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  • Quite poignant. The alluring visual tease complimented the lyrics nicely. You've got a knack for style and storytelling. I especially liked how you managed to amp up the emotions of the poem with your eyes: the way you would occasionally glance at the camera, allowing the moment to linger before moving to the next tantalizing layer.

  • @thegrandpubaa youre gay as fuck bro

  • @Ln192 Na-na-na boo-boo, stick your head in doo-doo!

  • @thegrandpubaa Thanks for proving my point.

  • @Ln192 That troll-esque prejudiced assumptions are best met with childish inanity? Yep. You got me there.

  • @thegrandpubaa oh man, youre even dumber than i thought.

  • @Ln192 I'm happy to keep rebutting your prejudices with my apparently superior logic ad nauseum, if you like, but we are quickly going to reach a cycle of redundancy and i've got better things to do than try and impress some random asshole on the internet.

  • that was pretty good. happiness is what you make it. if a bum can be happy with his pet dog, then its only in the eye of the beholder will it be found. take care slim

  • xD God .. who gives a shit about God ...

  • You look like a very pretty boy. Sorry, I just cannot fully "process" you as a woman. But don't worry my dear, you are free to act as you please and even more free to follow your heart in deciding who you are to love.

  • omg i love your hair!!! the pink and purple are so pretty!!!!!!!

  • Wow, I'd love to kick your gay ass... God brought you to this world to be with women, but you, you are disgusting!

  • This poem seems like it was forced to be deep and profound, yet it just falls flat

  • its a dude!!!

  • You would be attractive as a girl AND a boy. just saying.

  • A lot of the people commenting here are really bigoted. Congratulations on not letting them get to you.

  • what would make me happy?.. hmm

    that everybody would be bi sexual so every body could shut up about this stuff being bad or whatever

    and so i can have trio's with hot girls :3

  • gee, so many terrible comments on this video... this is why I would makecomments on my video closed, but then you woould also miss out on all the nice comments...

  • @YukiNekoPrincess The hater comments used to really bother me back when I first started making videos but at some point I just had to learn to let it roll off me. If I hadn't learned how to do that I would have stopped making videos years ago.

  • @grishno I am so glad you are still making videos. ;-;

  • ;-;

  • A girl who likes me for who I am would make me happy.

  • i love your hair

  • aww you're gorgeous. great vid hun. werk it! <333

  • Irony is dead.

    I wonder if the poster can see the beauty in these comments. fucking hilarious.

    "Hey I'm vulnerable and it's o-"

    "HAHA, FUCKER!"

  • Shit I was about to start jacking off until I found out this was a tranny

  • CREEPY FUKER!!!

  • prodicklapper-Oh you idiot

  • wow. That's fucking powerful shit.

  • Give her a break.

  • FUCKN CREEP!!

  • If you dressed like a guy, I would be fooled completely.

  • I'm so sorry didn't read the profile...

  • The thing i really like about this video, is the question at the end.

    Yes, that's a very good question indeed.

  • I thinks its a little weird.

    but are you a boy or a girl?

  • Uhhh... That's a stupid question if I ever heard one.

  • well she's wearing a bra

  • Your chin is FIERCE.

  • loved the poem! *thumbs up*

  • Awesome poetry! =D and cool hair!

  • cool poem ur beatiful

  • am not dat smart but do luv 2 hear poems even do i need sum 1 2 like translate in dum wurds but i wanet 2 like ask if sum 1 kuld like pls xplain dis poem in simpeler wurds pls i wuld greatly apreciate it. thx lol ^^

  • Damn! Wish I'd read your poem first before I posted the last comment.

  • Didn't have room in my first post. I am supposing you did this as a sort of wind up for all the cheap thrill-seekers in here? Or is it deeper than that, about the body, it's way of representing but not being us. The autumnal casting off of the leaves leading to the temporary dormancy of death, so our bodies are mere temporalities its foliage our disguise/persona for this life.

  • My reaction to this was at first surprising. I thought- how could you do this?Why would you cheapen yourself? Then this was mixed with a little titillation as you do have a great complexion and are, in my modest opinion, very pretty. So there I was, confused, but still I couldn't stop watching. Then you removed your top and my thoughts were very mundane-wow, what a lovely necklace, bringing out the delicacy and milky smoothness of your neck and shoulders. Ambiguity or what? X

  • we are born naked. it is the reaction of other people that cause us to be self conscious. remove that influence, and whoever will be begin to  totally relax bing nude.

