mas110_s2_08_mon3_wong_stewart

[djppaterson]

I like the transitions in this clip! they are very clean and it does wonders at altering the pace of the narrative. In the shots looking into the cafe, where the camera is panning away from the window, it appears that you have cut out frames: the result is definitely effective. Very cool! Well done.

[Musshaoib]

Hey I rate this clip. There is some very good cropping work (with lyrics & outside the bookstore) and also some different colour schemes to others that I have seen. Well done!

[steffosteffos]

I really liked the idea of cropping the footage to focus on the girl outside in the bookstore scene! You also made the scenes interesting and engaging through the repetitive cuts and crops but sometimes the shots put the pace out a little bit. The over-riding colour scheme, I think it was yellow, orange and red tied the clip together nicely.

Critically, pace and timing would be something to work on, just some fine tuning. Overall = entertaining!

Gold star!

Stephanie Fenton - lab: mon 11

[mjdale90]

the way you accentuate the lyrics of the song with the text footage works really well. The opening sequences also done very well with the short sharp pieces of video recurring throughout the video really defines your video.

[LouisaAndrews]

The way you made the colours more prominent in the city scenes in relation to the white text was really interesting, and fit well. Sometimes it looked like the timing of the guitar clips were just a little out, but the text timing and lip-sync in the chorus was very well done!