Easy A monologue (What ever happened to chivalry?)

[PimpingRice]

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[MaRtuZzy14]

hey! wow you're really good :D I would really like to know your opinion about my new video "easy A webcam monologue"! thank you very much! you're great :D

[laya682000]

like the video shes awsome

[watevatube]

What happened to chivalry? women killed it,congrats your equal now.. open your own doors and protect yourselves.

[nahtoast21]

LOVE IT!

[Chey94sings]

@nahtoast21 Thankss (:

[nahtoast21]

LOVE IT!

[SparsileStars]

@Chey94sings no problem! If you upload another monologue video I'd be happy to watch it / give my opinion. A subscription to my channel would be much appreciate, but of course there's no pressure. I'll watch your future videos (if you want) either way!! :) -Lisa of SparsileStars

[Chey94sings]

@SparsileStars Thank Youu, I shall subscribe to youu, but youu should subscribe to me too (:

[SparsileStars]

You did a great job! You are a fabulous actress!I would suggest that you don't look up so much. This is probably not what you do naturally. When an actor looks up or away in the middle of a thought, the thought is broken up and the intensity of the meaning that is trying to be portrayed is lost. Look straight into the camera and deliver your monologue. This will make your audience feel more of your emotions. Tell me if this suggestion helped! - Lisa of SparsileStars

[Chey94sings]

@SparsileStars Thankss for the feedback it was really helpful. I was thinking about doing another monologue, and I shall try your suggestion.