Really the part with the fist girl should be edited out. It did nothing for the story and the chick just comes off as annoying. also reshot the part when they beat you up and make it more intense. You just sort of stood up like nothing really happend. As for the music it wasn't that bad but it just didn't fit what you where going for. Just my thoughts over all a C but it could have been an A.
i disagree wit that. The girl suppose to be annoying. And he didnt stood up like nunthin happen he got up hurt not as much but he got up hurt. Not causing drama
I don't think you are trying to cause drama my friend. Just diffrent points of views. I stand by what I say, I know she was suppost to be annoying and all I just thought it did nothing for the story. It didn't need to be there at all. I watched it again and I still think he should have looked more hurt.
Good shot at 513. Exception being the camera should have remained stationary. And other shots look better when they allow the character to walk into the frame rather than habitually aiming to have him in the center.
537 is good.
555 looks stupid because it makes the bad guys look like they are rapping and dancing in cadence instead of stomping John.
@tonyschmoeredux You seem very critical for someone with one video called "Fisher Dog". I get that some people will not like what we created. Everyone has a opinion I get that. I think that we did a great job for our 1st full production...especially for a class project. And once again our story was well written and every scene and every character had a purpose. If your expecting a blockbuster movie go on Netflick or go to the movies and let us students learn and master our craft.
Hey nice show by the way who the artist sing song when John Stewart in class taking the test.Could I found his song on itune.Anyone hit me up with the answer and peace!
The original John Stewart was from a pre-rap era. Check the soundtrack of "Mo' Better Blues". I think it is an example of what serves better aesthetically for this.
The two of us had to do a film for class and we wanted to do something different. We researched the stories of GL and came up with something that fans of the series could enjoy and relate to the comics
were they actully kicking him?
shadowfan579 7 months ago
you said the oath wong
MrCordellman 7 months ago
"Let's stomp the fuck out this nigga" hahaha! Awesome video dude!!!!
Narabi10 11 months ago
dood john stewart is the best green lateren!
lovetownsend 11 months ago
great vid brotha,
dirtnap4u300 11 months ago
This is fuckin' AWESOME!
MulahGangKane 1 year ago
Good stuff. Similar without being the same. Y'alls own take on the hero! I'm going away to check the next "episode!"
marknew91 1 year ago
So... if it was supposed to be replaced, why wasn't it? Because this shit is terrible.
stevedoll1982 1 year ago
Green Lantern is my fav D.C. super hero!
LILTECH316 1 year ago
"John Stewart, you have the ability to over come great fear" would of sounded cooler
felipe1104 2 years ago
Really the part with the fist girl should be edited out. It did nothing for the story and the chick just comes off as annoying. also reshot the part when they beat you up and make it more intense. You just sort of stood up like nothing really happend. As for the music it wasn't that bad but it just didn't fit what you where going for. Just my thoughts over all a C but it could have been an A.
rjlozo 2 years ago
i disagree wit that. The girl suppose to be annoying. And he didnt stood up like nunthin happen he got up hurt not as much but he got up hurt. Not causing drama
thelayer006 2 years ago
I don't think you are trying to cause drama my friend. Just diffrent points of views. I stand by what I say, I know she was suppost to be annoying and all I just thought it did nothing for the story. It didn't need to be there at all. I watched it again and I still think he should have looked more hurt.
rjlozo 2 years ago
oh aite. I understand its just your opinion but you should give it a chance
thelayer006 2 years ago
this joint is cool great camera shots on the actors
thelayer006 2 years ago
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thelayer006 2 years ago
Good shot at 513. Exception being the camera should have remained stationary. And other shots look better when they allow the character to walk into the frame rather than habitually aiming to have him in the center.
537 is good.
555 looks stupid because it makes the bad guys look like they are rapping and dancing in cadence instead of stomping John.
Oh oh, they say "darkest" instead of "blackest".
tonyschmoeredux 2 years ago
@tonyschmoeredux
Umm... We all thought the camera work was ok. We got across what we wanted to show the viewers. Thanks
the410 2 years ago
You got across dull.
tonyschmoeredux 2 years ago
@tonyschmoeredux You seem very critical for someone with one video called "Fisher Dog". I get that some people will not like what we created. Everyone has a opinion I get that. I think that we did a great job for our 1st full production...especially for a class project. And once again our story was well written and every scene and every character had a purpose. If your expecting a blockbuster movie go on Netflick or go to the movies and let us students learn and master our craft.
the410 1 year ago 3
@the410 Touchy.
tonyschmoeredux 1 year ago
This has an awesome story line, great music and transition tracks, and a great display of amateur acting!
magicdudegary 2 years ago
@magicdudegary
Thanks make sure you check out IBN2 as well
the410 2 years ago
i love the music
sparky3028 2 years ago
Hey nice show by the way who the artist sing song when John Stewart in class taking the test.Could I found his song on itune.Anyone hit me up with the answer and peace!
stevenlawrence34 2 years ago
All You Ever Knew by Now On
the410 2 years ago
how did you do that geat video
werewolfbladenight 2 years ago
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theshow07 2 years ago
Well done!
Nehststudios 2 years ago
the latern looks like a blender
DoogieOMG 3 years ago
lol it actually is a lantern tho
the410 3 years ago
Just no rap music please.
tonyschmoeredux 3 years ago
Well, at least this rap music isn't POP garbage.
This is one form of art and be appreciated with an open mind and heart.
magicdudegary 2 years ago
The original John Stewart was from a pre-rap era. Check the soundtrack of "Mo' Better Blues". I think it is an example of what serves better aesthetically for this.
tonyschmoeredux 2 years ago
@tonyschmoeredux
This is our interpretation of the story so we decided on hip hop music. We we're looking to capture the old John Stewart
the410 2 years ago
This is freaking awesome man.. I love it. GL Rules.
Vindikator 3 years ago
What is the name of the music in the beginning?
donnieh17 3 years ago
"Cornaz" by Paradoxx The Rhapsodist, who is a Morgan State University Student. More of his work should be posted on Youtube already.
the410 3 years ago
His profile: paradoxx2589
the410 3 years ago
this is so great
Rosarioproductions1 3 years ago
Whoa...i'm suscribin'.
best john stewart i've heard in years.
LinkTC86 3 years ago
how did you get the idea, i love how you incorporated Hal jordans story into John stewart??
cerasi209 3 years ago
The two of us had to do a film for class and we wanted to do something different. We researched the stories of GL and came up with something that fans of the series could enjoy and relate to the comics
the410 3 years ago
this is so tight!it's like smallvile except for GREEN LANTERN!!! mad props bro.
bluemagickbo 3 years ago
Plz watch the 2nd part to this short film it doesn't end here. I had to chop it into two parts.
the410 3 years ago
Nice Job!
ArticulationTimes 3 years ago
whoa...this is great!
Indubitably14 3 years ago
Hah, this is fantastic! "Let's stomp the fuck out this n****!" lol
Shot very well, good effects work.
neodevilbane 3 years ago
Are you fuckin SERIOUS??? This shyt is SICK! I'm a newcomer to the film-thing, and I wanted to do a "Green Lantern" with my lil brother.
I HOPE you guys make a DVD of this. I'll be first on line.
We gotta stay in touch. I wanna do a project with you guys!
ShortcircuitzTV 3 years ago
you betchor ass you'll be the first one, the first one after me cause it's that good.
LinkTC86 3 years ago
tight my dudes.....tight
vintagefuze 3 years ago