Brandon Vee-Shook Ones Mobb Deep Insturmental

[FuckkingMatt]

good fucking shit!! nice teeth (no homo)

[slpete36]

fuck its nice to see a rapper bringing back good hip hop with actual punches, and vocab.

[Birdmanjr602]

Yooo ive been lookin at your shit and its good dog i wanna see you do quiet storm or give up tha goods i no u can rip thoose beat up playa

[ajreyes2]

shit was legit check me out on flow of the instrumental.

[MercOhra]

damn man... nice one

[RzRaZoR0]

good rap negro nic job man ;)

[LinkFurr]

I subed bc ur fukin hot XD and ur real good

[robertothejoker]

dude your good!!

how long have you been rapping?

[danknug11]

u can tell u reading it off somthing haha =/.....just freestyle off da dome homie but good lyrics nigguh nice beat too mobb deep

[Trezisfresh]

Boii Ya Flo Dope Az Fauck Propz

[yojoeflow]

this goes out to all my faggit niggas sportin american eagle hoodies

[Oreillyisthebest]

real hot bars....dam man I rocked out to your shit....love it

[gwyatt07]

brandon vee u aint g u must be blind cos u cant see me u cant se shit u should just admit u get smashed like a clit u cant spit that was pre writ like a joint youll get lit burnt from this verse u should of learnt that hip hop is dead and pricks like u kill it ur girls pussy i fill it i am the realest and ur a joke talk about chronic when u cant smoke

[duskonar]

nice

i just tried rapping to this but im more into uk grime genre

so i found it quite hard to rap slowly

any tips ??

[paxoner]

coulda' hit harder wit that beat.......try it again........flows there though....just not for that beat.....

[rothen19]

I like this shit, you got flow man !

[llaacy]

Straight Goods all i have to say.

[osztwoglocksup]

shits fire

[lonelyst0ner1]

respect shits ill but i can see that you wrote it down which is all good cause you got skills much respect

[BabyGersh]

bet u wouldnt battle rap for that paper

[dustin95m]

LOVEE ITTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Step0nyou]

AMAZING!

[LazySmi]

man ur fucking good keep it up lol

[graveey]

'my lyrics is tighter than a virgin thats for certain' fuckin sick line!!! keep up the work bro u got talent

[aguyinaskimask82]

props from an MC....flow was caliente...lol loved that part... lyrics were dope,maybe could use a little work on multis but dope still

[SuperSocomeR]

DAAAAUMMMMMM...this is some sick shittttt.

Thats good that you made a video comment instead of writing and typing your lyrics! But dope stuff! 5/5

[Agrum20]

Respect man

Keep up the good work.

Greetz from Belgium

[JoZuko]

VEry good son, very nice, i wish i had a cam.. but VERY GOOD now you must stay the same. DONT BECOME A SELLOUT, EVEN IF IT GETS YOU KILLED. I think you would rather be known as a Tupac, then a Lil wayne right? Sellout or dead? Trust me that was fuckin great kid, really. I would buy your shit man, but you musnt be a sellout. Dont rap about "fuckin bitches gettin money" crap. Keep it real my friend and you will be famous, maybe with enimies but better to be loved by the people then the dollar.

[bigbrownfrank]

don't tell him what to do mierda.

[RecklessFear]

sick

[RevurbRecords]

sick dudee

[zosodude23]

haha sick man i was actually expecting to be disapointed but your good

[KeepItFresh02]

ayy fuck a record deal. hiphop need this shit

[Miniboy8]

oh my good. I guess we have a talent here.. :D Keep it up bro

[TrueDiligence]

damn son

[GoldDeagle25]

dude ur beast man respect homie keep goin dude u might get a record deal

[mcfoxybingo]

respect man its mc foxy

[beastie7885]

respect

[swepa2]

did u write that down man ya good i wanna do a song whit you haha

[xcyclops14]

das sick son mad respect

[001SharK]

nice

[FuckkingMatt]

thats fucking ill

why dont you hit a freestyle using my instrumental

[Shifftee]

Dope Shit, Gawd! Made Me Smile At Last Cuz All Dat Wack Shit Dat'z Played On Tha Radio Gotz 2 Be Put In A Trash Bin...

Good Shit, Keep Doin' Yo' Thang, Gawd!

[flippingfilotar]

real dope

[Raw2TheC0RE]

Yeah man ya good. All the best.

Peace, Justice & Unity

[RobAintGangsta]

reminds me of non phixions style

[d12emma]

fuck u bro. that mofuking good.. keep it up. keep it up nigger..

[joeydillon17]

nice.. RESPECT

my fav freestyle song

[seclonis]

bro u run shit

keep dem rhymes comin

[MARIACLASS]

yeaaaa dat's more like it

[cataxo444]

damn thats nice bro

[donnanco]

oooo marry meeeeeee loool =] x

[nuthman18]

Ill

[stupidmoose4]

pretty good dawg, keep your head up hommie

[jdries10]

yeah we need to kick a verse

[djm5493]

u doin openin sets for local rappers in ur area?

thats the best way to get urself noticed

[FlowFact0ry]

QueeeeeeeeeeeeensBridgee Boy !!!!! never Dieeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !

