but you probably shouldn't have cursed at the end because people remember the ending of everything the most, and saying "would be fucking awesome" just took away from your performance which was really good by the way.
that was great! I really felt it, it would be good for you to practice making yourself cry, because a lone tear dripping off your cheek would really make it that much better!
Okay.. Yeah that was pretty good.. But you kinda tried a lil too hard to act like Robin Williams i think. It was good. But how would you do this if it were YOUR part and hasn't been filmed yet.? Aside from that. Awesome.
You make a great point. I did watch the 7th Day video on youtube before i did this one, I wanted to do something original, and it was my first monologue so maybe with my next one I'll make it moreso "my" part as if it wasn't filmed yet, Thanks alot for the feedback!
WHERE is it?
i dont see it?
wldeaglesyes 3 years ago
Hey :)
okay i love that fact you have emotion and even behind all that you can feel something greater.
awsome job keep going!
ull make it big!
RenaSweet 3 years ago
That was really good! I was really convinced. Haha i liked how it ended. Good job! :)
Freshhh8 3 years ago
THanks! lol the ending is just me naturally, it slipped out.
scratch3z 3 years ago
pretty good
makailagarrett 3 years ago
thanks ^_^
scratch3z 3 years ago
that monologue was really convincing.
but you probably shouldn't have cursed at the end because people remember the ending of everything the most, and saying "would be fucking awesome" just took away from your performance which was really good by the way.
drzdudette 3 years ago
that was great! I really felt it, it would be good for you to practice making yourself cry, because a lone tear dripping off your cheek would really make it that much better!
ashkids09 3 years ago
That was really great! Very emotional, very powerful..I thought you were really going to cry! Good luck!
ashkids09 3 years ago
Okay.. Yeah that was pretty good.. But you kinda tried a lil too hard to act like Robin Williams i think. It was good. But how would you do this if it were YOUR part and hasn't been filmed yet.? Aside from that. Awesome.
wldeaglesyes 3 years ago
You make a great point. I did watch the 7th Day video on youtube before i did this one, I wanted to do something original, and it was my first monologue so maybe with my next one I'll make it moreso "my" part as if it wasn't filmed yet, Thanks alot for the feedback!
scratch3z 3 years ago
that was good acting(: it made me laugh when you got out of your character and was like "alright" im done, lol. but yeah, it was good.
lindamai1 3 years ago
Aha, thanks!
scratch3z 3 years ago
wowerz bravo [ clap, clap, clap] [=
escada4her 3 years ago
well hope you will too :)
2hotxo 3 years ago
that was ammazing! your really need to start acting soon, anyway good luck, have you auddition yet tho, for acting :)
2hotxo 3 years ago
Hey, thanks! Thats what I was goin for =)
scratch3z 3 years ago
Very goo acting!! i think. you have good emotions so the crowd feels it too! awesome work!!
rockxXroll135 3 years ago