  • i think you are very beautiful person...

  • You are right I am a beautiful person. It is by reason of a greater being that is in me.

  • gedide

    To see the good that is in me , you also have him in you too.

  • wow ur amazing u write and sing it's so powerful

  • YEAH TAKE IT ALL OFF! WOOOOOO! *hoot hoot hoot*

    lol.

    Nice poem.

  • Only problem with that plan is that I wouldn't let anyone who butchered my pronouns in such a manner withing 10 yards of my vagina.

  • cool video i love trannys

  • i love trannys

  • Wow, IKILLTRANNYS, I'm surprised you were capable of actually streaming together a sentence. Maybe soon you'll be able to learn how to properly use the shift key, and maybe by that time your outward hate will subside and turn into acceptance. People are people reguardless of their lifestyle. Perhaps the idea of being transgender hits a little too close to home and you're unable to come to terms with your own issues so you turn your hate outward. Grow an appreciation for art.

  • Wow...That blew me away.

  • Wow that was beautiful. Really.

  • Your hair is so 90's in this vid! I still haven't figured out if it means that you are too early or you are too late... ^--^ Big Kis from the Netherlands!

  • Wonderful! Thank you!

  • Beautiful work, beautiful person. Thank you for this. I mean it.

  • art!

  • you are pretty. insight and out.

  • Beyond cool.

  • i really like this! you're so good at spoken word! how did i miss this one??

  • huh!

  • this is REALLY good you're wise Erin

  • thought u where a guy my bad

  • your hair looks great

  • AMAZING! You've left me speechless..

  • wow your amazing... I saw your myspace awsome.. I added this to my page... I was wondering were all do you sell your cd??

  • lol nice knitted throw on your couch there

  • omg!!!!!!!!! that was awesome

  • weird person..

  • wow lovly poem

  • es un maromo.

  • That is a really good poem

    i love the video and not because you got pretty much naked.

  • the poem was amazing

  • wow! wow! this piece is really spectacular. strong and thought provoking. well done.

  • w00p w00p

  • I never post comments, but after watching all the rest of your vlogs I came to this one and I just had to say that was soooo well done. The lyrics and music set to the video was so tastefully done! Kudos

  • That was beautiful.

    You're beautiful.

    &hearts;

  • it's a pity that you already have a girlfriend.. ;p

  • I find it really odd that you would apologize first thing and then say something so crude and disgusting. The apology at the beginning at least insinuates that you recognize exactly how disgusting the comment you were able to make is and thus you should know better. You wouldn't say that to you sister or mother (at least I hope not) so I don't see why you would say it to some random girl you don't know. Anyway... BLOCKED!

  • you're beautiful

  • wow. good job. cant wait 4 flight.

  • Wow...just wow.

    That was amazing.

  • You rock, love the lyrics ;D

  • thank you so much for this! :D

  • chea i liked it! xD. ur gifted dude.

  • this was pretty deep hun =). Did you write that? * FAN HERE!*. lol

    &hearts;Lily

  • I did actually. I wrote it, recorded it (guitar and vocals) and performed it.

    Glad you liked it.

  • too sexy grishno

    you are the number 1

  • Oye, te tengo una pregunta...ERES JOTO??

  • That was a beautiful. And your face is really intense, it sure adds to it really well!

    Please don't take this the wrong way, but you used to be male? Are you serious? Wow, that is actually... really cool.

    That means you can still marry women though right? Yaaaaay for loopholes in the (completely idiotic) laws!! :D

  • It's true... I was born male but transitioned to living as a female several years ago.

    As it stands right now I think I can marry anyone I want... I have a drivers license that says Male and another, newer one, that said Female... so depending on which I take to the marriage certificate place will determine who i can get married to.

    That is the plan at least... so when I get married to my girlfriend Morgan at the end of the year we will be getting legally married!

    YAY!

    ~E

  • Brilliant!! Oh, and I'm happy for you and Morgan! :D

  • I guess this is ONE good thing that trans people have when we are in the transition period we can marry WHO ever want!

