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  • Alyssa is annoying why is she inviting him for see look at what these storys do to me lol

    lilsweety110 2 years ago

  • oh my god! ALEX SUCKS

    Flipflopsandsocks99 2 years ago

  • "Dont leave me alone. This bed is really big and I feel lonely." he pouted.

    hahaha, sooo very cute

    Joe looked at Nick who looked at Kevin who looked at Nick who then looked down

    wow confusing

    Mardigrasmambo31 2 years ago

  • bumb alex off in my words make him get hit by something and nick b there to comfort aly when he dies

    Cthrough2009 2 years ago

  • i know its a story but i hate Alyssa

    nickjonasbabe144 2 years ago

  • great story, but alex needs to back off

    Elineuh23 3 years ago 2

  • grrr alex should hit the dirt!

    xD

    JamToeProductions 3 years ago 2

  • OH MY GOD. AMAZING.

    breathlivelove 3 years ago

  • The next chapter should be up soon. Hopefully! :)

    hsm2fan08 3 years ago

  • where and how do you make your videos? I've been making mine at crappy one true media, and urs are so much better! please message me and tell me how! PLEASE!

    sidewaysizzy 3 years ago

  • I use Windows Movie Maker.

    hsm2fan08 3 years ago

  • Awesome make the nest one!

    Why is Alyssa doing this?

    Around Alex she is like a girl player.

    But around Nick she like LOVES him

    But I dont think she deserves Nick because of all the pain she's put him through

    pradagirl8 3 years ago 2

  • i know right.........

    TheNickJonasFanatic1 2 years ago

  • Great Story (:

    JBLuvStorys 3 years ago

  • I really don't like Alex. HE'S RUINING EVERYTHING!!

    MrsNickJonas356 3 years ago

  • awesome. alex needs to go.

    sushiyummi15 3 years ago

  • grrr i really dont like alex

    futuremrsnickjonasss 3 years ago 2

  • Urghh Alex need to leave he is my least favorite charcter!

    But Alyissa is kinda playin games with Nick I mean she goes out with Alex then goes and tells Nick she loves him oh well I hope she makes the right decision :]

    khoskins12 3 years ago

  • You need to update soon!

    Get rid of alex!

    polkaadots777 3 years ago

  • please post soon

    its nerli a month since u did

    and get rid of Alex hes ruinun everythin

    musiccloverx 3 years ago

  • i love this its awesome

    xMirandaxJonasx 3 years ago

  • omg i love it it is awesome i read them all this morning

    hsecproductions 3 years ago

  • alex needs to get out of the picture

    nick is perfect :)

    love the story by the way i am going to subsribe!

    danceforlife87 3 years ago

  • Ugh. I hate Alex.

    JonaasSiisters 3 years ago

  • aly needs to get rid of alex. haha, hes nice and all, but i mean come on, nick is the adorable one! haha. (:

    SKATERgirl0x 3 years ago

  • OMG I LOVE THESE VIDEOS!!!

    plz keep making them!!

    luvs<33

    Stiches1331 3 years ago

  • how can aly want aley, if she has nick!! I mean he is NICK!! hello??!

    but i love your story, i will subscribe :))

    eliilo 3 years ago

  • great chapter oh by the way i think alex needs to die cuz hes butting in their relationship hes like a drug to aly!!!!!!!!!!

    cookiemonsta28 3 years ago

  • sweetniblets.

    post more (:

    superkateqqx33 3 years ago

  • awwh

    nicks too adorable.

    alex needs to go find someone new!

    (:

    BreandLexie 3 years ago

  • ths thing is a little too young for me

    x0xEmmaxRockzx0x 3 years ago

  • jeex alex is screwing this all up he needs to go away!

    xthankyougravityx 3 years ago

  • I love your chapters one thing aly really needs to get rid of alex cant she see its hurting nick....................hehe :) great chapter

    XOXLuvJoeJonasXOX 3 years ago

  • Thanks so much for posting and making it long! Yay! I've been waiting forever! lol. Man Aly! Do you love Nick, or Alex?! Stay with Nick, he's better! He is being so cool with you and Alex. But pretty soon, he's gonna explode and leave you. That's when you are going to learn, isn't it? Take my advice, stay with Nick, the 1 that truly loves you, before you lose him! GO AWAY ALEX! I thinks he's trying to get Nick jealous on purpose! PLEASE post more!!!

    Oh, and btw, Nick IS perfect. Always has. ;D

    JonasBrothersLover73 3 years ago

  • aww poor nick i hope things work out though

    bbgood21 3 years ago

  • yo i swear wen u say alex i think of prince caspian for some reason lol i love it!

    lolzBFF123 3 years ago

  • This is soooooo awesome!!

    My fave fan fiction!!

    BibleGirl2008 3 years ago

  • AWESOME CHAPTER!

    It was totally worth the wait ^.^

    gigi78965 3 years ago

  • alex has to go away!!!!!!!!!!

    LiveLaughLove181 3 years ago

  • love it wanna know more please

    BurningUpBabyT 3 years ago

  • ahh! very good but make alex go away! IMMEDIATLY

    tokioNjonasluv 3 years ago

  • Jesus! Aly! You love Nick NOT Alex! uggh. oh well Nick IS so perfect!

    themaddieshowgirl 3 years ago

  • this is the best. Alez is starting to get on my nerves. Alyssa needs to choice between them. preferably, nick...hehe

    amjp127 3 years ago

  • ok i think i got the whole looking part.....joe looked at nick. nick was looking at kevin. and kevin looked at nick. and nick looked down?? haha. well neways....alex go away!!!!!!! ahaha.. more??????

    morg942212 3 years ago

  • oh oh. im afraid something bad might happen. hope not. post more soon.

    kirbyundefeated07 3 years ago

  • what a stupid girl!! get rid of alex, before i find someway to kill him :P

    hahah, love the story though

    read mine! pleasee, lol

    LittleMizzGawjuz 3 years ago

  • post more tonight

    its really good

    Kristina1994 3 years ago

  • yay!

    and we understand if ur busy.

    its ok. ^_^

    thejobrosfan 3 years ago

  • love the story..

    but hate alex

    MAKE HIM GO AWAAYY!!!

    please and thank you!

    xopeacelovejonas3xo 3 years ago

  • While saying all the things that were perfect about Nick , you forgot his hair! :)

    igotcamprocklove 3 years ago

  • add more!!!!!!!!!!!!

    JBLover2008 3 years ago

  • Nick is soo perfect

    i dont really like Alwz rly good chapter :)

    jblovers65 3 years ago

  • Oh poor Nick!! This must be killing him!! =[

    lovehorseslovejonas 3 years ago

  • YAY!!

    OmgItsStephnieee 3 years ago

  • love it, nick is so perfect, he treats her so nice, but alex has got sum type of spell over her :(

    please post more b4 55+ comments n 35+ ratings that'll take AGES!!

    itshjustmee 3 years ago

  • omg! that IS the longest chapter and keep them like that! lol

    Dancer521oxox 3 years ago

  • Nick is darn perfect. =]

    El Salvador... where is that in the world.

    ._.;;;

    Ha. Post more as soon as you get the comments and ratings.

    Alyajfan10 3 years ago

  • omg awesome post more soon1

    beccarocker225 3 years ago

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