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  • how do i find the next chapter? or can you put it on youtube please? xxxxxxx

  • awwww man it feels like a year has passed and i have been waiting for the next chapter...... i just wish you would write again i have reread this story like 7 or 8 times i lost count bring it back pweazeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :(

  • Hey so I know you probably won't see this but could you post a direct link to the next chapter? I'm kind of a new reader and TOTALLY got hooked! I've read the entire series in like 3 or 4 days! I looked on that whole JBFFA thing but it's confusing the heck out of me and I can't find the next chapter! I'd appreciate it so much! Thank you! Unbelievable story by the way!

  • PLEASE TELL ME WHEREYOU ARE POSTING THIS AT

  • I just finished reading if we kiss and UL and I can't wait until you post new chapters at JBFFA.

  • PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ POST SOON IM DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED!!!!!!!!!!!

  • (part 2) instead of summer.. i really want to summer back with nick and have a great big reunion... i know this is just a story but im crying for nick (on the inside) and i really want him to be better and to have his summer back... pweeeaaasseee??? cause it would make me smile! =] <3 love the story!! hahhaha

  • HEY!!! i just wanted to let you know that im a new reader! i have just finished both seasons (at least so far in this one) of your story and i wanted to let you know that i LOVE it!!!! i hope you post more soon! and i hope that summer gets smart and leaves when alex isnt there! i mean.. if drew cares about her so much, he should escape with her and give the cops all the details about alex and where he is so that when he comes home next, there is a bunch of cops waiting inside for him...

  • Why did you stop writing?!!?! Write please!

  • so. i love this story, and have been reading it the past 3 day. it like all i do all day, and i noticed, you stop uploading new chapters here. i was wondering if you were gonna finish it, cuz i really love it

  • Cliff hanger? Grrrrrrr

  • when are you going to upload again?

  • @WhatDidIDo2YourHear7 You see, I sotpped writing on YouTube. But I did start on JBFFA and chapter 4 is up there (it's also IWK, and it'll get to UL soonly) :)

  • wuhts JBFFA?

    nd can we find dis story continued there?

  • Please Please post the next parts soon. I know you've moved and I'll totally follow you if you post the next parts. I'm dying to know what happens next

  • Youre STILL on writers block?

    its been 6 months..

  • Just curious, I saw a comment 3 months ago asking you if you stopped and you said not, but I was wondering if you'd changed your mind since it's been 3 months since that comment and 3 months since your last post. I really enjoy your series and I don't want it to end. I've been reading it for the past 2 or 3 days to catch up to the end, so that's why you haven't seen many comments from me, but I just want to let you know I really do enjoy your writing.

  • ummmm...dont mean to sound rude or anything but ive gone through many writers blocks and they never take this long im pretty sure if u wanted to write again you could and if u still have trouble y dont u reread ur story it helped me

    we all love your story to death and we just want it back

  • Plz make another one!!!!!

  • Please post more soon its been three months :(

  • whats the song in the video??? i love it!!!

  • When are you gunna post another one?! I'm going crazy! I need another one! :)

  • PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write untitiled longing!

  • ...so. I just spent the last two days catching up. When are you gonna post?!?!!

  • dude i love you series i spet 2 days catching up!! you cant leave it like this please post, or I -speak for all of us- will die!

  • Okay, if you dont write an episode of this I will. TT--TT no joke. I am starting to write it now..

    Drew raised his arm slowley, I could feel the betrayal in his eye's, like he was hurting me. I mouth one more time 'do it' his hand comes across my cheek in a fast motion, I let out a quick sweel and callaps on the ground. Alex looks pleased and pats Drew on the back, I nod and start to get up.. something stops me.. Alex dropped his phone...

  • I LOOVE your series!! I hope you get over your writes block soon!! xxx

  • did you stop writing or are you just taking a break?

  • Just taking a break due to writers block...

  • how long are u gonna take a break dont get me wrong u deserve a break for creating such masterpeice just wondering thats why

  • AWSOME I WAS LIKE ABOUT TO CRY WHEN I NOTICED THAT U DIDNT POST ANYMORE YET I HAVE BEEN READING THIS LOOKING FOR THE (SUMMER AND NICK) TO BE BACK TOGETHER BUT IT DIDNT HAPPEN I CNT WAIT FORTHAT EPISODE OF THEM FINDING EACHOTHER PLLLZZ POST NEXT ONE sOON

  • Awesome! I keep reading this chapter because I love this series!

  • Plz post more plz plz plz

  • pleasee write moree. please pleasee. ik how it feels to have a writers blockk but im like dyingg.