  • Erin-I was just wondering about this, about the marriage and all.

    First off I'm GLAD you can marry anyone you want legally, we trans-people deserve all the breaks we can get, huh?

    BUT when you have surgery and become FEMALE legally won't that change ALL your legal records and documents to female? So will the will you STILL legally be married AFTER your surgery? B/c won't the licence then read "female/female" which is not yet legal? I've just been wondering about that.

  • It is true... but the state can't just void the marriage, so ya, I would be a legally married lesbian.

  • butchafalutch-She's got a girlfriend, that should clue you in and if you've watched any of her other vids you should know.

    She's a GAY GIRL who was born in a male body, the WRONG body for her, it did not match her FEMALE brain. The technical term is a "gay trans-girl" or a "trans-lesbian". It's not so confusing, or you are just easily confused and intolerant!

  • that was beautiful , it shows me you are a beautiful person,

    in sincerity

    georgia

  • This is a beautiful, moving piece. I loved it. Is the guitar work your composition, as well?

  • Thanks and yes... 100% written, recorded, and performed by me.

  • i agree

  • I'm sorry, was a rap against whores, or just something in general?

    Well written though!

  • Just about how something may feel right at the moment but if you don't respect yourself and your body you will end up regretting it in the end.

  • wow

  • beautiful and poetic, i like

  • The whole thing was very well put together; the words, music, and visual. The only bad thing is that people will want to see other good things from you. Well done!

  • Ya, there is a reason I am taking my time with a follow up video... it is going to take me a long time to come up with something to top this.

  • Considering you have an assload of fans/subscribers you could say the biggest load of garbage ever and still have tons of people congradulating you on how "awesome" it was.

  • I was thinking about that actually. I think it would be hilarious to do a 5 minute long video in which i do nothing but look at the screen. See who watches and who comments.

    ~E

  • your hair is so gorgeous... im jealous

  • Nicely done. Every one grasps for love in different ways. Sometimes we have to crawl through the mud to find ourselves on the other side.

  • guy or girl... guy or girl... guy or girl... I CANNOT TELL! alright, that was a dude.

  • Why is it always "Dude"? No one ever calls anyone a "Dude" anymore unless it is them trying to decided whether I am a boy or girl... is it because it's hyper-masculine and by using something so blatantly male you plan to hurt me? If that is the case, and I can think of no other logical reason, then why do you want to hurt me? Is it because I messed with you perception of gender as a rigid 2 party system? or even dumber; that you think you'd gay now because you thought I was hot? Deal with it!

  • Meh...dont take comments on here too personally, It's not worth getting hurt. if you hadn't written "transgender" on any of your titles, or mentioned it, I wouldn't have guessed you were. You naturally look feminine.

  • Thanks. I don't really take anything on here personally, but that is the same mentality that

    I sometimes get from people on the street. Always "Dude".

    Anyway, thanks for the kind words.

    ~Erin

  • Hi Erin, thats a funny one, I don't know about in the US, but here in the UK, I have come across girls calling each other "dude" (also amongst my friends)..I suppose you don't get that there.

  • Depends on where you are... not really in NYC.

  • no, i am not trying to hurt your feeling but rather trying to be witlessly sacred -- apparently i failed. which brings up to my unspoken question:

    are you a transgender? male-to-female? i am just "asking" simply to clear my ignorant perception, not because i seek to discredit you in any shape or form. it is merely an inquisition to quell my curiosity. i can care less if someone is guy, girl, or anything in between as long as i know.

    i loved your "What do lesbians really do in bed?" video.

  • Hey thanks for clearing that up. Yes, I am transgender. I was born a male and for the last 3 and a half years I have been trying my hardest to live and pass as female... So it is kind of a sore subject when I get called "dude". I plan to get surgery as soon as I can get the 20k that it costs...

    Thanks again,

    ~E

  • 20 frigging million dollars!! excuse my ignorance, but I live in a redneck infested area in which people are forked for their "abnormal" sexual orientation. So, as you can see these things are not usually discussed here, hence my juvenile inquisitions which I about to bestow upon you.

    let me ask you this, and take the response to private message if this is an intrusion of your privacy, but how do they actually do it, the operation that is?

