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  • Alyssa is annoying why is she inviting him for see look at what these storys do to me lol

  • oh my god! ALEX SUCKS

  • "Dont leave me alone. This bed is really big and I feel lonely." he pouted.

    hahaha, sooo very cute

    Joe looked at Nick who looked at Kevin who looked at Nick who then looked down

    wow confusing

  • bumb alex off in my words make him get hit by something and nick b there to comfort aly when he dies

  • i know its a story but i hate Alyssa

  • great story, but alex needs to back off

  • grrr alex should hit the dirt!

    xD

  • OH MY GOD. AMAZING.

  • The next chapter should be up soon. Hopefully! :)

  • where and how do you make your videos? I've been making mine at crappy one true media, and urs are so much better! please message me and tell me how! PLEASE!

  • I use Windows Movie Maker.

  • Awesome make the nest one!

    Why is Alyssa doing this?

    Around Alex she is like a girl player.

    But around Nick she like LOVES him

    But I dont think she deserves Nick because of all the pain she's put him through

  • i know right.........

  • Great Story (:

  • I really don't like Alex. HE'S RUINING EVERYTHING!!

  • awesome. alex needs to go.

  • grrr i really dont like alex

  • Urghh Alex need to leave he is my least favorite charcter!

    But Alyissa is kinda playin games with Nick I mean she goes out with Alex then goes and tells Nick she loves him oh well I hope she makes the right decision :]

  • You need to update soon!

    Get rid of alex!

  • please post soon

    its nerli a month since u did

    and get rid of Alex hes ruinun everythin

  • i love this its awesome

  • omg i love it it is awesome i read them all this morning

  • alex needs to get out of the picture

    nick is perfect :)

    love the story by the way i am going to subsribe!

  • Ugh. I hate Alex.

  • aly needs to get rid of alex. haha, hes nice and all, but i mean come on, nick is the adorable one! haha. (:

  • OMG I LOVE THESE VIDEOS!!!

    plz keep making them!!

    luvs<33

  • how can aly want aley, if she has nick!! I mean he is NICK!! hello??!

    but i love your story, i will subscribe :))

  • great chapter oh by the way i think alex needs to die cuz hes butting in their relationship hes like a drug to aly!!!!!!!!!!

  • sweetniblets.

    post more (:

  • awwh

    nicks too adorable.

    alex needs to go find someone new!

    (:

  • ths thing is a little too young for me

  • jeex alex is screwing this all up he needs to go away!

  • I love your chapters one thing aly really needs to get rid of alex cant she see its hurting nick....................hehe :) great chapter

  • Thanks so much for posting and making it long! Yay! I've been waiting forever! lol. Man Aly! Do you love Nick, or Alex?! Stay with Nick, he's better! He is being so cool with you and Alex. But pretty soon, he's gonna explode and leave you. That's when you are going to learn, isn't it? Take my advice, stay with Nick, the 1 that truly loves you, before you lose him! GO AWAY ALEX! I thinks he's trying to get Nick jealous on purpose! PLEASE post more!!!

    Oh, and btw, Nick IS perfect. Always has. ;D

  • aww poor nick i hope things work out though

  • yo i swear wen u say alex i think of prince caspian for some reason lol i love it!

  • This is soooooo awesome!!

    My fave fan fiction!!

  • AWESOME CHAPTER!

    It was totally worth the wait ^.^

  • alex has to go away!!!!!!!!!!

  • love it wanna know more please

  • ahh! very good but make alex go away! IMMEDIATLY

  • Jesus! Aly! You love Nick NOT Alex! uggh. oh well Nick IS so perfect!

  • this is the best. Alez is starting to get on my nerves. Alyssa needs to choice between them. preferably, nick...hehe

  • ok i think i got the whole looking part.....joe looked at nick. nick was looking at kevin. and kevin looked at nick. and nick looked down?? haha. well neways....alex go away!!!!!!! ahaha.. more??????

  • oh oh. im afraid something bad might happen. hope not. post more soon.

  • what a stupid girl!! get rid of alex, before i find someway to kill him :P

    hahah, love the story though

    read mine! pleasee, lol

  • post more tonight

    its really good

  • yay!

    and we understand if ur busy.

    its ok. ^_^

  • love the story..

    but hate alex

    MAKE HIM GO AWAAYY!!!

    please and thank you!

  • While saying all the things that were perfect about Nick , you forgot his hair! :)

  • add more!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Nick is soo perfect

    i dont really like Alwz rly good chapter :)

  • Oh poor Nick!! This must be killing him!! =[

  • YAY!!

  • love it, nick is so perfect, he treats her so nice, but alex has got sum type of spell over her :(

    please post more b4 55+ comments n 35+ ratings that'll take AGES!!

  • omg! that IS the longest chapter and keep them like that! lol

  • Nick is darn perfect. =]

    El Salvador... where is that in the world.

    ._.;;;

    Ha. Post more as soon as you get the comments and ratings.

  • omg awesome post more soon1

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