I don’t usually criticize someone’s work to make myself smart. This is awesome like Nickleback or 3 doors down’s but I can’t help thinking it could’ve been finer with a better lyric.
I dare say he has genius mind in music but he has to come up with a better lyric.
Overall, it’s a nice song if you can ignore many flaws in lyric and pronunciation. I hope this comment will be of useful to you. Keep up the good work……
@mojos101 ,whatever yu think about the lyircs doesnt matter to people. what really matter is how does it sound. Why dont yu make your own song with perfect grammer and flawless pronunciation and post it on youtube and see what people think. yu just making yourself look like an idiot here because no one give a shit about what yu think.
@khant27 hah, it's clear you are having inferiority complex. you didn't read my comment throughly Lol :D. yes, it doesn't matter to me even if you can't make the distinction between criticism and constructive advice. downright hilarious.!!>:O.
@mojos101 u must have superiority complex if u dare to say somebody has inferiority complex. First of all, poems and songs don't need to follow grammatical rules because being along with melody and rhyme are more important than the Grammar. Who are you to say his pronunciation has flaw? Then which pronunciation is flawless? US, British,Australia,NewZealand,SouthAfrica, they all have their own accents. That's not necessarily mean one accent has flaw. Music is much more than a language.
@kaunghtut so what u mean is u'd listen to a song like' I luuv u baby I wan too be wit u , phalesee don't walttt awayyy'.OK, that's ur problem. For the grammar part, I am not a grammarian myself but the flaws in this song are too obvious that even a kid would have noticed. Poems and songs don't need to follow grammar. ha.!! u means 'Shakespeare'?To enlighten u, Poetic License has limits. Would u write a poem like ' hatred I has,love we loses,Would eternity be us' and some other craps?
‘In every nights and days’ is funny. Everybody knows, we don’t throw parties every nights and days. Ha…Ha…Ha…XD ..just kidding. Of course, we sleep every night and eat every day. LoL..not every nights and days…Repetition (Using ‘lost’ three times in a row) makes them weak and boring bcoz’ it lacks variety.
Home is a place you are living in at a particular time. You can’t call it Home if the place hasn’t been made yours or you’re not currently living in. It’s not grammatically wrong at all. It’s just the oddly use of expressions. It’s also in ‘sometimes there’s no place to save’. Can you imagine what that is? What place to save what, whom and why? The writer didn’t make it clear about it. The ambiguity in this line makes it weaker other than to sound romantic and sweet.
But ‘If got me what I deserve or it got me what I deserve’ doesn’t make any sense. Same with ‘I’m gonna make my own paradise to take you home’. ‘I’m gonna make my own paradise’ itself is not a problem but it is ‘to take you home’ that messes it all up.. If you are going to make a paradise of your own, it’s clear you haven’t made it yet. So you can’t call it your home. I know it’s trying to say ‘I’m gonna make my own paradise to be made your home and surely I’ll take you there’.
Should be ‘I let myself down to lift you up’, though it doesn’t go along with rhymes. Or else ‘you let me down but I’ll lift you up’ should be fine.
One more line I don’t understand is that ‘If got me what I deserve or it got me what I deserve’. It’s a bit strange to me. I don’t know what it is. ‘If it gives me what I deserve or if I got what I deserved’ is fine.
,,how do know she or he is the one you deeply love. It’d be better ‘Baby, don’t you steal my heart. It’s tearing me apart’ or something else. Leaving-out subject in ‘tearing me apart’ isn’t good. It would be better if it is ‘it’s tearing me apart’ to suggest what is tearing you apart. ‘I let me down to lift you up’ is disappointing. ‘I let me down’ instead of ‘let myself down’ is too obvious to be noticed. The lyricist should be more careful about it in the future.
First, it comes with ‘there’s a lot I can’t do’. It’s the lyricist’s shocking choice as it’s not very common to say. I think ‘there’s not much I can’t do’ would be better.
