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From: elleisforlovee
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  • nick sounds so damn hot.

  • ooh i love the descriptiveness!

  • τoo cool. do alot of people know?.!

  • That wasn't a question more of a guess of what he is seeing just so you know.

  • Trace's is like realizing that their not the same little kids that their grown up and fully capable of doing grown up things? I am so excited to read the next one!!

  • i love how the way you tell the story.

    theres so much details that you can actually picture the settings and everything else.

    its as if you are there with nick standing at miley's house..

    youre such an amazing writer. cant wait for the next one. :)

  • wow. i love all the details in this!

    i could just see it in my head lol.

    wonder what trace is gonna say to nick...

    hmmmm...

  • Woooow I could imagine and picture every little detail in this part, it was so wonderful :]

    I can't wait until tomorrow, they're date probably, right? lol.

    :]

  • So, who all knows they are datin' noww ?

  • Nobody.

  • woow. this is awkward for him. Poor him lmao, i hope everything's gonna be okay. I hope Trace is gonna be okay with him too. But i really asking myself what he would do. The description in this chap was really ah-mazing girl. I was picturing everything you said ( trying to ... ) Wow, i really cant believe how much i love them. I love you girl :] <3

  • Wow, that was really good!

    I'm in love with your writing.

    I can't wait to see what happens on the date!

  • was brandi supposed to sound kinda rude?

  • Not really. Why?

  • i was just wondering cuz i thought it kinda sounded like it, but she was just playing around

  • hmmm tracee....

    haha i wanna "ruffle" nicks curls

    :)

  • omg ths was amzing i could pciture everything!

    ur an amazing writer

  • i love it!!

    amazing <3

  • <3

    i'm curious what Trace is going to say...

  • wow i can imagine what theyre wearing perfect.

  • amazinnnng :D

  • nick has grown up trace :)

  • AMAZING !! <3

    :) intense ending with Trace & Nick.

  • nice. i like the Brandi-Nick moment haha,i found it a bit amusing.

    can't wait for tomorrow's. :]

  • So much detail...I LOVE IT!

    I loved the details, they're so good.

    Can't wait to read about the date, and what happens with Trace and Nick. That ending was something.

  • omg elle, your amazing! every chapter is perfectly written & it makes me want to read more. i can't wait to read nick & miley's date! its gonna be so good, i can tell. <3

  • Ugh, I loved it.

    So realistic and so poetic at the same time.

    Pure beauty. <3

  • beautiful

    thanks elle <3

  • woah, you're an azming writer :) can't wait for next! :D

  • wow lol intense ending for some reason

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