This was extremely...different. I really liked it. The beginning does remind me of Eminem, but the change, as TWE, is what really got me. The latter part of the beat was better, but it was also an abrupt change from the previous portion of the beat.
my apologiez for not commenting... pretty difficult to keep track... nice instrumentation.... the change up is good... but its lacking depth in my opinion... maybe make the guitar stabs stronger with a rich string @ a low octave or use octaves with the guitar... something like that... and maybe use a lil more sample and u should b good bro... n thanks for ur advice
my final listening result and comment on this: First off YOU NEED TO COMMENT ON EVERYBODY'S VIDEO! 2ndly WHY DIDN"T YOU COME STRAIGHT OUT THE GATE WIT THAT CHANGE UP THAT WAS ILL AS **** JAY Z and NAS and others will eat that alive! THE FIRST PART DESTROYED THIS TRACK FOR YOU:( if you would have done that! EASILY WOULD HAVE BEEN ONE OF MY TOP 5 BRO!
The subtle route is always a good choice. Atmospheric indeed. to have never worked with guitar this is a solid ass first try. I encourage you to work with samples from different type of music more. more times than not it brings the best out of you
I dont know how you pulled this off to sound so good but you did a great job on making everything flow. My head was nodding the whole way through very very good bro
Wow dude. I decide not to take an atmospheric route and everyone wants to steal my shine. I am only mad because everyone is doing it better than me. I love how subtle the track is. Definitely one made for grooving.
really good bro, the instruments go well with the guitar. only thing I will add is when the beat changes up at 1:30 it kind of sounds like a whole new beat, but if thats what you were aiming for then i guess theres no problems =-).
This was extremely...different. I really liked it. The beginning does remind me of Eminem, but the change, as TWE, is what really got me. The latter part of the beat was better, but it was also an abrupt change from the previous portion of the beat.
velvetkitsune 1 year ago
also is that a pitched up voice sample i hear?? (starting @ 1:16) idk what it is but its a very nice touch imo
pdead0624 1 year ago
my apologiez for not commenting... pretty difficult to keep track... nice instrumentation.... the change up is good... but its lacking depth in my opinion... maybe make the guitar stabs stronger with a rich string @ a low octave or use octaves with the guitar... something like that... and maybe use a lil more sample and u should b good bro... n thanks for ur advice
pdead0624 1 year ago
smooth xfiles type ish
0XXSuPaNoVaXX0 1 year ago
The Change up at 1:30 IS ILL BRO! BOTTOM LINE but IT IS TOO LATE INTO THE BEAT!! DARN IT!! VOTING WILL BE AT 2pm yo!
TWEShellshockr 1 year ago
my final listening result and comment on this: First off YOU NEED TO COMMENT ON EVERYBODY'S VIDEO! 2ndly WHY DIDN"T YOU COME STRAIGHT OUT THE GATE WIT THAT CHANGE UP THAT WAS ILL AS **** JAY Z and NAS and others will eat that alive! THE FIRST PART DESTROYED THIS TRACK FOR YOU:( if you would have done that! EASILY WOULD HAVE BEEN ONE OF MY TOP 5 BRO!
TWEShellshockr 1 year ago
The rain in the beginning is a nice touch.
troysson81 1 year ago
I likes this one its so unique
Excellent take on this one
i like the switch up alot
mcknight9127 1 year ago
Very different beat from all the others.. points for uniqueness
StephonST 1 year ago
The beginning sounds like Eminem - Lose yourself. Nice composition MadDogDeezy. Best of luck in the future botb's.
MaxieDaMan 1 year ago
Quite nice
gorillaMaticIAP 1 year ago
Old skool feel wit vid games, for some reason remind me of snes RPGs
BluBeatz 1 year ago
The subtle route is always a good choice. Atmospheric indeed. to have never worked with guitar this is a solid ass first try. I encourage you to work with samples from different type of music more. more times than not it brings the best out of you
Kariu 1 year ago
im loven the bounce this has..
VJTunes 1 year ago
exotic.... good touch
Scientifik7 1 year ago
ill chopping on this one crazy nice love the rain effect
kingshogun08 1 year ago
I dont know how you pulled this off to sound so good but you did a great job on making everything flow. My head was nodding the whole way through very very good bro
AsisGalvin 1 year ago
im feeling this good flow all the way through
NickPoP101 1 year ago
Nice Chopping Here Deez It sounds Good! I like that it doesnt sound like the original 6 sec loop here! (The Kiss Intro) Great Job!
TWEShellshockr 1 year ago
Wow dude. I decide not to take an atmospheric route and everyone wants to steal my shine. I am only mad because everyone is doing it better than me. I love how subtle the track is. Definitely one made for grooving.
Heango 1 year ago
really good bro, the instruments go well with the guitar. only thing I will add is when the beat changes up at 1:30 it kind of sounds like a whole new beat, but if thats what you were aiming for then i guess theres no problems =-).
well done
MozesILA 1 year ago