May be you could rule my heart…. isn’t that bad at all. But the point is if you are not sure whether the one you love can possibly rule your heart or not (choosing the style: May be you could)
So It should be ‘ lift yuuup’ , not lift you tup. And the same thing in ‘ sense in anyway’ he linked sense and anyway ignoring ‘in’ in the middle. So ‘sensessinsssanyway’ doesn’t make any sense. Plus, there shouldn’t be anything like ‘it got meeyy whut I deeezerf..’
The worst part is in its lyric. Frankly speaking, it’s miserable.I love its tune but whenever I play it the lyric is bothering me.It spoils everything lovely and beautiful the song has to offer.
This song is great in tune but falls flat in lyric and pronunciation.
I have spent some time to figure out what the song is all about.
But I still can’t get it.
First, it’s about the singer’s accent.
Actually, the whole thing isn’t that bad but the problem is in “let me down and lift you up”. The vocalist sang it like “… lift you tup…..”I believe he linked the words lift and up then become …liftup….but he seemed to have forgotten ‘you’ is in between Lift and Up.
plz someone help.. wanna know the lyric. I'm bad in listening.
htetsoldier 2 months ago
I like all of his song <3...
TV5XQ4ever 2 months ago
woooow, Nice job bro keep it upp!!!
rokibaby1500 3 months ago in playlist Aung La
I love it ... keep up the good work ... :D
d3vilb0ylay 4 months ago
i love this song
mtlangenthang94 4 months ago in playlist mtlangenthang94's favorites
hahahhahahaah not bad :)
mtlangenthang94 4 months ago in playlist mtlangenthang94's favorites
where can I get the chords for this song? :)
137580 7 months ago
I don’t usually criticize someone’s work to make myself smart. This is awesome like Nickleback or 3 doors down’s but I can’t help thinking it could’ve been finer with a better lyric.
I dare say he has genius mind in music but he has to come up with a better lyric.
Overall, it’s a nice song if you can ignore many flaws in lyric and pronunciation. I hope this comment will be of useful to you. Keep up the good work……
mojos101 10 months ago
@mojos101 ,whatever yu think about the lyircs doesnt matter to people. what really matter is how does it sound. Why dont yu make your own song with perfect grammer and flawless pronunciation and post it on youtube and see what people think. yu just making yourself look like an idiot here because no one give a shit about what yu think.
khant27 8 months ago
@khant27 hah, it's clear you are having inferiority complex. you didn't read my comment throughly Lol :D. yes, it doesn't matter to me even if you can't make the distinction between criticism and constructive advice. downright hilarious.!!>:O.
mojos101 8 months ago
@mojos101 u must have superiority complex if u dare to say somebody has inferiority complex. First of all, poems and songs don't need to follow grammatical rules because being along with melody and rhyme are more important than the Grammar. Who are you to say his pronunciation has flaw? Then which pronunciation is flawless? US, British,Australia,NewZealand,SouthAfrica, they all have their own accents. That's not necessarily mean one accent has flaw. Music is much more than a language.
kaunghtut 4 months ago
@kaunghtut so what u mean is u'd listen to a song like' I luuv u baby I wan too be wit u , phalesee don't walttt awayyy'.OK, that's ur problem. For the grammar part, I am not a grammarian myself but the flaws in this song are too obvious that even a kid would have noticed. Poems and songs don't need to follow grammar. ha.!! u means 'Shakespeare'?To enlighten u, Poetic License has limits. Would u write a poem like ' hatred I has,love we loses,Would eternity be us' and some other craps?
mojos101 4 months ago
‘In every nights and days’ is funny. Everybody knows, we don’t throw parties every nights and days. Ha…Ha…Ha…XD ..just kidding. Of course, we sleep every night and eat every day. LoL..not every nights and days…Repetition (Using ‘lost’ three times in a row) makes them weak and boring bcoz’ it lacks variety.
