Hey girl :P wassssap :) I think u did a good job on that one but an advice from a fan reader, write like more in details, like in previous episodes you talk about his eyes, well describe them, tell them their color and all, and I think your doing a great job, a great young writer :)
this is such a good story so far!
redwhitebluetiger 2 years ago
girl u have talent, keep doing it. im enyoi it.
vickymargara 2 years ago
Not jason! Lmao yea rite ;)
Hehe u got a good memory about the places like in english class were we sitted and all erm yea nvm dont think about the detention lol
jjrouss 2 years ago
lmao
Screwed9425 2 years ago
Hey girl :P wassssap :) I think u did a good job on that one but an advice from a fan reader, write like more in details, like in previous episodes you talk about his eyes, well describe them, tell them their color and all, and I think your doing a great job, a great young writer :)
GOOD LUCK RATE, SUBSCRIBE AND COMMENT!
(and go watch my videos, just kidding lol)
-Jason
jjrouss 2 years ago
ur not jason :P and yea m gonna meantion his eyes later ull see plz keep reading :P
Screwed9425 2 years ago
It good :P Cant wait for 3!!!
AllyandFroggy 2 years ago
thank you :)
Screwed9425 2 years ago