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  • Sounded like ashens at the beginning.

  • ha , you did the same as us, check my profile for our documentary

  • nice tom.  (ive commented now lol )

  • @peanut484 .about time

  • Really enjoyable watch TLN - you've adopted the light hearted C4 documentary styling really well. I thought the humour, editing techniques (esp. graphics) were excellent, and I enjoyed the v/o which anchors the meaning well.

    The audio levels could take some sweetening, but you might do that in the final edit before you burn the exam board version.

    Well done all! :)

  • Lol

    I loved the channel 4 mr house was funny..

    I love the opening bit as well.. it was like a real channel 4 doc

    Overall, it was very funny XD

  • Oh Roma... my love it's Mark... you forgotten about me? I FOUND YOU ON YOUTUBE. You can never escape. You miss those study hours.

  • wow you copied the channel 4 style perfectly the only difference is the obvios lack of production quality but thats just because your a multimillion pound tv complany with HD camreas and lighting rigs

    p.s. was very funny

  • Funny stuff.. Well made :)

  • awesome video dude!

    I like the intro with mr.house lol

    And the gardner interview is good aswell

  • This is brilliant I really liked: Mr Gardnener interview Introduction Night cam Variety of shots Text on screen saying who people were (more authentic) Could improve (being anal here) Interview sounded like voice over (basically repeating what other people have already said) Psychology poster showing Mr G was a psychologist - funny but a bit random The fact I wasn't in it :p Well done though :)
  • I think that this is amazing, definitely a channel 4 future documentry :)

    Good points:

    - The night cam, made it look like a real 24/7 documentry

    - Mr House's introduction

    - Different shots i.e. Outside, house, bedroom, garden etc... realistic

    - The mum part.

    Improvements:

    - Interview, sounded more like a voice over than interview

    - A part 2 and 3, haha

    Congratulation group Tom!!

  • I think the video is great.

    Is Mr Gardener meant to be a teacher? Because if not there is a lesson timetable right next to his head which might be a give away. Also I think the posters on the wall are a bit much, although maybe you should have a facebook the musical poster, that would be more effective then a I love facebook poster.

  • its great!! even though u was so going to laugh but you know :)

  • @ChickenDippas77 LOL i refrained myself from doing so

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