mojos101 10 months ago
Home is a place you are living in at a particular time. You can’t call it Home if the place hasn’t been made yours or you’re not currently living in. It’s not grammatically wrong at all. It’s just the oddly use of expressions. It’s also in ‘sometimes there’s no place to save’. Can you imagine what that is? What place to save what, whom and why? The writer didn’t make it clear about it. The ambiguity in this line makes it weaker other than to sound romantic and sweet.
mojos101 10 months ago
But ‘If got me what I deserve or it got me what I deserve’ doesn’t make any sense. Same with ‘I’m gonna make my own paradise to take you home’. ‘I’m gonna make my own paradise’ itself is not a problem but it is ‘to take you home’ that messes it all up.. If you are going to make a paradise of your own, it’s clear you haven’t made it yet. So you can’t call it your home. I know it’s trying to say ‘I’m gonna make my own paradise to be made your home and surely I’ll take you there’.
mojos101 10 months ago
Should be ‘I let myself down to lift you up’, though it doesn’t go along with rhymes. Or else ‘you let me down but I’ll lift you up’ should be fine.
One more line I don’t understand is that ‘If got me what I deserve or it got me what I deserve’. It’s a bit strange to me. I don’t know what it is. ‘If it gives me what I deserve or if I got what I deserved’ is fine.
mojos101 10 months ago
,,how do know she or he is the one you deeply love. It’d be better ‘Baby, don’t you steal my heart. It’s tearing me apart’ or something else. Leaving-out subject in ‘tearing me apart’ isn’t good. It would be better if it is ‘it’s tearing me apart’ to suggest what is tearing you apart. ‘I let me down to lift you up’ is disappointing. ‘I let me down’ instead of ‘let myself down’ is too obvious to be noticed. The lyricist should be more careful about it in the future.
mojos101 10 months ago
First, it comes with ‘there’s a lot I can’t do’. It’s the lyricist’s shocking choice as it’s not very common to say. I think ‘there’s not much I can’t do’ would be better.
May be you could rule my heart…. isn’t that bad at all. But the point is if you are not sure whether the one you love can possibly rule your heart or not (choosing the style: May be you could)
mojos101 10 months ago
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mojos101 10 months ago
So It should be ‘ lift yuuup’ , not lift you tup. And the same thing in ‘ sense in anyway’ he linked sense and anyway ignoring ‘in’ in the middle. So ‘sensessinsssanyway’ doesn’t make any sense. Plus, there shouldn’t be anything like ‘it got meeyy whut I deeezerf..’
The worst part is in its lyric. Frankly speaking, it’s miserable.I love its tune but whenever I play it the lyric is bothering me.It spoils everything lovely and beautiful the song has to offer.
mojos101 10 months ago
This song is great in tune but falls flat in lyric and pronunciation.
I have spent some time to figure out what the song is all about.
But I still can’t get it.
First, it’s about the singer’s accent.
Actually, the whole thing isn’t that bad but the problem is in “let me down and lift you up”. The vocalist sang it like “… lift you tup…..”I believe he linked the words lift and up then become …liftup….but he seemed to have forgotten ‘you’ is in between Lift and Up.
mojos101 10 months ago
U impressed me ! You got me what I deserve ! Great lyrics ever .. Keep going on! I like u.
xiaowei667 11 months ago
u r clever..i like it.
kzmaung 11 months ago
amazing song...i like u n ur song...<3
seraphzzify 1 year ago
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maysusandylwin 1 year ago
some1 can post lyric or page that had lyric . cant wait to shout everytime.
plotetote 1 year ago
great song :D
beeXXvernity 1 year ago
nice and amazing vocals..:)
NeerajWaitingFor2012 1 year ago
really luv thiss songg ^^
breezeefy 1 year ago
that's a very good song and can I request for the lyrics?
eaintchu 1 year ago
brother i love your songs! they are really nie....
spyaugest 1 year ago
what a nice song :).
chomaimai 1 year ago
really great song,,,,,i have no words to describe :P
shaneaung8 1 year ago
Good song .Good luck . Thank you .
1970moeyin 1 year ago