  • i love ur stories and im sorry for what i said i was being a jerk so if i knew u i would let u punch me in the face a thousand times and i had no rigt to say what i did even tho u probably dont want to read any of this...i really am sorry

  • wow way to leave us hanging! haha : )

    great cliffy!

  • AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! i am absolutely in love with you. & your writing. your fabulous :)

    really, take your time. i'm sure it will be worth the wait.

    keep being amazing!

  • When is the next one?!?!?

  • AMAZING! please hurry and write the next one! it was great!

  • OMG!!! Write more. Post more. Yeah, I think that's it. COME ON!!

  • OMG! hurry and write the next one PLZ! ur stories r amazin!

  • can i kill alex with my imaginary shotgun? plz noone would miss him. he'd be all over the walls and the ceiling.

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  • You know. Actually, I'm in NY on a surprise trip because my grandfather is in the hospital, and is probably going to die.

    Merry Christmas to you, too.

  • i didnt mean thats to be like a nasty comment and im sorry to hear about ur grandfather i lost my grandmother last year and can understand how u feel so im sorry and i'll pray for ur granfather i hope u have a merry christmas

  • Wow... what is wrong with you?

    I bet that's REALLY going to encoarge her to post..

    Leave the girl alone.

    I'm sure she has her reasons.

    I'm a writer too, and the one thing that gets me going is when people complain about me not posting enough.

    I'm sure she has other things going on in her life.

    She can't write and post 24/7.

  • i know im a writer too. i understand that and ive apologized to her and i know it sucks when readers complain and i slapped myslelf in the face for being such a self centered jerk. i guess i was just having a bad day

  • please, please post more!! this is sooo good!! you're an amazing writer

  • oh my fucking gosh this is AMAZING!!!!! keep up the good work:)

  • OMG

    i hate alex

    post soon

  • omg thats amazing post soon please I hate waiting!!!!!

  • ahh thanks god i finally catch up with this story...

    try to post as soon as you ca please! :/

    it must suck to have a writer block, but you are amazing, and i agree with acoustichearts94 , i think you´re probably over analyzing your writing :)

    love this story!!

    <3

  • great chapter, now do you wanna post again?? =] <33

  • I like it... and she trusts him so he better do it or they all in trouble... it's kinda more real... if that makes sense which it probs doesn't... but Drew would get found out and he;d have to do the little things to make Alexd believe his loyalty.... I'm just glad he didn't ask anything else.... or do anything else... it's great :)

  • I've had writer's block and it sucks :( i'm sorry!! you take all the time you need to!! loved it, pmsp if you can!!

  • omgg. you are such a good writer. yourr soooo good. subscribe to my page pleasee. im new and need subscribersss. no videos but i will have them soooon. thankss. -Jamiee <33

  • WOW!! awesome

    i understand ur writers block too (not really hav no expericence lol) but really its k u cant post alot as long as u POST lol

    AWESOME CHAPTER!!

  • Em dont feel like you have to make us happy, because if you push to get it out...it was be as good as if you were inspired to write it (:

    but i think Drew should hit her because its true she wouldnt survive Alex with Drew and if Drew doesnt hit her Alex will get rid of him.

    Loveyoux.

  • oommgg. i understand you have writers block. but honestly, you're such a good writer there's no way anything you write could turn out badly. there's so much going on in your story you can go any way with it! just try to write some more. please? i loove your story and it's so sad that you cant post as often. you're probably over analyzing your writing. this chapter was AMAZING. just keep writing, and posting. i promise, it'll turn out great. :))
  • I HATEE ALEX

    thanks for posting :)

  • Ii dont like it (I LOVE IT)moreeee it think this is the best chapter yet just because i could really put myself inside the story and could totally imagine them doing so

  • just hit her! it will be over in a millisecond and alex will be satisfied................ then they can go back to trying to get her out!!!!!!!! OMG I MISS THIS STORY lol

  • OOOOOHHHHHHH MMMMMMMYYYYYYY GGGGGGGOOOOOOODDDDDD!!!!!!! I cant believe he's gonna hit her! This is crazy!!!!!!!!

  • I completely understand. I'm a writer myself and sometimes, it's so hard to think of something and you feel that if you force something out, it'll suck. But this was good. Take your time :]

  • omgggggg! asgsdgsdsdfs

  • whoa...dang,,,,well this chapter basically proves you don;t have writer's block anymore ;P

  • Soo good! Post please!

