Heavily Broken Chapter 1- Story Book Picture

[JonasHouse09]

Oh interesting.

Usually I have a ton of advice for fellow writers (My story is Murdered, a Jonas Brothers Scream Story)

All I have to say to you, I don't know if you will take it because you wrote this a year ago), is capitalize the first word in quotation marks, and the word "I."

You're an amazing writer, I hope you finished this...

[octoberopal1]

i have a bestie named willow cool =] ♥ ur story

[KissMeNickJerryJonas]

@octoberopal1 me too!

[octoberopal1]

@KissMeNickJerryJonas OMG!! no way thats cool

[KissMeNickJerryJonas]

@octoberopal1 she is awesome! everyone in the school loves her, but she likes me the best. whats your willow like?

[octoberopal1]

@KissMeNickJerryJonas well she is a great anime drawer and is really wierd to tell you the truth like one time she wore a japanesse dress to skool and didnt care wat anyone said :]

[KissMeNickJerryJonas]

@octoberopal1 thats cool:)

[MileyIsNotUgly]

This is really awesome! It's very original! :)

[purpleroxs]

love it!