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[xsaMMyxjaMMyx]

This is nothing but corny. Not my liking.

[reirainxwai]

the production is nice.... lighting is nicely lit and the art direction is wonderful. But the dialogs are lame, too cliche, too pretentious... Should give more effort into your story. Sorry, if i am harsh... :P Shoot me bek if you like..

Another big shot director without aim

[TeckWai Yap]

[theend86]

for a one day planning i think it's really not bad, but dude... this feels much better den the first cut.... nice post work man.... ^^ cheers

-th3_eNd-

[thoughtsofwisdom]

Corny lines. But it's OK.

I like corny :>

[chinyew]

heh, thanks to all the comments. synchronicity made this short in one day. cast, script, location, camera, etc all fall into one place in one time. this is not the best of me. wait till i get a proper budget and a proper planning, and you'll see.. more of me to come. cheers! -chinyew

[arenaKu]

hmmm... it looked very pretentious to me. anyhow, good effort.

[mitutmonster]

I don't like how you start off with "trying" to be a little artsy fartsy. I don't really see any deep message and I believe that's not important anyway. It is nice though to see the story finally getting to be what it is meant to be, a love story. Falling short of being a bit amateurish, but that comes with any new filmmaker, so don't be disheartened when you watch this movie again and find it to be true.

[KayelllTalkies]

a "short love story" with a message....nice.

[chinyew]

I dedicate this to you, Rin.

-chinyew