[donnanco]

boi u got swagger...mmm hmm loool x

[Diema187]

germany stands behind you man...

real shit...fat lyrics...

[whytie42]

too sick Keep it real man. Hip hop ain't dead after all. Bring it back hommie.

[delatroy]

gold star for you!

[HipHopRapManiac]

Have you heard Wyze Geye?

[dablocksmoshated]

yeah i have i like em nice word play and flow i would like him to come with more hmph in his delivery but yeah who am i to judge hes pretty ill drop knowledge every bar 2

[HipHopRapManiac]

Yeah man thats his only weakness ae.. Hes too lax back i rekon he needs some Energy behind his voice/delivery aswel

[Dylanshreds1]

V, man, this is some sick shit man, you should do Soliloquy of Chaos.

[Kanientakeron]

Yyoo Brandon Vee, Hear me out braah.. You should spit some to Runnin- Tupac feat. Notorious BIG. .. or Fed Up With The Bull-shit - Big L

[Jaybaasanjav]

mad props on all of'em , i got nothin to say except these words, yo shiets are dope enough, fashoooo...GL

[NinjaStyle167]

papa doc

[Legenda20SLO]

unbealivable

[Toyyy93]

sikk man

[LowlifeDemonKing]

lol not bad metaphors, but the flow was a little off, those gasps for air kinda messes it up a bit, but pretty good overall, i'd give it like a C, but that's just me, just comparing it to other MCs i've heard

[hiroyukil33t]

I would agree but this as for sure his best video

[Zmw192]

fuckin tight

[smokinballa415]

HAHA dude you really do sound like him, siick

as always, good shit son

[quagdingle]

oh shit!!! u sound just like him

[lilJealous]

fuckin awesome

[123Geezer]

That was good son... Nice flow.

[Sixmaan]

Nice man - Austria likes your flow!

[Futureee420]

You just a shook 1,

shake it like an etch and sketch.

DAMNN!

[Ryukolink]

impressive..

good flow.. good lyrics, I have heard some of those combos before, I can hear some of the people who you listen to come out in your lyric and syntax.

any chance you could get some multi rhymes in there..

simply put rhymes like this:

get at that

get set back

I write a lot, but have a horrible singing voice, what is your overall theme.. like, real ideas, money, drugs, thug life, real life, or just whatever gets put down on the paper.

[dablocksmoshated]

thanks man lol i think your the first person to give me like a run down constructive criticism which is awesome =) yeah i guess people who i do listen to come out here and there but as much as i try to be different it still seems that way but yeah i understand what ur saying my overall is word play metaphor things like most of these youtube videos are for fun my actual written songs for a potential cd is all content based dealing struggle pain love joy allegories plain human emotions

[Ryukolink]

yah a lot of the metaphors are decent, it seems like you force the the words sometimes..

like you exhale hard on some stuff which kills the flow, which you have.

I play around with metaphors but a lot of the stuff has already been done thanks to lil wayne and his million albums(including mixtapes). Now hes trying to change the whole hip hop game too, which seems interesting.

I consider myself a lyricist, a little more educated than most of the online rappers you see :P

[Ryukolink]

Overall Not bad just trying to point out things I noticed.

What state you from?

Do you have any songs you have produced yet?

I have been working on a couple, jotting stuff down here and there, kind of have it on the back burner because of school and work.

[DaveQuanEmpire]

the first lyric was fly

spit fire in the winter make the seasons change somin like dat

[vollhorst17]

Yeah..i like the beats you're useing..i use em too ^^ Nice flow, nice punches..keep it up..and if you're going to switzerland, let me know it right? greez from swizz

[dablocksmoshated]

word thanks man haha man how awesome would it be to go to switzerland mad ill you carry on hip hop there too, the universal expression of raw emotion man hip hop it doesnt get any better than that

[bennybuzz4444]

is this top of the dome

[riora]

my couzin could do better off the top off of his head it was alright.

[dablocksmoshated]

lol ur entitled to ur opinion but have em make a vid then otherwise that bit of information is useless now isnt it?

[OrtonTube]

ha.. I'd like to see 'em try n do somethin' better than you. Just the thought of that makes me laugh =]

[JRevolution09]

If that was off the top, you got talent. If that wasnt off the top, you got talent anyways my nig, the lyrics were ridiculous and the flow was tragic, keep it up, good work.

[dablocksmoshated]

nah it wasn't off the top psh i wish freestylin is sumthin im tryna work on thats like the illest skill ever in my opinion i can free acapella but on the confines of a drum and rhythm thats tuff but imma get it down but thanks again fro the positivity cant thank every1 enuff =)

[Sultan1923]

I'm from Queens, and I gotta say you ripped that track with those lyrics.

Good stuff man, keep it up

[dablocksmoshated]

word man thanx =) imma keep it up for as long as hip hop remains i appreciate you coming by and checkin em out tho man

[LogInYourIn]

awesome!

[dablocksmoshated]

=) thanks man i appreciate you coming thru and takin the time to list and drop a + comment

[OrtonTube]

that was fucking sick man.. ending (again) was awesome.. 5/5