Hikari no Senritsu (光の旋律）- [male COVER]

[animefreack2101]

Eeeeee!!! Its good But I'm just not used to it. :/

[shinesyaoran]

i love Keiko also... i find ur voice sounds good ..

[MurasakiFuyu]

I really like it. Great job!

[ultrajd]

Hey you know what...This isnt half bad. Is this you singing?

[SeventhBeat]

Woah, a male version that isn't just some audacity pitch-edit?

Excellent.

[itainatuko]

sorry

[dijjit]

well done

[kodomonojikann]

結構上手いｗ

[itainatuko]

fuck you

[LovingKeikoKubota]

@itainatuko lmfaooooooooooooooooooooo! ok lmaoo gotcha

[YourDeadFish]

@itainatuko Fuck you too.

[YaoiiLoverSuuchan1]

i think in very great,

i didn't like the original version but i love this one <33

now im in love with this song hehe

[FruitTeara]

omg das is ja echt fantastisch *-*

Dieses cover is echt gelungen und die aussprache ist echt super und verständlich >.<

[youocgo]

So wonderful!!

English is not my native languange so that I can't express my emotion so well!

but I thought emotion is beyong nations..

U sang very well!!

[lalagirl211]

oh wth..this is ur voice??i thought u just change it to male version...

[lalagirl211]

where's the original versionb i cnt find it!!

[CherryzProject]

This is very good. You commented on ours so I thought it only fair to comment on you awesome cover. =D This must have been hard for you to sing but you sang it so well. =D

[mechan1995]

Wtf!! omg omg omg!! o.O"" You are such a pro!! xD!! I listened to the other covers of another people, and I love urs bettar!! ahaha!! xD!! Niceeeeeee!! *Subscribe*

[LovingKeikoKubota]

@mechan1995 thanks so much XD This was actually the bad one.... I did a new cover on this song (Hikari no Senritsu) recently, and I uploaded it too ^_^ Glad to know that you enjoyed this... and once again thanks for the compliment! *_*

[CrystalShinigami]

Your voice is very good, it's smooth and effective, however shoeythoughts brings up a good point with the strain on your voice. If it's an issue in the future, you may want to consider going up an octave if your voice isn't so good with super-low notes (I recommend this, because I have the same problem).

That aside, the cover is still very good. Keep up the work!

P.S. I would have liked to hear your voice with the song "Sapphire."

XD

[shoeythoughts]

I'm no expert, still hope it's okay to give my two cents!

Firstly, is the 'echo' effect intentional? Or is it just your mike? 1:48 - 2:06 sounds like you're in a karaoke room, lol.

You also sound like you're trying really hard to keep in tune. Your voice seems to be sinking. I guess you can practise before attempting to sing the song with a lighter, freer feeling?

I think you tend to drag your notes too much and become offbeat in some parts. (5:00)

I liked 4:00 - 4:18! Not bad, keep it up!

[LovingKeikoKubota]

Look here, betch.

Those were some pretty great criticisms. So in MY eyes, you're a DAMN EXPERT. ;)

Thank you for your time to critique my work!! I deeply appreciate it!! ^_^; I re-sang this song, so if you'd like, I can PM you the updated version via mediafire download! xDD

[waca22]

in min 1:15 seems to say "La vida" which in Spanish means " the life".

sorry for my comment off theme xD

[waca22]

congratulations, it's great cover.

It adds to my favourites and 5/5

[LovingKeikoKubota]

oh xD Thank you so much!

[waca22]

hehe my english is bad xD

[Elderberry]

*stops in to critique this song too* I heard this one before listening to the original (some up-to-date Kalafina fan I am XD) and I think I actually still prefer your version. XDDD Yeah, you do sound very nasally and sometimes the pitch is a little off, but there's this really nice, nostalgic feel to the singing and you blend well with yourself.

Would love to hear a redone version sometime in the future, but the existing one is pretty good so no rush~ XD

[LovingKeikoKubota]

Thanks, Elderberry!

You have encouraged me to rerecord again xD

I already re-recorded Hikaru's and Keiko's lines. It's just Wakana's lines that are killing me v_v

I'll work on it this weekend :D

[tachikinoriko]

sugoi neee ~~

[LovingKeikoKubota]

Thanks so much :D

[Kotorinatsu]

君の手がまだ・・・私もこのパートが大好きです。この曲を聴くた­び癒される感じがします。

[LovingKeikoKubota]

ありがとうございます！

[MiriuOniaya]

You have such a nice voice ♥ And you sing with such energy; we can tell that you are singing for you and for fun and cause your such a Kalafina fan. This song is quite catchy/pretty, I like you on the verses especially. Also, you sound well with yourself, lol. Your notes aren't all entirely spot on, but I think you did a fabulous job on this dub~

[LovingKeikoKubota]

Thank you so much for your compliment! I greatly appreciate it :D I agree: my notes were out of tune from here to there. I'm working on this, still xD

[MiriuOniaya]

You are very welcome! (^w^) No one is perfect, and I give you props for dubbing and having fun, while still wanting to improve. I'll sub and keep an eye out for new stuff from you~

[philadelphin]

super cool *___*

go kizu~

[kittya16]

ily Kizu!! It's very nice!!

[amydien09]

Wonderful..you did very well on this! =)