  • OMG I LOVE IT PLEASE POST MORE

  • OMG OMG OMG!!!!! IVE MISSED U SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OO SOOOOOOOO SOO SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!! IM SO GLAD UR BACK I DNT EVEN CARE THT THIS IS SHORT IM JUST GLAD UR BACK!!!!!!11:):):):):):):):):) love the chapter as always hope u get back on track:)

  • thank you so much for posting,i was going insane without this story lol,amazing chapter btw

  • so glad you posted again :)

    he can't hit her :(

  • ohhhh sh****t he going to hit her

  • oh god,NOOOOO!

  • oh my god.

  • It seems like it's been forever since you've posted, but it's really only been like a month or two. haha. But I'm really glad you are able to start writing again. You need to stop feeling guilty. If someone wants to read your story so much, they can wait. I'm proud to say I stuck with you (and still am sticking with you) through all of this. Let's just hope the writer's block is gone now =) haha I loved this though! I still hate Alex as much as I hated him before...

  • OMG I'M SO GLAD YOU POSTED!!! BEEN WAITING FOREVER!!! Why would Summer want Drew to hit her? I'd at least try and duck or something.....I dunno. Anyway, great chapter.

  • :| OMG whatta biiiiiiiiiitch

    please post soon i've been waiting forever :)

  • awesome!

  • yea...you're back i wish i had the time to post......ugh! but i dnt. band takes up SO much time. anywhoo i cnt believe Alex his such a jerk. Hey ppl you reads this story you should check out mine and my friends( i made a support vid for her(THNKS))

  • I'm glad you posted :D and :( poor Drew and Summer

  • ohh no!

  • Yeah, this is completely the best series I've found on youtube. Love it, :D

  • Ahh. So worth the freaking wait!!!!!! LOVE YOU :D

    Alex can go burn in hell, Drew should punch him out, so bad it takes hours for him to wake up, and they escape!! yeaaah

  • I need Santa to come and run Alex over with all his Reindeer and his slay many times (Even though i don't believe in him)

  • Sooo good!!! Ya know it might help structure a better storyline if you brought summer and joy to safety. They've been away so long that I miss the Nick/summer interaction! You could start a whole new story once they get her back.

  • yay you posted!!!!!!! hopefully you recover from your writers block i haven't! please post more as soon as you can no rush just take it slow. :)

  • OMG OMG OMG OMG YOU POSTED!!!!!!!!!

    ahhhhhhhhhhhhh i still want to hurt alex!!!!!

    loved itt!!!

  • YAY! SO GOOD! Keep going! It's awesome!

  • HOLY CRAP!!!... omg... poor drew and summer... plz post again soon.. so glad this was up

  • You're back!! :) great chapter!

  • Yay ur back!!!!

    And o dang.... Don't do it drew!!!! But seriously I thot he was gonna make him rape her...thank goodness tht wasn't it!!!

  • Holy shit i love you woman!!!! I dont care how long this took it rocked!

  • oh my god!!! alex go die in helll!!

  • Thank you for posting.

    Drew is going to have much difficulty with this task since he loves Summer. I'm just hoping he'll do it for both of their sakes.

    Awesome chapter.

  • YAY YAY YAY YOU POSTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm happy :D

    Alex should go jump off a high building and die a slow and painful death >:)

    at least alex didn't make him rape her cuz that's what i thought he was gonna do as soon as i read drew was going to be there too.......

    i can't wait for the next episode

  • PLEASE POST MORE SOON!!!!! :D

  • iuDFVE9G8R0WIQPOWDJFHBGTR

    YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA­AAAAAAAAAYYYYYY

    YOU POSTEDDDDDD

    YAAAAAAAAAAY

    <333333333333333333333

  • omg! awesome chapter!!

  • (jaw drops) omj are u serious aww but its writers block... loved it

  • i missed your story!!!

    great chapter and icant wait for the next one :)

  • wow...that was intense....thank you so so so so so so so so much for posting! I am so addicted to your stories.....please post soon :D

  • whoo-hoo!!!!! you're back!!!!! YES!!! sweet episode! cant wait to see the next one! plz post again soon!!!!!

  • omg im freaking out right now!!

    please please please please post more!!

  • Omg. Poor drew! Poor summer. She's brave.

  • omg alex is so gay. if drew does it i will be so mad. i mean who side is he on anyways

  • I haven't read this episode yet because I just want to say that I FREAKED out when I saw in my youtube page that you post...!

    everytime you post a episode I am so EXCITED and now more because you didn't post in a long time.....

    SOOOO HAPPY you got over your wirter block....!

  • thanx soo much for posting! i hope your writers block is done soon cause i miss this story A LOT! hope you can post soon!

