RE: [Code Geass Abridged] Mission 1: "The Awakening" (HD)

[Thesagascouncil]

Very good for a first episode,we need to see more like this in the abridged/parody community

[UnforgivenRonin]

@Thesagascouncil

what till the remake is up, it have better voice acting

[ManaYuGiOhGX5Ds]

Very good job guys ^^! Stellar sfx and music choices (lol I heard a YGO monster summon noise before C.C. got shot XD!)  Yesh Kallen does look KINDA liek Aki XD! I have 1 critique tho, it mostly happened with Leoluch, Voices actors, if you have screaming lines, you have to commit to it. It cant sound like you're TRYING to scream. You HAVE to scream. Other than that, props :3

[UnforgivenRonin]

@ManaYuGiOhGX5Ds

Yeah, i know, but I'm going 2 redo the episode 1 and episode Zero, so it can fit together

[AndySan]

@UnforgivenRonin - I agree, those whisper screams got to go. There needs to be more jokes too. Other than that, it was pretty good!

[UnforgivenRonin]

@AndySan

this one was beta test, the newer episodes should be a lot better

[AndySan]

@UnforgivenRonin - Awesomesauce!

[wienkmaster]

i like the way this turned out dude plus i have a better mic now so i can record clearer now. i love the idea of showing the world in black and white until he got the powers then in color afterwords. and the into fits perfect. great job dude.

[UnforgivenRonin]

@wienkmaster

I had a great idea to redo these episode and episode Zero, and the next episode to skip over season 1 and go directed to the next season

[rielacane]

the opening ish awsome for one

the inserts of backround music was also really smooth

and...bet last line ever!!!

[UnforgivenRonin]

@rielacane

I learn to do that at the end of edit, so the new episodes plus the redone are going to be better

[DemonGroceryStore]

Okay review time:

Pros: Liked your music selection, the editing was done nicely, it wasn't too long or too short, and footage was good quality.

Cons: The voice acting could use some work (needed a little more passion and emotion from Lelouch), the black and white reminds me of a flashback, and the script and delivery of jokes could use a little bit of tweaking.

Ultimately, I say you guys did a good job for a 1st episode, it was pretty funny and I'd say definetly continue.

[UnforgivenRonin]

@DemonGroceryStore

I have always pride myself in music, also for the lelouch, it was my friends very 1st time as voice acting, and the script was one year to old and never fully fixed, so the delivery in some lines are missed because i never gave the actors the way i wanted or the way it should come out, so it was my fault but, it was a good learning experience

[UnforgivenRonin]

@DemonGroceryStore

and the black and white was a homage to clerks, also i did it at the end and had no way of changing it

[Tamao108]

Pretty cool!

[UnforgivenRonin]

@Tamao108

Thank you

[AsaiNeroTran]

The voice acting is underwhelming at best, and there are times when the audio isn't balanced, resulting in hearing certain things difficult. Oftentimes, explosions muffle the dialogue, resulting in confusing segments. But not a bad piece of work. I enjoyed the millions of pro wrestling references, including my own as Kevin Nash in WCW.

[UnforgivenRonin]

@AsaiNeroTran

I know the voice acting was a mess at points because it was either to old,(1 year old) or it was the script again was written 2 years ago, could of been more updated, also i have had problems with audio due to that i rely on looking at the audio levels, but its broken, ask Maffew of botchamania has had the same problem, but again its the second episode, i have more room to improve, the only thing that keep changing was the music and it end up pretty good

[UnforgivenRonin]

For everyones delight, here are the songs, I used for the episode:

Wild and Young by American Bang

DJ Earworm Summer 2011 Remix

Burn in My Light by Mercy Drive

Make A Move By Icon for Hire

Aerial by Vitamin String Quartet

Misery Business Remix by Vitamin String Quartet

[christop17]

2 freakin' years?!

[UnforgivenRonin]

@christop17

the script was finished on may of '09, but rewritten twice in 2010, the original beginning was later Episode 0

[91drumfreak]

Nice job dude! Especially like the choice of music.

Also, did you actually sneak in a "Miz" reference! If so, AWESOME!

[UnforgivenRonin]

@91drumfreak

The music keep changing when i was editing and i like these songs, so i put them up, also on the Miz line that was Stylinhawaiian7 doing improv

[91drumfreak]

@UnforgivenRonin Well it was awesome. Great job!

[UnforgivenRonin]

@91drumfreak

Thank You!

[AsaiNeroTran]

@91drumfreak That reference wasn't written in, but I made it because I do shit like that.

[UnforgivenRonin]

@AsaiNeroTran

It was a good choice

[AMTRAX91]

I also did the "We will do anything to suport your sham of a..." guy

[UnforgivenRonin]

@AMTRAX91 I like that guy to!

[AMTRAX91]

@UnforgivenRonin No, I mean, that was me doing that voice.

[UnforgivenRonin]

@AMTRAX91

I know, its just that i forgot about putting that down when i wrote who did what, sorry about that

[UnforgivenRonin]

Finally it came out!