  • does the Dr. actually removes the penis, creates a cavity/orifice? if so, then how does he rearrange the nerve endings? penis usually is more dense with these nerve cells as oppose to clitoris, so I am wondering whether they actually constructed a fully functional vagina + clitoris, right? I am just asking because, if I was to go through such operation, I wouldn't want to lose the sense of pleasure I would have with my previous organs, you know what I am saying.

  • Or is this something that just you have to accept that things wouldn't be same as before? Do the majority of transgenders "yearn" to have the actual operation or most are "ok" with their anatomy but only wish to be considered as an opposite sex? Oh, OH, another thing, now that you are taking hormons or what not for transition, do you actually feel your skin being more "sensitive" as women tend to experience? God, I have more questions to ask but I can't recall all at this moment.

  • I do accept that things won't be the same after the surgery... though I am hoping that most of the changes will be for the better. And I can't speak for "most" transgender people, but there are people who want the surgery and others who are fine to not have it. I myself want it very badly. Everytime I see my penis or have to tuck it away when i'm getting dressed it is a reminder that i'm not like all the other girls.

  • Alright, I am going to be a little bit sarcastic here, don't get offended:

    As a hetersexual guy, me and my penis are tight like THIS. So when you say you simply want to "cut" it off, my prince Albert gets really offended and frankly terrified. Don't you think your penis deserves a second chance? Like have you ever thought about giving him up for adoption? You know, somewhere he would belong and care for? Ok, enough with jokes...

  • Well, it's not getting cut off.. it's getting turned into a vagina.. and it is very excited about it. It's just as unhappy being a penis as I am with having a penis.

  • WOW! Wait a minute, so the doctor is going to push the penis in!! But... he needs to make a cavity, where would the penis go? Wouldn't that make you permenately "pregnant" with a penis? :)

    I understand if he wants to preserve the urethra, or whatever it's called, or cut it short but the penis itself... oh the humanity. RIP.

  • I can't post links in the comments because youtube doesn't allow it... just look up "mtf srs" on google and you'll see how it works...

  • You can post a link if you replace "." with a literal (dot) and spacing 3w or post/appending "." to the non-TTLcc and non-file type extensions.

    WOW! I just skimmed over a few pages and some of the results are just down right amazing. You were right, a portion of penis would be used for the reassignment. I wonder if you can decide the depth and tightness of orific? The most important part, personally for me, would be the preservation of sensation and nerve endings. :)

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  • I think a penis is just an overdeveloped vagina anyway.

  • Don't just think that, know that. Biologically we all start with vaginas in the womb, then some of us develop penis'.

  • *penises.

  • It is! Good thinking =] Your the first person I know who thought of that without hearing it somewhere else. All fetuses start female, and if the chromosomes say "PENIS!!!", the the clitoris expands to the head and is pushed out with the lining of the urethra, (which you can actually feel with your hands if you push down at the base of the shaft. You can feel where the turnoff for where the normal vaginal hole is.) The labia forms the scrotum. Lalala! SRS is the reverse process, same way!

  • This is a long ass comment xD

  • As for hormones, they change everything about you. It is funny because you have no idea just how much of your life is determined by hormones until you change them. The first effects were mental changes... it is hard to describe but it just felt more right. Then the physical affects; my skin is more sensitive, my sweat smells different, i grew breasts. Eventually my whole life was completely different and all because i changed the hormones in my body.

  • But I think the mental change must have been more subconscious which being reenforced by hormones, don't you think? Do your voice cords also evolve or you have to do a separate surgery for that?

    Ok, who is Morgan? Is she your girlfriend? It's intersting because, I thought when you switch sexes, you would be more attractive to the opposite sex! Oh well. But I gotta say this: everyone needs a "Morgan" in their live. :)

  • Morgan is my soon to be wife.. and yes, I am a huge dyke. If you start to look at gender and sexuality as two separate things you'll understand... why is it that lesbians don't want to be men? They want to date women... why don't gay men want to be women; they want to date men. gender and sexuality really have very little to do with each other.

    And as for hormones, i don't think it was mostly subconscious; if you read any of the research about it you'll see just how profound our hormones are.

