on the screen
FwVids 1 year ago
I use semi-colons sometimes.
SporeInfoProductions 1 year ago
thanks
SuperYaziel 1 year ago
thanks this really helped me understand this better.
drunkchickenTV 2 years ago