The Family Man - A2 Moving Image Arts Coursework Piece - Havering Sixth Form College

[Hanzibarrrrr]

omg, that guy is mean!

do they understand this is just coursework? lmao!

i think its good dw :)

[Thesurus05]

I think it's a lot better than some of the amateurish and lackadaisical attempts by other Media and Film students. You clearly strived to produce this and your endeavours are required for a career in the field of Film Production. Good effort. :)

[TotallyAwesomeSkits]

@Thesurus05 Thanks for the kind words, means a lot! :)

[Thesurus05]

@TotallyAwesomeSkits No problem. But I would take some suggestions into account if you want to achieve top marks. :)

[TotallyAwesomeSkits]

@Thesurus05 Will be ;) This was a first draft, got some pickups over the week and just need to re edit it together. Should re-upload the final piece in January :-)

[TheHighTechCompany]

Im sorry but here is the truth, The video is fucking poor, It is an absolute waste of my life and yours to spent making it, your colour correction doesnt exist, the visual effects are so shit to the point they fill me with anger as you cleary put zero effort in it, Your lack of continuity editing makes me suicidal, The voice acting looks so forced,Why did you render in such a poor quality, I wouldnt even put this up its an embarrassment to yourself

[TotallyAwesomeSkits]

@TheHighTechCompany Sorry to hear you thought it was so crap. Any areas you could specify on? Going to be re-doing some scenes next week, so Constructive Criticism is useful :)

[TheHighTechCompany]

@TotallyAwesomeSkits Yes i do, colour grade your work, it will be far more professional. second if possible add a 2:35:1 anamorphic crop ratio, this is what most current movies work with. Now for your effects the blood splatter was just plain awful, I suggest finding another blood splatter and make sure timing is correct, the muzzle flash is too small and looks fake, add a Gaussian blur and increase brightness on one of the gunshot layer. you could also try a vignette to increase tension.

[TotallyAwesomeSkits]

@TheHighTechCompany The work will be colour graded when I re-edit after the holidays, definately wanted to sort out colour correction as I didn't do it on my first draft as you've seen. You say the muzzle flash is too small, yet when it is bigger it looks worse, so that is why I opted for smaller in the end :) Thanks for your suggestions, will be making sure I take them into account when I re-edit after Christmas!

[PieHoleRepublic]

@TheHighTechCompany What a fucking nob head.

[mjelf15]

What a pile of shit...

[TotallyAwesomeSkits]

@mjelf15 Like your comment ;) Constructive Criticism is welcome, as I can actually improve from that.