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From: dboi4lyfe1
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  • keep rapping u need more more intensity or something tho

  • Nattielockx was totally right.... you can express yourself all you want, but if people have no idea what your talking about and cant relate to you nooones gonna wanna listen. . . the more people and types of people can relate to your music the more popular your gonna be..... and try to get a harder beat to the song this one was kinda soft and lame....

  • @10ManCity10 I don't do this to gain popularity, I'm doing it to express myself. With that said, I don't think you or she really took the tyme out listen to and dissect the lyrics. Listen to the chorus and tell me wut it means and that you can't relate to it.

  • nice keep in rapping dude! i could never rap like u. not bad

  • I dont really get the lyrics alot but also a great beat and i do agree with transformer217 you have to have alot of energy in your songs, you're voice sounds a bit boring.

  • Killer beat...the lyrics are good...But it needs to be more...Flow ? or aggresive..Whats yours style

  • its aight bro but u need more emotion, no offense yo

  • well... you sent me a message... and i think your good :D

    keep on rapping. i'm serious. you don't use autotune. that's what i look for these days.

    peace.

  • I rarely take the time to listen to spam I usually get in my inbox but I did this time and was disappointed once again. Try rapping about worldly issues or concerns that actually matter, something someone can get something out of. This is not meant to discourage you but rather encourage you to do something that might benefit someone other than yourself. That`s what music is about right? If you`re doing it for yourself then you`re on the wrong path.

  • @Nattielockx This is possibly the best comment I've ever gotten. Music is about expression, as with any other art form. Sometimes it's about letting loose and having fun. Other times it's about something serious. Had you said you didn't like the song it would have been fine, but this song has a lot of meaning. Now, I challenge you and everyone else to listen to lyrics in the song and tell me how this isn't about worldly issues or concerns.

  • Not bad, keep up the good work. But you need more energy, and ferociousness!

  • Hmm not bad, it really sounds professional. I think it does sound like something meaningful, (though I'm not big on foul language lol) good luck with being discovered; you are on your way!

  • Nice Song :)

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