Why - Shaheem Alam

[officialEKchannel]

you suck BALLS

[KenjiStar5]

Listen to his latest songs u fa g

[anthonypaiva7]

i love u man ;p goby sofija and homeass were telling me abut this and itss SICKK MAN!!!

[ShaheemA13]

LOL thanks

[plsqurd]

definately 5/5 stars for effort man.... you got real skills for writing lyrics

and from the theme of the song, im really sorry to hear about your loss, but hey, music is one of the best ways to show the way you feel

[FaceBreaker123456]

bitch u cant rap fo shit

[BudCatcreations]

lol truesay!

[Chrisizzle69]

I Prefer This Compared To The One On Your Profile...

If It Wasnt Done With A Comp Mic Probley Be Better...

But Like Everyone Else Is Saying, Little More Pratice, And You Cud Be Going Somewhere In Future....

Not Bad..

[darkcircusninja17]

Doubt it.

[Chrisizzle69]

Thats Just Mean.

[darkcircusninja17]

and you're just whack dude.

[Chrisizzle69]

Mate, You Have Issues...

This Guy Isnt The Worst Tbf. He Isn't All Great At The Moment (Of This Video Anyways) But Hey, Atleast Hes Trying ANd Isnt The Worst Out THere.

Why Hate?

[ShaheemA13]

this is my first song i ever recorded over a year ago, listen to My Life, thats the newest one

[RpMaGiK]

this song is based on true events. shaheem stole bubble gum from a store and he felt guilty.

[TrixxJr]

He's so bad ass.

[jmac7159]

chours suck verses are alright but still need practice

[The3Gays]

very good lyrics, keep it up homie

[xDeathxNotebookx]

dude where do u get ur beats and tracks from? is it downloadable and does it cost money or bring a virus? and man ur on fire!

[TrixxJr]

for a 14 year old, this guy is pretty...SHIT.

[ohskyle]

need a better delivery but thats it your very monotone in your raps this is a deep rap feel your lyrics man thats what makes 2pac and eminem so great they put everything into there lyrics when they spit them and if youy get in a realy studio it wont sound so scratchy i sent you a message get ahold of me if you would wanna come put a beat down with bba

[Lrattsmokah]

wtf is he only 14?

man..then its very good... i didnt know :)

[Lrattsmokah]

bro listen your lyrics is very good but you need a little more practice...

[7575asia7575]

yo r u asian

[matteit]

very good. one little problem was the microphone. i think you where a little bit to close to it. but lyrics really rock.

[stanleyyelnats69]

yo this is wack as fuck

[TolkOne1]

It sounds like your eating that mic xD! but good lyrics (y) keep it up..

[Draco4612]

You are very talented in beat and lyric building, plus your music in general is fine, but work on your singing melodies (don't take that offensively)

[alexownsall1122]

lolololololololol lmaof

[NayarTPoA]

your lyrics are cool.. its gd..

but your voice and the beat is...

is.. in a nicer way, not very nice.

[SimonVong112]

Nice song man sounds good keep it up ;)

Can u watch mi videos in return :D

[ir0ckfartz]

booo !

[Elisabetta1971]

Very heartfelt and rapped gracefully!!

Sorry if all the shit really happened to you

:(

[hambrist14]

I think you're very good!!!

[Level0crew]

u got good lyrics, ur voice cud use some deepening and slightly better beats

[YANKEEBOY114]

yeah great lyrics it'll sound even better when u have better music in the background and u learn how to rap even better but nice lyrics i never could've come up with those.

[pigman135]

the beat and lyrics were real good but ur voice isn't great no offense.

[ShaheemA13]

thx for your opinion:)

[viet925]

Ay, you can't rap no offence...

but ur lyrics are good and not pointless.

[ShaheemA13]

thx for your opinon:)

[aShuckle]

He's only 14 yo... Pretty good for a 14 year old... Think about it foo, don't be dissin' on lil' kids.

[bigjahnee]

ur voice is prety sexy man

straight up no homo

from one heterosexual guy to another heterosexual man

[Roble00]

Good song

[ShaheemA13]

thx

[temaire123]

This is the worst piece of 5hit I've ever heard. You sound like some 13 year old paki.

[asianboi64]

why doesz ur songk suck?? lol

[ShaheemA13]

thx for ur opinion

[vmaster1993]

sick rhymes man

this is varun lol

[ShaheemA13]

thx

[sujiryann]

nex time gimme tha song lyrics i'll sing it wid u.... NAWTTTTTT

mayb lemme think NOOO

[tarzain]

dude, the lyrics and music are bad ass, you got a lot of talent, keep it up!

[ShaheemA13]

thx!

[tarun351]

yea i give respect to shaheem, those rhymes got heart and meaning to it.

I still dont get why you people hatin, this guy raps for what happened to him and you guys disrespect, like i dont get it, dont you guys understand what he might be goin through. You guys are prolly just sayin shit cuz u guys jealous of his talent. Cuz y'all rap for some dope reason just so you can act cool in front of yo homies and try and get girls. He's not dissin you so dont say shit to him

[karelgi]

wen u go thru puberty u will b better

[spawrtan117]

To all the bastards who posted hate comments, fuck you. If you actually listened and understood the song correctly, you'd know that he is going through a tragedy.

This rap/song is actually rather good. Although the singining can be improved, the words are phenomenal. Anyways shaheem you did a fantastic job so I subscribed.

[spawrtan117]

As for the sorrow and depression you're going through, all I can say is to always look on the bright side, and PLEASE, don't fall in the bad direction. I know many teens whose parents have died, and most of the time they end up being criminals, druggies, murderers, etc.

DON'T END UP LIKE THAT! You're only 14, you're future is not ruined!

[DJTralam]

i will ask you the same question "why did i do this" this = this song...

im a musician so i understand how hard it is to make a song but this is just bad...i discourage you from rapping in another song...please get your braces removed before u try to rap..

nice try

[bacteriadoesntwork]

I am not a fan of rap but you did a great job... the lyrics are great!

[ShaheemA13]

thank you!:)

[Tupac876]

you suck .. stop rapping .. u wanna be rapper ... you'll never be a rapper LMFAO!

[Cartrice]

too bad!

yes we can =)

[Mayous505]

SICKKK song shaheem, keep up the awsome work :)

and post the lyrics !

[ShaheemA13]

LOL thank you again mays!:) and alright ill post them tomorow

[Cartrice]

and sailor moon ......

HAHAHAHAHAAAA

[Cartrice]

LOOOOOL ya i have one shaheem

i gotta watch all my B5 videos you know !

[ShaheemA13]

LOL thats true:P:)

[udushbag]

yo dude nice song it pretty cool u should just fix the bak ground so u cant here u breathing so much and ill be a sik ass song

[ShaheemA13]

thx and yea it was the mic and it would take a lot of time and concentration for me to get rid of all those little things using the program i use

[10kingdavid10]

yea man like u might not belive but that was a 5 dalla mic there is simple ghetto things u can do to fix shittynis like a sock and put it over u will hear it clear

[ShaheemA13]

LOL seriously?? thats sick haha ill try it for my next song

[10kingdavid10]

nice man chek mine man i made a remix to my like bye the game n lil wayne its called My life (remix

[ShaheemA13]

thx and yea i heard urs, its not bad:)

[NickRayo]

lol nice song shaheem

[ShaheemA13]

thx!

[Cartrice]

PROPS MAN :)

[ShaheemA13]

lol thank you...lol but i never knew u had a youtube acct cartrice?!?!?!

[ArslanProduction]

sick ass song

just get a better mic mang...itll be way better

[ShaheemA13]

thx and yea i know but oh well:)