anytime Bro. and hey, I mean it- redo this with emphasis that let's us hear your heart regarding your love. Add your own hook, and you've got a hit. (psst: hurry before someone else boost your lyrics and this tune! ... and get it copywritten b4 you re-upload)
okay; next time put some feeling into your rap and finish up with your own hook
dmnds979 2 years ago
Preciate the feedback
pimpjoosse 2 years ago
anytime Bro. and hey, I mean it- redo this with emphasis that let's us hear your heart regarding your love. Add your own hook, and you've got a hit. (psst: hurry before someone else boost your lyrics and this tune! ... and get it copywritten b4 you re-upload)
God Bless
dmnds979 2 years ago