Mercy -A Niley Vampire Story- |Part1; Dont Give Up|

[TheNileyaddict]

what's the name of the song on the piano at the beggining. i love it

[TMDSFOREVER28]

can i have your candy molly ?



[dupa123l]

everyone is better at writing than me, at least thts wht it feels like!!!!

[MultiJessiemae]

what happened to miles!!!!!!!!!!

[peacelove887]

loved it!!

[Jemily0422]

i love ur intro

[Storywritter13]

oh my freaking god! its the best story i ever read! u did really good job!

[xCoolRosex]

u r rlly talented with this its like im reading a book keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[iluvmiley9210]

cute!!I LOVE THE BOOKS!!U SHOULD REALLY CHECK EM OUT!!!!!!

[GeminiBabe1991]

whats wrong with miley/molly?

i loved it

[WebkinzLova4455]

whats rong with miley???

[bookworm6795]

that docter has bad bedside manner lol

[xamandajeanx24]

amazing! next one please! :D

[TheLadybug0916]

loved it!!!! great ur an awesome writer keep up the good work!!!

[theworldissqaure]

What font is this?

[jazzcrank]

hey jw what is this the sequel to

[EmoScreamox]

OMG! Amazing, this may just be my new favourite series of yours :D Sorry i didn't comment sooner (im normally in the top 5 =/) I was on holiday.. yippy!!!

[paponeeri]

wow awesome. I really like it, its dfferent then others.

not like the typical 'teenage- movie- story' more like ... idk very deep story. ♥

love it already

[courtroxout]

so im guessing that nick is going to be the vampire? haha its really good i cant wait for the next one

[MaRiF3R0]

Ahhhhhh so coool cant waiit and im not rushing take your time :]

This is amaziiing!

[Binnieluvjonas]

awesome!!

next one pleasssseeee!!!!!!!!!!!!

[DorsyJB]

i like it..

but its kinda sad-ish

[NileyVariety94]

I'm sorry I didn't say happy b-day to her! :(

This story was really good we didn't see "Nick" but we know it's him, he seems a bit creepy..lol

[MiizzNessa]

love it!!

great episode!

cant wait to find out whats wrong with miley

[nileyfan4life94]

really goood!!!

[Megjinast]

were did u find that pic of nick and miley? the pic at the beginning

[nickjonas4life913302]

I loved it is so different than other series!!!!!!!!

You should totally continue but take ur time no need to rush!!!!!!!!!

[pinkxpokaxdot]

amazing

[shipway12]

loved it ! cant wait please hurry !!

[anikishiku]

dont tell her to hurry up or whe wont do it!!

[cookycritic]

o my god that was amazing! sooo unique i loved it. soooooo good! cant wait for the 2nd!!!!

[TheNileyGirl]

omg i love it its toatally amazing keeep up with this story i really need to know what happens omg omg

[Nick4President2028]

What's up with Nick? Is it Nick? It sounds like him. And what's wrong with Miley? This is really interesting, I wanna see what's going to happen.

[twilight7899]

greattt episode!! Loved it lol

[caaroliinaa92]

ooh so good you posted this! Gish i cant wait for the 2nd.. for you to be officially back :) anyways.. wow this was so.. how to say it.. i dont know.. i really want to know more about this.. but this one was really good...

[Sarinafinleyna4ever]

I really LOVE it <3

[LaAmarillaFlor]

You have watched twilight four times? Seriously? haha Oh my gosh, I watched it once and didn't like it very much. :/ I didn't read the books either. But your story is actually really good. It's so beautifully written. I just love how you describe the feelings. I'm looking forward to more. =)

[NiLeYl0vE]

yay!! a new series!! its awesome!! and CANT CANT CANT wait for october 2nd!! lol

[pinkiegirl55]

I'm soooooo happy u posted this :) this seems like a really intersting and orginal story.I can't wait to read the rest on 2nd october. Happy belated birthday to abby :). Also the intro Is so good and I love that song so much

[highlandxbbdx123]

what is up with that kid??weird much?ha

loved it

[ConversePonedPsycho2]

omg sooooo goood!

loved it!:)

cant wait for the next one!:D

[PineAppleMilkShake]

OMG!!! AMZINGA!!! love it!

[Madihah667966backup1]

That was so cool

[jonascyrus123]

i love it its so good

you make the best stories

(say happy birthday to your friend from me pleasse )

[Apziie94]

Wow Amazing So Well Written ;) Cant Wait For The Rest Of The Series :) Please Please Please Do A Marathon! Ive Missed Your Stories So Much I Like Completely Freaked Out When I Saw You Had Posted A Video!!! xxx

[norwayhorsegirl]

LOVE IT!!!

whats wrong with molly,why can't she walk ?

[Dedeitaly92]

amazing!!!OMG another great idea...

so so good!

[jonasBrockmyworld]

wow that was AMAZINGGG!!!

how do u come up with such unbelievable idea's?? :P i can already see how awesome this story's gonna be ^^

[nickjonasgirly11]

AMAZING(:

[luvinrockin14]

omg love it

[MCyrusForever]

Cant Wait!! That Was Truly AMAZING!!!! This Wow I Just Cant Wait!! =)

[kelxoxo23]

Look cool , great work !

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[ArchieLambertJonas]

that was FREAKIN AWESOME and sad D: and nick was weird and did i mention thats so sad

[foreverfearless99]

FREAKING AMAZING!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHH omg i completly freaked out when i saw u posted a video!!!!!

I LOVE IT!!!! cant wait til the 2nd!!!!!! =D

[334lover16]

i LOVE vampire stories

nick is weird

loved it

can't wait for the next one

[jobrowhoa]

To be honest, I had my doubts on this only because I hate Twilight, but then again it is Niley, my favorite Niley writer and it was pretty good. So, I'll see how it goes!

[Loveablegirl213]

This is really good

[takeerah13]

what iz wrong with that boy

[untapie314]

it was good!

but nick is freakky

[TooQuietInHere]

Oh, well..

I just got my laptop back yesterday, so I didn't see what you wrote on your page.

Sorry, I would've have said happy birthday to her. ^^

The intro is awesome and so is the episode.

I would feel so creeped out when someone would watch me all the time and wouldn't say a word. :/

Can't wait for the 2nd to come so I can read more of this. :)

[Hakanumi]

AWESOME!!!!!!! But Nick sounds weird LOL Sooooooooooooo I LUFF IT!

[xxrubiessxx]

eeep i love it is this the hole vamp one i read if it i cnt wait to see more

[oneinamillionkl]

OMG i started freaking out

then i read the db

but this will hold me over until the 2nd

i really like it and its good to go out of your element sometimes

and if you write this half as well as you do your other stories, im sure this story will be amazing =)