  • Your wife? WOW! Aren't you going a bit too fast? And please don't say dyke, a lady is more like it.

    I totally understand a lesbian's decision; being a hetero guy, I wouldn't want to be with one so I am all with you on that. I even wonder how the opposite sex is attracted to man. I am all coolio with homosexuality and even transgender. It's just in case of the latter, I feel so horrible watching someone going through such identity crisis through no fault of their own.

  • I wish there was a hormon who would have especifically stopped the facial hair growth... Getting tired of shaving everyday.

    P.S. I watched a documentary on transgenders a few years back on HBO which was actually shot in my own state, lots of hillbillies and it really shocked me to see there was a community in this shitty, redneck state. Although they were being persecuted time to time but not to the extremes. I can't remember the title of the documentary...

  • Going to fast? We're having our 2 year anniversary in a month... and getting married in November after a year long engagement... I don't think that is fast.

    As for the lesbian thing... well, I'm actually bi but just happen to be dating Morgan. You don't choose who you fall in love with.

    And ya, it sucks going through this whole thing just to be the gender i feel i am suppose to be, but I realized that I wouldn't trade that for anything. It has made me who i am, and I like that.

  • Oh, I meant, wouldn't it be better to wait after the majority of correction surgaries being performed? I guess now that I know you've been together for two years, I guess it's not too soon.

    Oh, by the way, are you going to preserve your sperm just in case for future usage? :)

    P.S. (joke) I had a penis transplant, but my hand rejected it.

  • no need to preserve sprem... i'd much rather adopt a child.

  • Hi again. I was away from YouTube for a few weeks, hope you doing well.

    I know I've been doing some sophomoric inquisitions throughout our conversation, so let me add a few more (uh oh!). As far as the marriage certificate or whatever it's called, once you make a sex change, can you legally get married to your g/f due to prior legal status of sexual orientation?

  • What kind of legal procedures do you have take, courtwise, to solidify you alternation? In your case, since you are marrying a girl, does the state have the right to nullify your marriage (not sure in your state)? Another thing, do guys, sexually come repulsive to you as for example they might be in case of a heterosexual?

  • Lots of stuff to answer.

    I am bi.. so I like boys but I just happen to have fallen for a girl this time.

    Legally I am Male (on my birth certificate) but on my NY drivers license it says Female. So as far as getting married... since i'm legally a male we can get married. The state could nullify my marriage after GRS but NY is really progressive so I don't think it will happen.  Plus it will be several years until i can get that.

    Hope that helps.

    ~E

  • Uh, that's perfect. I suppose you could say: "In your face judicial system." :)

  • Exactly!

  • exxxxxxxactly =]

  • They don't cut off the penis... they basically turn it inside out. The testicals are removed, but the sctrotal sack can be used to create the labias. The shaft of the penis is used to create the inside of the vagina and the tip of the penish is partually used to create a clit. Everything, in theory, works very basically like a regular vagina. I'd be able to have sex and still climax and I'd be able to urinate without a problem.

  • K stands for thousand... Thank god it is not 20 million.

    And as for how it works... well i could go on and on about it for days but there are all kinds of websites with pictures and much better medical explanations than i could offer. Though I will try.

  • Wow, that was intensely poetic. Good Job.

  • you write and speak well- I too love playing music and doing graphic art- nicely nicely..

  • Thanks for putting this up, it's really a good piece; I love the voice layering and music. The whispered parts and the poem itself, all of it's lovely.

    ps, love the hair :)

  • Thanks, thanks, thanks and thanks. I am glad that you liked it.

  • really beautiful story, nice done!

  • great poetry - brilliant visualization...

  • Hey thanks!

  • great hair

  • that was wonderful .. very thought provoking, thnx

  • You're welcome

  • Guess that's one thing to love about poetry, almost anyone can do it. :/

  • I know that's what I love about it. Too bad everyone can't do it well.

  • That is excelent, the build up of intrigue, the climax and the music. Well done.

  • Hey thanks!

  • Best poem i ever heard :D

  • Ever? There must be something better out there...

  • Good peoem, but sad, well done and artistic. Good job.

  • wow..

    not sure what to think.. but definitely makes me think. :)

    very beautiful.