Bad Fanfiction Reading 7 - sonic of the shadows!

[OmegaZeroXis]

he made a 2nd chapter XD

[vampirehunterXD]

This person takes the art of writing to a whole new level with a beautiful piece.... i give him a 5 star review..... Marvelous...

[SirSomeguy]

PUNCTUATION IS YOUR FRIEND! IT GIVES US NOTE OF WHEN CHANGES IN MOOD AND PHRASES OCCUR! PLEASE ALLOW IT IN THE STORY!

[SadistBunny32]

There is absolutely no punctuation at all. XD

[Hemaglox]

EGGGGGMAN

[MarzX1802]

Love the way you try to pronounce the spelling errors XD subscribed!

[tAiLsFrOmThEdOlL]

plz can u has more periodz plz? thnx kitteh iz kinda hrateful

[blublast99]

Who predicts that its about the tails doll?

(raises hand)

[SirSomeguy]

@blublast99 Do thumbs count as raised hands? Cause I gave you one.

[ih8makinusernames]

lulz

[mew2226]

WTF....Stuped o3o....that was a Gay Fanfiction o3o

[Uglypasta]

Best thing since squirrelking.

[leonflash]

A pure piece of artful writing to be remembered all through time. Beautiful.

[WizmummyProductions]

who wrote this?? xDDDDD

[TheAdamKyleChannel]

eggggman lol 5/5

[penquin12500]

Tails Doll!

[Jigsaw765]

can you fell the sunshine?

-tails doll

[Catqueen58]

lol, i had a headache before this, now my eyes hurt too XD

[CaptainPichu]

Tornato

[Aargh14]

Periods, plz.

[cyinderartemisia]

Wow...

[NaruhinaXSasusaku]

My stomach wants to gag right now,I had to stop half way because I was giggling to much.

I checked that topic,and someoned LIKED this.

Who wrote this? A 4 year old?

[Mechakitten]

dude.. chapter 2 is even more incoherent ...I cried

[HedghogAlert911]

some people actually liked this? O_o

[slashermaster28]

I know... members of the 4kids forums tend to be noobs at fanfiction and like just about anything. I used to be a member of that forum. Then again, part of the reason for that was because most of the members' only purpose there was to flame 4kids.

[Regiman2009]

Well, it was on the 4kids forms!

[Clarestovold]

Lmao, the 'Tornato' XD

[Rhythm]

I like how every little error is so humorously sounded out. I'm surprised you can keep a straight face while reading these.

[spikeyoshi]

I liked how you sounded out his mistakes "egggman" LOL!

[spikeyoshi]

I lol'd

[carsheaven]

dude really would you stop when you finish a sentence you jumble everything up and I cant understand..the whole story is one damn sentence

[TheGoldCrow]

Read the story , there are no sentences XD

[ShadowSpark220]

Don't blame the reader, blame the author for making this god-forsaken piece of shit that begs for Apocalypse!

[books121]

Let's play with the ?s!

[Ulldot]

Lol what a bad chapter =D

[SlashGFX]

Holy crap this is a bad fan-fic, I'm pretty dang SHURRRRE it is.

[xAllisOnex]

OBEY THE DOLL.

[TheWickedHaveMoreFun]

XD Oh man, I'm AMAZED you were able to read this. Nothing short of amazed. I'm shocked stuff like this is getting praise on that misguided forum, tsk tsk...

[Xanaboy1]

its bad fiction 7b wrong tile

[TheGoldCrow]

My bad =(

[Kirbydreamstar]

Hehe, I see your taking my advice about 4kids XD

[Conkerdeath]

EGGGGGGMANS