Generally speaking a good piece however, needs some level changes. To even in tempo & DB level, try to get a better microphone, there are people who may let you borrow a nice one. Voice needs to be a little cleaner in the beginning. I like the sound at 1:53 & 2:30. Not to keen on the piano plunking around 3:00. I also think the strings are pushing it a bit, better to have a little contrast. Try to work on all the things people like, and throw out what they do not like. Paul S.
Love your songs Ellen!!
PennyLanex84x 2 years ago
Generally speaking a good piece however, needs some level changes. To even in tempo & DB level, try to get a better microphone, there are people who may let you borrow a nice one. Voice needs to be a little cleaner in the beginning. I like the sound at 1:53 & 2:30. Not to keen on the piano plunking around 3:00. I also think the strings are pushing it a bit, better to have a little contrast. Try to work on all the things people like, and throw out what they do not like. Paul S.
Schneebuddy 3 years ago
outstanding.
mymy667 3 years ago
Da kann ich mich nur anschließen, Ellen.
"About Toys and souls" und "Empty of you / Empty of me" sind ganz tolle Songs; großartig; auch ohne Zusätze; nur Du allein bringst viel rüber.
Ich werd Alles bestellen, was Du hsat und noch veröffentlichst...
~Meinolf aka Pianojoe~
P14N0J0E 4 years ago
ganz groß
dissidenz 4 years ago
I like it alot. It's so unsettling, it's impossible for it to not get your attention. Lovely.
drdoodle2006 4 years ago
niicht schLeecht :)
Caniik67 4 years ago