Nice edeted movie, great special effects, but lame story!!!
Make another following this kind of script:
Hero shows of his abilities in some scenes. Then he is captured by his enemie and tied (with ropes) in some painfull way(dressed only in shorts) After some invane attempts, the enemie is about to severely torture the hero. Then show he is starting to escape.
This way you build up excitement!!
Finally show the hero escaping and capture the vilain, who in turn is tightly tied up. Good luck!
Thanks for this little review. I know, the story seems to be "out of focus". I definitely keep in mind your comment developing the next chapter or my other projects!
Nice edeted movie, great special effects, but lame story!!!
Make another following this kind of script:
Hero shows of his abilities in some scenes. Then he is captured by his enemie and tied (with ropes) in some painfull way(dressed only in shorts) After some invane attempts, the enemie is about to severely torture the hero. Then show he is starting to escape.
This way you build up excitement!!
Finally show the hero escaping and capture the vilain, who in turn is tightly tied up. Good luck!
handenbinder0 2 years ago
Thanks for this little review. I know, the story seems to be "out of focus". I definitely keep in mind your comment developing the next chapter or my other projects!
RELOAD911 2 years ago