Please check out my film it's a drama short that i wrote...it's about a young girl who finds salvation in her art to deal with her abusive alcaholic mother.
Hey I am from the Usha Pravin Gandhi College Of Management, Mumbai, India..i found your film totally heart wrenching! Amazing work! We have an international short film making competition in our fest 'Aahan' coming up soon..Pls let me know if you are interested to participate..Waitin for your response!!
word on editing... try not to have cuts every time someone speaks. When we (as a fly on the wall) watch, it's best to see someone speak, then hear someone else ( in effect, turn) then see who it is who is speaking. Cuts are thus more fluid as to how people actually listen to conversation and thus more attractive to watch.
... the acting is.... not the greatest.. and I think that the actor needs tpo be able to cru better... but thank you for that! over all it was a great film
I give this short film 3 stars. 1 point on the Camera work, it was okay. 1 point on the script, I thought it was written pretty clear and precise. And 1 point for the Characters- the only thing i suggest, the Camera needs to be moving at all times and not focused on one thing most of time. When you do that, it really makes the film look (boot-leg or to original). Overall, I enjoyed this film! The title was brilliant, and the premise was solid and the characters gave their best. Good Work Guys!
Simple. Good. And it made me feel shocked because all the 9/11 moments came into my head. Good video.
TheAviationCenter 5 months ago
love the film, great story.
Please check out my film it's a drama short that i wrote...it's about a young girl who finds salvation in her art to deal with her abusive alcaholic mother.
It's on my channel
rklinesmith12 7 months ago
This is a great film, loved it!! Keep up the good work! :)
james2rubio 7 months ago
I love this!! Well done :)
missdoona2 1 year ago
im only 37 seconds in and i can tell you the filter sucks.
BFEBFFFSFS 1 year ago
watch this short film trailer it's exelent.
NEVERENDINGROADFILMS 1 year ago
that was so good. loved the acting, the shots, and the story. NICE WORK!!!
NickF933 1 year ago
OMG!!! I HAVE THE SAME CUP SHE HAS!!!!! 1:24
TheCooltrix 1 year ago
Hey I am from the Usha Pravin Gandhi College Of Management, Mumbai, India..i found your film totally heart wrenching! Amazing work! We have an international short film making competition in our fest 'Aahan' coming up soon..Pls let me know if you are interested to participate..Waitin for your response!!
roshinishah 1 year ago
That man is a shite actor. plus hes a cunt
sanjino1 1 year ago
that was good(: a heck of a lot better than i could ever do. keep making videos(;
Katogirl1 1 year ago
word on editing... try not to have cuts every time someone speaks. When we (as a fly on the wall) watch, it's best to see someone speak, then hear someone else ( in effect, turn) then see who it is who is speaking. Cuts are thus more fluid as to how people actually listen to conversation and thus more attractive to watch.
MST3Killa 1 year ago
Good film. Actors quite good (not when it comes to crying). Went over the top with contrast!!!
SamT50413 1 year ago
Awsome short film!
Zoe9112001 2 years ago
work on you sad.. face.. stuff.. terrible actor when it comes to crying
TwistedTitan69 2 years ago
amazing!
mikeysgirl314 2 years ago
... the acting is.... not the greatest.. and I think that the actor needs tpo be able to cru better... but thank you for that! over all it was a great film
horsegrl1 2 years ago
cool... but the acting sucks... you should get professionals...
raphas13 2 years ago
@raphas13 Yeah, professional actors on a zero dollar budget is obviously do-able.
Really? get professionals, that's the advice?
MST3Killa 1 year ago
kool
trinilisa2 2 years ago
woah dude i cried good job, i thought this was really good
keystonee01 2 years ago
I give this short film 3 stars. 1 point on the Camera work, it was okay. 1 point on the script, I thought it was written pretty clear and precise. And 1 point for the Characters- the only thing i suggest, the Camera needs to be moving at all times and not focused on one thing most of time. When you do that, it really makes the film look (boot-leg or to original). Overall, I enjoyed this film! The title was brilliant, and the premise was solid and the characters gave their best. Good Work Guys!
Shadowgod707 2 years ago
NIcely done I really enjoyed this film. Keep up the good work. 5 stars
isawalker17 2 years ago
the birds were too much & it could have been less predictable.
sexcamel 3 years ago
good film , but someone needs crying lessons.
I'll give it 4 Stars
BONIFASI007 3 years ago
that was well sad... good film
BaBtrooper 3 years ago
nice i like the song.
whats it called?
jzindeed13 3 years ago
how many birds are there..
DarthBriana 3 years ago
that was beautiful.. :(
lankleeze 3 years ago
^hurts no happy end but good short film
kkk7hh 3 years ago
Makes you think dosen't it. What you say to the one you love can at any minute be the last thing.
filmerguyman 3 years ago
that was awesome.. all who were lost during the 9/11.. R.I.P. thanks for this vid..
iangue 4 years ago
Nicely done...hope you can watch my film. Keep filming.
cruz726 4 years ago
very nice.
SuicideBoy555 4 years ago
This was a very good little short, check your inbox for the full message.
kottoneverett 4 years ago
thats sad...good job!
clrb15 4 years ago
pretty good
GabrielThiessen 4 years ago
haha this made me cryy:-(
apologysongs 5 years ago
I loved it, except it was a 9/11 exploitation flick. Other than that, great job.
CasedFrozen 5 years ago