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  • well.. a little late on the replies, but this was really good quite upset it ended, it completely took over from my revision. You should definitely write more :)

  • @chuckanded Ah you're never too late;) Thanks. Yes I have written alot more but its up on fanfiction. (:

  • omg i loved the ending it was so cute. and it only took me two days to finish the entire seirs. i iloved it. thanks!!!!!!!

  • Haha :D Awesome! I'm glad you loved it! :D

  • oksorry i accidentally pressed one star whil e moving my mouse. totally would have put 5 stars =] sry

  • The whole series was amazing. I cried through parts off it but I was so happy when Tara got fired and Alexx came back.

  • Thank you!

    haha, yes and I would be so happy when Alexx come back for real in the show.

  • I agree with Chocky1122, it was beautiful, I enjoyed the story, everyday I had looked forward reading as I come from work, beautiful ending, I know it just fiction, but the part with her screaming in pain brings back memories for me when I was having my boy and girl. Keep on writing.

  • I LOve It It Was All Complete

  • GAAHHH I LOOOVE IT! ♥

  • this is a perfect end!!

    i love so much your fanfiction!

  • ........... I just want to say again that the entire series was GREAT and MAGNIFICENT and just EXCELLENT!!!!!!!

    I think this is the best "book" I've ever read. Your ideas are awesome and every new chapter has made my day!!

    What I also loved was the choice of the backround music! Especially in this chapter it fitted so well... xD

    If I go in bookstore one day and find "Patterns of love" as whole book, I'll be first one to buy it! THX 4 always having made my day with these great series, Trisha!

  • I cried again because of this beautiful ending and the sentence that their entire life is now complete. All chapters were written so well... you're really a professional!!!

    I could also write a similar comment as lovenumb3rs and also as long as her but it would be the same comment with the same adjectives :D........................

  • great job. i can't beleive the story is over... Great ending!! hope you do more stories with them.

  • OMG, Awesome work as always. :P

    Awesome ending by the way. :)

    I loved it.

    Are you going to make any other little stories like this?

    Hope you do. :)

  • would love to go into a book store some day and find a book written by you about csi miami or anything else, it doesn`t matter, I think I would read all of your stories... keep up the magnificent work ! <3 JM

    ps. sry, but my coment was just too long, cause I was overhelmed by my impressions, so I had to cut it into pieces :)

  • wished I had read this earlier, cause it makes me sooo happy... was just too busy with school- It`s really annoying at the moment...can`t believe that the story ends now- hope you`ll make an other fanfiction of them :) ;) whatever it`ll be about- I`ll read it, cause I always love your stories and your way to keep the tension...

  • omg! that is just sooo great, amazing, gorgeous,awesome, lovely, charming, cute, adorable and magnificent! can`t find any better words to describe it... LOOOVE it, almost like a fairytale, but at the same time so close to reality ;) you made my day- again :D :)

  • OMG thats the best ending ever!!!!

    soooo cute!!!

    perfect ending!!

    <333 ly!!!

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