  • OH SHIT. i've missed this story SO much. i hate alex as much as a person can hate a fictional character. post soon!

  • it was soo good i miss this story soo much its like honestly the only story that i comment on and if u just post ANYTHING im sure itll b an awesome chapter just like this one i miss it soo much please post again please please please! -cute little puppy dog faceish thing- pleeeeease ps i think its rly lame that im only the 37th comment just sayin COMMENT PEOPLE this stufffff is awesome!

    <3s yaa

  • wow im so happy ur kinda half way back i made up like three different endings to the last chapter just to keep me guessing lol i do stuff like that a lot

  • YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY YOU'RE BACK! awesome chapter! post asap!

  • wow!!!

    That was awesome!

    I hope Drew doesnt :O

    Im happy your back!

    5 second dance party! :) x

  • YAY.!!! your back.!

    i loved this chapter..

    i think Drew should hit Summer because then it would make it look like he's still loyal to Alex..

    did i mention Alex us a fucking turd.!!

    i hate him..

    loved iitt..

    post more please ;)

  • I'm too astonished to leave a comment. I hate Alex.

  • Grr Alex!!! Drew shouldn't hit her because he's supposed to be the good guy but then again Summer and Drew would be in big trouuuble.

    Thanks for posting!!!! I'm very happy that you did!!

  • oh my god..

    post more soon please !!! (:

  • Yay! I'm so happy you're back... and WOW! Drammaaa! I love this story soo muchh!! I went back and read the beginng of "If we Kiss" up to the last episode you posted (Beside this one) like twice!

  • What??? Drew can't hit her!

    Awesome that you are writing again!!

    Loved the chapter! =)

  • yayyy your back lol

  • Hello there !! :D

    I am soo ecstatic that you're back!

    Anyway,

    this chapter is boss.

    :]

    Drew shouldn't hit her, he should turn around & beat the shit out of Alex.

    Just sayin' ...

    Amazing chapter.

    P.s. I'M HAPPY THIS WAS POSTED :D ♥

  • oh wow. pleas post more sooon!!! LOVELOVELOVE this chapter btw!

  • DREW DONT YOU DARE !!! Poor Joy and Summer

  • Atleast its an amazing chapter :)

    you had writers swine lol

  • Yessssss ur finally back :) Woah this chapter is intense.

  • YAY! You're back!

    I love this chapter!

    I hate Alex so fucking much.

    I'm torn on whether Drew should do it or not :/

  • OMG! post soon!!! please!

  • woot woot!

  • ohh drama =] glad you posted=] cant wait for the nextt =]

  • Nice to see you posting but you don't have to make us happy. You write when you feel it's right, don't force it just because some people are asking you to.

    Okay, story. I really really hope, for the sake of their lives, that Drew hits her.

    She can survive that; Alex has done much worse to her.

    I'm hoping Drew's love for her doesn't get in the way with doing what's right. Do it drew, doooo it!

    Can't wait to see what happens but take your time. :)

    Love you!! <3

  • Welcome back:) !!!

    I know this sounds bad but I hope he hits her. For both their sakes!!

  • omg...intense

  • I'm sorry but for the sake of their lives a slap isn't the wrost of things.

  • He has to HIT HER?! WHAT THE FREAK?! This is so messed up. I can't believe this.

  • i just screamed out loud. we've missed you on this tube of you ;)

  • thank you for posting! ^_^

    loooooved it ;)

    eeppp im torn between letting Drew do it so that everyone wont die (lol) and Drew actually hurting Summer! =S

    hope you get back into the swing of things soon! lol <3

  • lovedd itt :)

  • OMG I have been waiting on the chapter!! Will Drew do it!?

  • Ooommmgggg! seriously?! nooo!

    ahaaa. planning on posting more? ^.^

  • Welcome back, sweetie :)

    Don't get me wrong.. but I hope Drew hits her. Summer will survive a punch but I'm not sure she can survive Alex without Drew, you know?

    Yep.

    Loooove you! :)

  • Yippieeh you posted :) !!

    Great chap. Hope you post soon !! :)

  • omggg,

    he wontt do it will he?

    or he will feel so sorry and get summer out some howw!!

  • yay! i actually subbed when u had writers block! xD

  • Wow! I was so excited to see you posted! I missed your story so much! So glad you're back. Can't wait to see what happens!

  • YIHAAA I AM HAPPY YOU POSTED!!!

  • wow.. this is an hard situation.. the best way to get out of it would be nick slamming the door with a SWAT team..

    but BECAUSE it can't be so easy, i say he hit her in a fake way, and summer plays along...

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