Short films confuse me so much! Why didn't she say anything when he said "come back tomorrow?" Wouldn't someone normal react to that? And what about when she sees him at the grocery store? She just kind of looks at him and then looks away. Oookay...? Awkward? I don't know. I guess I shouldn't criticize when I didn't go to a film school.
He puts his glasses on twice, your script supervisor, or production designer, or even prop master should have caught that, and the acting is over the top...but other than that its a good script, debt collector has no real skills.
Continuity error at 03:01
overall the film was quit good
matyagriffioen 2 years ago
Short films confuse me so much! Why didn't she say anything when he said "come back tomorrow?" Wouldn't someone normal react to that? And what about when she sees him at the grocery store? She just kind of looks at him and then looks away. Oookay...? Awkward? I don't know. I guess I shouldn't criticize when I didn't go to a film school.
MagikMazk 3 years ago
He puts his glasses on twice, your script supervisor, or production designer, or even prop master should have caught that, and the acting is over the top...but other than that its a good script, debt collector has no real skills.
MADEDITOR05 3 years ago
it's great movie.
I'm going to join NYFA 4 weeks digital film making in Budapest. I hope I can do what you have done.
thank's..
Kaosputihbanggo 3 years ago
that was really good, lol i used to do some acting in new york... i don't even live in the state now... too bad i could've looked u guys up
squigglzzz59 3 years ago